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Jun 12, 2010 10:11PM
UGH!!!!! For the last time, I didn't know that was spamming!!!! I thought it was advertising!!!!!
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Hannah wrote: "UGH!!!!! For the last time, I didn't know that was spamming!!!! I thought it was advertising!!!!!"
We're just telling you so you don't get in trouble for it later. There's a thread where you can recommend groups and stuff, so you can post that there and it won't be spamming.
We're just telling you so you don't get in trouble for it later. There's a thread where you can recommend groups and stuff, so you can post that there and it won't be spamming.

"That Devils's spawn you're looking for, he's here. It's me I'm Zavier's son."
"And it's impossible to look back. So I just keep going forward."
Mm. I want to use this one one day.
Mm. I want to use this one one day.

Idk what book, it just sounded cool."
I SO LURVE THAT!!!
I'm making a stupid mock book off of Twilight... mind if I use that at the end?

But Shilah scares me.
Which is why I'm so anxious to write it!!
Do you ever get that? When you don't know WHAT'S going on in your story so it brings, like, little butterflies into your stomach and you're anxious to write it- no matter how crappy you think the writing is- just to see where it's going to end?
This is the last line in the prologue for a new story of mine. =]
But the earth was still scarred.
But the earth was still scarred.

"Warriors of Halicante, put your weapons down! The war is over!"
Something extremely close to that.
"She died in his arms, with his name on her lips."
from a story that i really liked but have lately abandoned out of lack of inspiration
from a story that i really liked but have lately abandoned out of lack of inspiration

Well, that's from Trickster's Choice, but that's not a very good example...I mean like when it says, "He smiled evilly and then vanished." Or something. Know what I mean?

from a story that i really liked but have lately abandoned out of lack of inspiration
That sounds cool! Wish you had more inspiration...is that story on Goodreads? Did you post it?
This is from a short story... thing--and by "short", I mean "less than 1000 words"--I did for the Musical Emotion Exercise... thing:
I snuggle more deeply into my blanket and let the longing overtake me.
((Here's the link *hint hint*: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...))
I snuggle more deeply into my blanket and let the longing overtake me.
((Here's the link *hint hint*: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...))

"No, I will NOT allow you to scar this place with a Mac store or something." Cade interupted
"And ruin the medieval vibe? Never." Jessa smirked taking his hand and wrapping it around her waist.
((or something. I just made that one up...))
"His eyes where fixed on the sky, just as breathtakingly beautiful as they always where-- they where distant, trained upon on the shattered heavens. His fingers curled into the soft soil, knotted grass within his grasp.
"Isn't it beautiful?" He asked softly.
And she knew she'd lost him."
-Weird idea I had, but I don't know what story I'd use it for though, although I'm thinking it could possibly fit the end for Of the Fallen.
"Isn't it beautiful?" He asked softly.
And she knew she'd lost him."
-Weird idea I had, but I don't know what story I'd use it for though, although I'm thinking it could possibly fit the end for Of the Fallen.
"She was the rain runner, forever running in circles."
-The Rain Runner, which I have no plot for as of now.
-The Rain Runner, which I have no plot for as of now.
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Maria [the clockwork creeps on useless lives], Butts butts
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"The two reached the elevators in silence. After all that had happened that evening, after the crisis that the two had just avoided, they were both extremely shaken up. Suddenly, Oliver turned to Samantha.
"Can I get you a drink?""
Yeah, I know, it sucks. It needs work.
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Maria [the clockwork creeps on useless lives], Butts butts
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Possible ending for... er... 56000 and still unnamed:
Have I gone crazy? Insane?
Somewhere in the back of my head a voice laughed, "Yes, my dear. Yes you have."
Have I gone crazy? Insane?
Somewhere in the back of my head a voice laughed, "Yes, my dear. Yes you have."
And he couldn't hold on any longer.
I'm thinking something like that could be the ending for my to-be NaNo, Lion and Lamb.
I'm thinking something like that could be the ending for my to-be NaNo, Lion and Lamb.
"You have no idea, meus venustus agna."
Meus venustus agna means, roughly in Latin, "My lovely lamb"
Meus venustus agna means, roughly in Latin, "My lovely lamb"
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Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader.
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Last line from From Brooks to Oceans:
"Taylor, you're going to take the world by storm, and I'll be up here in heaven(hopefully not hell) watching you. You may not believe it yourself, but I do, and I always will.
Love forever and always,
Brooke <3"
"Taylor, you're going to take the world by storm, and I'll be up here in heaven(hopefully not hell) watching you. You may not believe it yourself, but I do, and I always will.
Love forever and always,
Brooke <3"
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Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader.
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Maria [the clockwork creeps on useless lives], Butts butts
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I have it up on goodreads here. You might want to forget about that line though because it's a huge spoiler XD
Sweeeeet. I have the third and fourth chapter written but they're unedited XP
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