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[Monica]

Generally slaves were treat as animals or machines by their masters.However some slaves were treat better then others depending on their behavior and also the slaves owner humanity.For instance Federick Douglass was a smart slave who always follows the rules untill he was understood that he was being dehumanaze by his maters.Clearly he works for his freedom patiently.In conclusion he accompliesh his goal and serve as an exmaple to others slaves.

[Justine]

Nice use of vocabulary, and great use of transitional words! One thing you want to be careful about in your next writing is this: when you are using a passive verb or an adjective, remember to have the -ed ending. For example:

" However some slaves were treateED better than others"
" he was being dehumanizED by his master."

Also check your spelling - you have fabulous ideas, and we don't want those little mechanical errors to get in the way of showcasing all that you know!