Last Lines

[Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader.]

XD

[[deleted user]]

Life is unpredictable for many people, but not me. I knew from the very start I would twist that very doorknob in my hand right now, and leave.

[Everett (CupoJoe)]

Sella wrote: "Austin wrote: "Sella wrote: "Niki wrote: "Sella wrote: "Niki wrote: "I thought you wrote 'my face' and I was confused as to why you would call Sella your face."

Well, my nickname for Brigid is 'my..."

what are we talking about

[Everett (CupoJoe)]

here's a last line: And the flame kept burning...

[Austin]

Everett wrote: "Sella wrote: "Austin wrote: "Sella wrote: "Niki wrote: "Sella wrote: "Niki wrote: "I thought you wrote 'my face' and I was confused as to why you would call Sella your face."

Well, my nickname f..."

Hey Everett when did you become part of this, actually when did I become part of this.

[Austin]

this is a great final sentence; boom!!!!

[[deleted user]]

Everett wrote: "here's a last line: And the flame kept burning..."

that's sella's!!! I think

[Krys]

Here's the last paragraph for Two Shadows:

Her tears streaked cold lines across her cheeks, and splattered in crystalline droplets across the page she held in her hands. Drawn in black pen, was an illustration of Ash. In elegant letters below it was signed by Leroko. And Ash looked like he always had before-- beatufiul, inhuman, catlike. Only now, there was a cruel glint in his ember-orange eyes, that were drawn in fire colored ink. And what stuck out most of all, was the fact that beneath him two shadows were cast. Only now, both of them were black.

The last sentence:

Only now, both of them were black.

[Everett (CupoJoe)]

Justyn wrote: "Everett wrote: "here's a last line: And the flame kept burning..."

that's sella's!!! I think
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Oh I had know idea! I just thought of a book I read in school about a flame in a big storm.

[Everett (CupoJoe)]

Austin wrote: "Everett wrote: "Sella wrote: "Austin wrote: "Sella wrote: "Niki wrote: "Sella wrote: "Niki wrote: "I thought you wrote 'my face' and I was confused as to why you would call Sella your face."

Wel..."

[Krys]

This is actually the last three lines of my story The Art of Lies:

Gryffin Bayne accomplished something almost everyone wishes to do—he had died with a smile on his face. He had accomplished something none of the other Shades had ever dreamed of. Gryffin Bayne was born to lie, but he died telling the truth.

[Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader.]

Kriss wrote: "Here's the last paragraph for Two Shadows:

Her tears streaked cold lines across her cheeks, and splattered in crystalline droplets across the page she held in her hands. Drawn in black pen, was ..."

that is wicked awesome!
seems sad though … :(

[Krys]

♥ Brigid ♥ wrote: "Kriss wrote: "Here's the last paragraph for Two Shadows:

Her tears streaked cold lines across her cheeks, and splattered in crystalline droplets across the page she held in her hands. Drawn in bla..."

Thanks :D And the ending I have planned for that one is sad... I'm probably going to start writing that series of stories after I finish my NaNoNovel.

[[deleted user]]

I think the end of my second book will be:

He whispered, "I love you."

I know, I know, not very original and sorta boring, but i haven't even finished the first book so whatever xD

[Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader.]

Kriss wrote: "♥ Brigid ♥ wrote: "Kriss wrote: "Here's the last paragraph for Two Shadows:

Her tears streaked cold lines across her cheeks, and splattered in crystalline droplets across the page she held in he..."

haha, cool. I like sad endings. XD

[Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader.]

Cassi wrote: "I think the end of my second book will be:

He whispered, "I love you."

I know, I know, not very original and sorta boring, but i haven't even finished the first book so whatever xD"

awww <3

[Krys]

♥ Brigid ♥ wrote: "Kriss wrote: "♥ Brigid ♥ wrote: "Kriss wrote: "Here's the last paragraph for Two Shadows:

Her tears streaked cold lines across her cheeks, and splattered in crystalline droplets across the page sh..."

Indeed :P I like sad endings too.

[Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader.]

:D hehe.

[Austin]

Everett wrote: "Austin wrote: "Everett wrote: "Sella wrote: "Austin wrote: "Sella wrote: "Niki wrote: "Sella wrote: "Niki wrote: "I thought you wrote 'my face' and I was confused as to why you would call Sella you..."

This conversation Is long and drawn out.

[Krys]

This one's iffy, but here's a possible last line for Iris... it's actually more than one, but it wouldn't really make since otherwise:

"Never seen anything like you, girl. What's your name?"

She smiled into the shadow of her hood and said, very softly;

"Iris. Iris Rose."

[Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader.]

ooh! mysterious, i like it :]

[[deleted user]]

♥ Brigid ♥ wrote: "ooh! mysterious, i like it :]"

i cannot make a descision for my ending

[Krys]

Thanks :] I have two different ideas that I want the ending to be for the story, and that's the last line that goes with one of them.

[Ky]

Kriss wrote: "This one's iffy, but here's a possible last line for Iris... it's actually more than one, but it wouldn't really make since otherwise:

"Never seen anything like you, girl. What's your name?"

