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message 201: by [deleted user] (new)

UGH!!!!! For the last time, I didn't know that was spamming!!!! I thought it was advertising!!!!!


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Hannah wrote: "UGH!!!!! For the last time, I didn't know that was spamming!!!! I thought it was advertising!!!!!"

We're just telling you so you don't get in trouble for it later. There's a thread where you can recommend groups and stuff, so you can post that there and it won't be spamming.


message 203: by Isaac (new)

Isaac | 8014 comments Annana Flambe du Mort (Erica) wrote: "I'M HYPER TOO!"

I LOVE BEING HYPER!!!


message 204: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Forgotten One's last line

"That Devils's spawn you're looking for, he's here. It's me I'm Zavier's son."


message 205: by Isaac (new)

Isaac | 8014 comments Zavier is an awesomesauce name.


message 206: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"I am a pie."
Idk what book, it just sounded cool.


message 207: by Krys (new)

Krys (krisslee) | 5015 comments Mod
"And it's impossible to look back. So I just keep going forward."

Mm. I want to use this one one day.


message 208: by Isaac (new)

Isaac | 8014 comments Alice Adelaide (Lavendarlol) wrote: ""I am a pie."
Idk what book, it just sounded cool."


I SO LURVE THAT!!!
I'm making a stupid mock book off of Twilight... mind if I use that at the end?


message 209: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
HAHA! Go right ahead. Glad to see my physco brain is appreciated.


message 210: by Isaac (new)

Isaac | 8014 comments Any psycho is appreciated in my mind.


message 211: by Ellen (last edited Jun 17, 2010 04:06AM) (new)

Ellen (ellenpenleysmith) I have NO idea what the last line for Shilah is going to be. Which kind of scares me because I've ALWAYS had a twinkling of an idea of where my stories begin and end and slight ideas for the middle.

But Shilah scares me.

Which is why I'm so anxious to write it!!

Do you ever get that? When you don't know WHAT'S going on in your story so it brings, like, little butterflies into your stomach and you're anxious to write it- no matter how crappy you think the writing is- just to see where it's going to end?


message 212: by Isaac (new)

Isaac | 8014 comments Yes.
But I know it is crap.
So I don't anticipate it as much.


message 213: by [deleted user] (new)

This is the last line in the prologue for a new story of mine. =]

But the earth was still scarred.


message 214: by Isaac (new)

Isaac | 8014 comments Lurve it, Maxy!


message 215: by Ellen (new)

Ellen (ellenpenleysmith) I have the last line for the chapter before the last chapter :D

"Warriors of Halicante, put your weapons down! The war is over!"

Something extremely close to that.


message 216: by Everett (CupoJoe) (new)

Everett (CupoJoe) M. (cupojoe) | 66 comments "If I shall go now, you will come to hell as well"


message 217: by [deleted user] (new)

"She died in his arms, with his name on her lips."
from a story that i really liked but have lately abandoned out of lack of inspiration


message 218: by Jules (new)

Jules (fiddlebug13) | 77 comments I love/hate endings that suggest different things or sound creepy...something like, "The air around her filled with Kyprioth's rich, merry chuckle."

Well, that's from Trickster's Choice, but that's not a very good example...I mean like when it says, "He smiled evilly and then vanished." Or something. Know what I mean?


message 219: by Jules (new)

Jules (fiddlebug13) | 77 comments Catherine wrote: "She died in his arms, with his name on her lips."
from a story that i really liked but have lately abandoned out of lack of inspiration


That sounds cool! Wish you had more inspiration...is that story on Goodreads? Did you post it?


message 220: by [deleted user] (last edited Aug 18, 2010 06:38PM) (new)

This is from a short story... thing--and by "short", I mean "less than 1000 words"--I did for the Musical Emotion Exercise... thing:

I snuggle more deeply into my blanket and let the longing overtake me.

((Here's the link *hint hint*: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...))


message 221: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Ok can we-" Jessa started
"No, I will NOT allow you to scar this place with a Mac store or something." Cade interupted
"And ruin the medieval vibe? Never." Jessa smirked taking his hand and wrapping it around her waist.
((or something. I just made that one up...))


message 222: by Krys (new)

Krys (krisslee) | 5015 comments Mod
"His eyes where fixed on the sky, just as breathtakingly beautiful as they always where-- they where distant, trained upon on the shattered heavens. His fingers curled into the soft soil, knotted grass within his grasp.

"Isn't it beautiful?" He asked softly.

And she knew she'd lost him."

-Weird idea I had, but I don't know what story I'd use it for though, although I'm thinking it could possibly fit the end for Of the Fallen.


message 223: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
I love that.


message 224: by [deleted user] (new)

"She was the rain runner, forever running in circles."

-The Rain Runner, which I have no plot for as of now.


Maria [the clockwork creeps on useless lives] (mariachhile) | 8772 comments Mod
I felt myself being tugged and pulled into wherever could possibly lay next.


Jordan, The Picture Magician (aka Probie) (thepicturemagicianakaprobie) | 2218 comments Possible ending for Flares:

"The two reached the elevators in silence. After all that had happened that evening, after the crisis that the two had just avoided, they were both extremely shaken up. Suddenly, Oliver turned to Samantha.
"Can I get you a drink?""


Yeah, I know, it sucks. It needs work.


Maria [the clockwork creeps on useless lives] (mariachhile) | 8772 comments Mod
Possible ending for... er... 56000 and still unnamed:

Have I gone crazy? Insane?
Somewhere in the back of my head a voice laughed, "Yes, my dear. Yes you have."


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Krys (krisslee) | 5015 comments Mod
And he couldn't hold on any longer.

I'm thinking something like that could be the ending for my to-be NaNo, Lion and Lamb.


message 229: by Krys (new)

Krys (krisslee) | 5015 comments Mod
"You have no idea, meus venustus agna."

Meus venustus agna means, roughly in Latin, "My lovely lamb"


message 230: by Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader. (new)

Brigid ✩ | 11973 comments Mod
Last line from Jump. Woohoooo.

“My name is Maxwell Collins,” I said. “Will you join me?”

XD


message 231: by [deleted user] (last edited Aug 22, 2010 10:12PM) (new)

Last line from From Brooks to Oceans:

"Taylor, you're going to take the world by storm, and I'll be up here in heaven(hopefully not hell) watching you. You may not believe it yourself, but I do, and I always will.
Love forever and always,
Brooke <3"


Jordan, The Picture Magician (aka Probie) (thepicturemagicianakaprobie) | 2218 comments Wow Cara. I'm totally gonna read that now.


message 233: by Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader. (new)

Brigid ✩ | 11973 comments Mod
Ooh. Cool.


Maria [the clockwork creeps on useless lives] (mariachhile) | 8772 comments Mod
Aw that's so cool!


message 235: by [deleted user] (new)

I have it up on goodreads here. You might want to forget about that line though because it's a huge spoiler XD


Jordan, The Picture Magician (aka Probie) (thepicturemagicianakaprobie) | 2218 comments Wow, Cara, that was AWESOME!


message 237: by [deleted user] (new)

Aw thanks :)


Jordan, The Picture Magician (aka Probie) (thepicturemagicianakaprobie) | 2218 comments Your wecome. I am definetly following this.


message 239: by [deleted user] (new)

Sweeeeet. I have the third and fourth chapter written but they're unedited XP


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