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message 401: by [deleted user] (new)

Skitt's is extremely pleased that Jack thinks she has a cool name.

"This song would be a lot nicer if the person singing it didn't sound kind of like a dying cat," she thinks.


message 402: by Dana (last edited Jan 14, 2010 09:48PM) (new)

Dana Salman ☺Marisa (Skitts☻) wrote: "Jack wrote: "Jack can't believe Kenny and Skitts are having this conversation. BTW, she thinks Skitts is a cool name. How is it connected to Marisa?"

Skitts is connected to Marisa because Marisa..."


Lol, that's cute! Oh, I hadn't noticed before, you have a button or a skittle next to your nickname. It shows up as a box when these things are posted, though.




message 403: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Third person.


message 404: by [deleted user] (new)

Jack wrote: "☺Marisa (Skitts☻) wrote: "Jack wrote: "Jack can't believe Kenny and Skitts are having this conversation. BTW, she thinks Skitts is a cool name. How is it connected to Marisa?"

Skitts is connecte..."


"It's actually a smiley face," Skitts corrects Jack, who momentarily forgot that only third-person-speak is allowed in this topic. "☺ ☻ See?"


message 405: by Dana (new)

Dana Salman Kennyninja (the ninja is silent) wrote: "Third person."
"☺Marisa (Skitts☻) wrote: "It's actually a smiley face," Skitts corrects Jack, who momentarily forgot that only third-person-speak is allowed in this topic. "☺ ☻ See?"



Oh yeah. Jack says she's sorry. And she can't see because, when they're posted up they come out as little boxes instead. And the black smiley looks like a button.




message 406: by Dana (new)

Dana Salman ☺ ☻

How'd you do that? (Jack copy pasted, and almost used the word 'I' again. Grr!)


message 407: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Kenny smiles and says to press Alt 1 for the white one and Alt 2 for the black one. She was in no way being racist.


message 408: by Hannah (new)

Hannah | 954 comments ☺ ☻ ☺ ☻ ☺ ☻

Hannah forgot what she was about to say.

☺ ☻ ☺ ☻ ☺ ☻


message 409: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Kenny is glad that Hannah also enjoys the smileys..but she is sad that her laptop doesn't have the number pad so she can't do that!


message 410: by Hannah (new)

Hannah | 954 comments Hannah doesn't have one either... She copy & pasted the smilies. :D


message 411: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Kenny laughs.


message 412: by Dana (new)

Dana Salman Kennyninja (the ninja is silent) wrote: " Kenny smiles and says to press Alt 1 for the white one and Alt 2 for the black one. She was in no way being racist."

it didn't work!! (Jack sheds an ocean of tears)





message 413: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Mandy has thought of herself in third person for two reasons-one, when she joined facebook, two, when she joined this group :)


message 414: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Jack wrote: "Kennyninja (the ninja is silent) wrote: " Kenny smiles and says to press Alt 1 for the white one and Alt 2 for the black one. She was in no way being racist."

it didn't work!! (Jack sheds an oce..."


"You have to use the number pad." Kenny says.


message 415: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ♫ Mandy ♫ wrote: "Mandy has thought of herself in third person for two reasons-one, when she joined facebook, two, when she joined this group :)"

*applause*


message 416: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments "thanks," mandy said.

Mandy feels like getting some work done, so she is sitting down at the computer on goodreads until the feeling passes. :)


message 417: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Kenny laughs hilariously.


message 418: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments mandy joins in. :)


message 419: by Dana (new)

Dana Salman Jack wishes it were that simple. her problems are always lurking just behind her shoulder (in the form of her father and those dreaded quizes!!)

Jack is using a laptop, so there is no number pad :(


message 420: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments :) Mandy is not using a laptop-and feels sorry for Jack. ;) jk.


message 421: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Jack wrote: "Jack wishes it were that simple. her problems are always lurking just behind her shoulder (in the form of her father and those dreaded quizes!!)

Jack is using a laptop, so there is no number pad :("


Kenny is also using a laptop and hasn't been able to do the smilies in what seems like ages!


message 422: by Jayda (new)

Jayda | 2761 comments Jayda is excited because she posted chapter five of Rebel and her writer's block seems to be gone for good! As of right now, anyway... Writer's block is horrible!!!


message 423: by Annemarie, hi (new)

Annemarie Carlson (annielawlz) | 3393 comments Mod
Juliet says "Yay for Jayda" Its great to get over writers block. At the moment though Juliet is beyond happy because she got autographs from the actors who play Luke, Percy, Annabeth and Grover from percy Jackso. :DDDD


message 424: by Dana (new)

Dana Salman Jack is jealous of Jayda because she gets writer's block even before she starts writing and it drives her mad!