..."

That's awesome Kriss

[Austin]

Dream Seeker: The feather continued to drift upon the warm calm breeze.

[Krys]

Thanks Kenny :D

And awesome Austin.

[Krys]

All of these are undecided, but still:

Blood Moon: And as he walked, off in the distance he heard a single eerie sound; a lone wolf's howl.

Of The Fallen: She tilted her head back, glancing upwards towards the shadowy night embracing the fact that she was one of the fallen.

[[deleted user]]

Austin wrote: "Dream Seeker: The feather continued to drift upon the warm calm breeze.
"

Same as forest gump

[Sella]

I'm deciding if I want each last line in the three books of the Outcast trilogy to end with their title, or not. If they do, I'll have to change them up a bunch ...

Oh, and I can't decide between these two last lines for Life in D Minor:

I let myself get lost.

and

The note lingers in my mind, long after it is gone.

Both are metaphorical and, at the same time, literal ... idk.

[Krys]

I like the second one... It's somehow seems like the kind of last ending that leaves you staring at the page for five minutes thinking about it.

[[deleted user]]

2nd one

[Sella]

Kriss wrote: "I like the second one... It's somehow seems like the kind of last ending that leaves you staring at the page for five minutes thinking about it."

Haha thanks! :)

[Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader.]

Justyn wrote: "Austin wrote: "Dream Seeker: The feather continued to drift upon the warm calm breeze.
"

Same as forest gump"

lol! oh yeah!
love that movie … XD

[Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader.]

I disagree with Kriss and Justyn, actually … Sella, I like the first one better. They're both awesome but I think the first one is less of a cliché; it's intriguing and concise and grabs my attention more. The second one is nice, but … I don't know. I feel like I've read books before that had last sentences like that. You know what I mean?

[[deleted user]]

♥ Brigid ♥ wrote: "I disagree with Kriss and Justyn, actually … Sella, I like the first one better. They're both awesome but I think the first one is less of a cliché; it's intriguing and concise and grabs my attenti..."

Well, I think that the 2nd one is better, since, what Kriss said, it leaves you looking at the page for like 5 to 1 minutes where the other one is just plain and it says more that theres going to be a second book. If there is a second book, go with the 1st one, and if there is not another book, go with the 2nd one. Now, that I think about it, I like the idea of another book. LOLZ

[Sella]

Why does the first one have to do with a cliffhanger for a second book? It's not literally meaning that the MC gets lost ...

[[deleted user]]

Well, I think it is more of a cliffhanger then ending

[Krys]

I actually kinda thinks it depends on what goes along with the rest of the sentence. Both of good potential.

[Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader.]

It also depends on what you're going for … whether you're going for something that's just like BOOM! DEPRESSING! or something that's more sad but still hopeful … which I guess either of them could be. But the first one seems like it's more of a stress on the depressing aspect while the second is more of a stress on the hopeful aspect. O_o Uhh … Does that make sense?

[Ellen]

I think they are both good options, but I think it depends on the sentences before that so we get what vibe you're giving. Kind of what Brigid is saying... I think?

[Krys]

♥ Brigid ♥ wrote: "It also depends on what you're going for … whether you're going for something that's just like BOOM! DEPRESSING! or something that's more sad but still hopeful … which I guess either of them could ..."

I agree.

[[deleted user]]

♥ Brigid ♥ wrote: "It also depends on what you're going for … whether you're going for something that's just like BOOM! DEPRESSING! or something that's more sad but still hopeful … which I guess either of them could ..."

Brigid, I'm writing a new story and u helped me with my last cover I was wondering if u could help me with a cover for the new book, Shadows. (the name is in process)

[[deleted user]]

Kriss wrote: "I like the second one... It's somehow seems like the kind of last ending that leaves you staring at the page for five minutes thinking about it."

I agree with Kriss. The second one leaves me thinking about it.

[Sella]

I'm choosing the second one. I think it fits way more with the theme of the story. :) Thanks for your opinions.

[Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader.]

Justyn wrote: "♥ Brigid ♥ wrote: "It also depends on what you're going for … whether you're going for something that's just like BOOM! DEPRESSING! or something that's more sad but still hopeful … which I guess ei..."

Um sure. Just tell me what you want on it and stuff :)

[Krys]

Oooh... Here's an idea for one I've got for Shadow Heart:

The body fell limply to the ground like a marionette doll with all of its strings severed, eyes dazed and staring glassily, unbelievingly upward as though she could not believe death had come. Jaz stood over her, eyes ringed-black outside of the irises. Soulless. Dead. While, all the while Ash stood a little distance away, his pale shape illuminated by the setting sun behind him. He waited, as Jasmine turned around, a strange and sharp look on her now overly-beautiful features. She stepped forward, taking his cold hand into hers. With fingers intertwined they walked into the rising night, leaving the changing world that they used to know behind them.

[Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader.]

Well, that is creepy … really good though! :D

[Krys]

Thanks :) And it's sorta supposed to be creepy-ish lol

[Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader.]

haha well then it's good ;D

[Krys]

Thanks :D