☺☻♥♠♣♦○◘•

Kew-wel! She finally did em! (and a bunch of other stuff..)

how do you do a musical note?


message 425: by Jayda (new)

Jayda | 2761 comments Yes, it is great to get over writer's block!

Jayda wants to know why Jack gets writer's block before she starts writing? That has only happened to her once, maybe... She mostly gets it for long bouts of time in the middle of the story :(


message 426: by [deleted user] (new)

Jack wrote: "Jack is jealous of Jayda because she gets writer's block even before she starts writing and it drives her mad!

☺☻♥♠♣♦○◘•

Kew-wel! She finally did em! (and a bunch of other stuff..)

how do ..."


"Hold Alt and type 14," Maxy smiles. She feels like a rebel right now.


message 427: by Jayda (new)

Jayda | 2761 comments Jayda thinks maybe she should put that as her facebook status... that would be funny :) Baha.


message 428: by [deleted user] (new)

Skitts feels...flavorless. Like gum you've been chewing for too long. "No, that's got a nasty flavor," she says.


message 429: by RedPath (new)

RedPath | 853 comments RedPath feels really uncomfortable hearing the conversation her parents are having. It makes her anxious and she really wants to turn off her hearing (in some magical way).


message 430: by [deleted user] (new)

I'm sorry! Put on some headphones if possible. That might help.


message 431: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Kenny hopes the conversation doesn't last long..


message 432: by RedPath (new)

RedPath | 853 comments RedPath nods and goes to her room to recieve her music-playing device.


message 433: by [deleted user] (new)

Be sure to turn your music up loud, Skitts advises.


message 434: by RedPath (new)

RedPath | 853 comments RedPath is happy because it has ended, but decides to keep listening to music.


message 435: by [deleted user] (new)

Skitts thinks that's a splendid idea and is glad RedPath's parents' conversation ended.


message 436: by RedPath (new)

RedPath | 853 comments "So, what's knew with you?" RedPath asks them, her voice louder than usually due to the music.


message 437: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Kenny smiles and pretends to cover her ears. "Well, not overly much, I have final exams next week!"


message 438: by [deleted user] (new)

Skitts is going to try to write and watch NCIS at the same time...not working...poo.


message 439: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Laughter spills from Kenny's mouth just as she takes a sip of scalding hot tea.


message 440: by Dana (new)

Dana Salman This reminds Jack of the time she and her brother Yousef were drinking apple juice, then their other brother Ibrahim says "Look, a distraction!" and they both spit out their juice and laugh. It was funny.


message 441: by Dana (new)

Dana Salman Jack tells Jayda "I get writer's block before I start writing because, though I have the characters and the main idea, I don't know how to start!!" Grr, this drives her crazy (did she already mention that?)


message 442: by Jayda (new)

Jayda | 2761 comments Jayda realizes that she knows what Jack means. It only sometimes happens to her. Right now she's going between getting stuck and having amazing inspiration with Rebel because this plot is impossible to write down! She doesn't even know what's going to happen!!! It's a little stressful because she's never written a book this way x.x


message 443: by [deleted user] (new)

Skitts wants to fall asleep. But she's going ice skating later so she's really excited.


message 444: by [deleted user] (new)

Maxy is moody yet again. She thinks she has a serious case of the Winter Blahs.


message 445: by Jayda (new)

Jayda | 2761 comments Jayda doesn't feel like writing right now :( Which sucks because she really wants to, and needs to... But she just can't!


message 446: by [deleted user] (new)

Maxy feels the same way. She aknowledges Jayda with a look of sympathy.


message 447: by [deleted user] (new)

And she just spelled acknowledges wrong.


message 448: by [deleted user] (new)

☺Mallory McSkittles (Skitts) wrote: "Jack wrote: "Jack can't believe Kenny and Skitts are having this conversation. BTW, she thinks Skitts is a cool name. How is it connected to Marisa?"

Skitts is connected to Marisa because Marisa..."


Maxy came up with the name, and she is quite proud of it. Except not really, because she's in one of those moods where smiling makes her want to puke.


message 449: by [deleted user] (new)

Anna (Maxy) wrote: "Maxy is moody yet again. She thinks she has a serious case of the Winter Blahs."

Skitts is getting really concerned with her friend Maxy. She wants to know what's wrong and help if she can.


message 450: by [deleted user] (new)

Maxy is concerned about herself, too. She doesn't know why, but she has these days where one tiny thing sets her off and she's horrible for the next 24+ hours. She needs a good dose of perspective. ("Inside joke," she explains. "Look up 'Addicted to Lost' on youtube by Rhett and Link.")


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