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Jan 09, 2010 10:16AM
"Oh no!" Anna cries out. "That's horrible!" Anna hates going to bed late, and yet it happens often because she has four sisters and they're always doing something entertaining.
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Kenny laughs again. "I was on here. And for some odd reason I decided to sleep on the floor of my bedroom, it was comfortable and I fell asleep sooner than UI usually do. How odd."Kenny has three sisters, but had a friend over last night so it was more like four.
The Non-Edible Cannibal (Kenny) wrote: " Kenny laughs again. "I was on here. And for some odd reason I decided to sleep on the floor of my bedroom, it was comfortable and I fell asleep sooner than UI usually do. How odd."Kenny has t..."
Once I slept on my floor for a week.
Kenny reminds Fyopiagdt that she should be speaking in third person."Cool." She says.
The Non-Edible Cannibal (Kenny) wrote: " Kenny laughs again. "I was on here. And for some odd reason I decided to sleep on the floor of my bedroom, it was comfortable and I fell asleep sooner than UI usually do. How odd."
Kenny has t..."
Anna doesn't fall asleep on the floor, really. But it reminds her of the time she was talking to a friend and got really hyper and started spinning around, then she fell on the floor and just stayed there for thirty minutes.
Kenny has t..."
Anna doesn't fall asleep on the floor, really. But it reminds her of the time she was talking to a friend and got really hyper and started spinning around, then she fell on the floor and just stayed there for thirty minutes.
Anna (Maxy) wrote: "The Non-Edible Cannibal (Kenny) wrote: " Kenny laughs again. "I was on here. And for some odd reason I decided to sleep on the floor of my bedroom, it was comfortable and I fell asleep sooner than ..."Kenny finds that funny.
Fyopiagdt the CIA Pirate wrote: ""oops" Fyopiagdt forgets sometimes"Kenny pats her on the back. "It's okay."
The Non-Edible Cannibal (Kenny) wrote: "Anna (Maxy) wrote: "The Non-Edible Cannibal (Kenny) wrote: " Kenny laughs again. "I was on here. And for some odd reason I decided to sleep on the floor of my bedroom, it was comfortable and I fell..."
Anna finds it funny, too.
Anna finds it funny, too.
Kenny used to practice falling over, in her basement. It was not as painful as it sounds.
Anna (Maxy) wrote: "Anna used to do that too!"So did fyopiagdt!
"insane minds think alike" Fyopiagdt declares
Kenny laughs. "Glad I'm not the only one. Ou es mon casque?"
Fyopiagdt sticks her tounge out and says something in gibberish
Kenny giggles. "I was speaking in french."
The Non-Edible Cannibal (Kenny) wrote: "Kenny giggles. "I was speaking in french.""Fyopiagdt says "I don't speak french! I can't even french kiss the only think I know about french is that french fries and french toast taste yummy!"
"Well what I said was 'Where is my helmet?'."
The only french Anna knows is from French songs she sings in choir. She randomly bursts into song, though she's not sure she's spelling the words right. "Il est ne le divin enfant
Jou hais obois resonnes musettes
Il est nes le divin enfant
Chanton tous son a venement
Du puis plus de quatre mille ans
Nous le prometaint le prophetes
Du puis plus de quatre mille ans
Nous attendons cet heux re tons... Or something along those lines," she concludes.
Jou hais obois resonnes musettes
Il est nes le divin enfant
Chanton tous son a venement
Du puis plus de quatre mille ans
Nous le prometaint le prophetes
Du puis plus de quatre mille ans
Nous attendons cet heux re tons... Or something along those lines," she concludes.
"Yes," Anna replies. "He is born, the child divine."
Anna feels like posting the translation that her choir director gave her. It may not be totally accurate, but it's what they sang.
"It's something like this," she begins. "He is born, the child divine. Flutes and oboes loudly play. He is born, the child divine. Sing ye all, he is born this day. Through long ages of the past, prophets have foretold his coming. Through long ages of the past, now the time has come at last.
"And so on," Anna says. "Sorry, didn't mean to turn this into a Christmas topic." She smiles.
"It's something like this," she begins. "He is born, the child divine. Flutes and oboes loudly play. He is born, the child divine. Sing ye all, he is born this day. Through long ages of the past, prophets have foretold his coming. Through long ages of the past, now the time has come at last.
"And so on," Anna says. "Sorry, didn't mean to turn this into a Christmas topic." She smiles.
Kenny giggles. "It's all good. Usually translations are wrong, because they have to change the words sdo that they will still rhyme, but it would be fairly cose. Congrats."
Anna claps for herself, then falls asleep in the middle of the applause. She is tired, even though she got lots of sleep.
The Non-Edible Cannibal (Kenny) wrote: "Kenny giggles. "It's all good. Usually translations are wrong, because they have to change the words sdo that they will still rhyme, but it would be fairly cose. Congrats.""I hate our teachers songs that she picks
Fyopiagdt the CIA Pirate wrote: "The Non-Edible Cannibal (Kenny) wrote: "Kenny giggles. "It's all good. Usually translations are wrong, because they have to change the words sdo that they will still rhyme, but it would be fairly c...""Me too." Kenny says.
Jack had to learn a French song about a crocodile in fifth grade..stupid really.One time Jack tried to sleep, not on the floor, but without a blanket, and woke up in the middle of the night freezing but couldn't go into her room to get a blanket because the door creaked LOUDLY!
Skitts is supposed to be doing homework, but why the eff would she want to do that stupid crap?
Marisa is headbanging. To an awesome song. Hahaha. XD
Marisa is headbanging. To an awesome song. Hahaha. XD
Skitts just realized that she used her real name....she feels the need to explain that "Skitts" and "Marisa" are the same person...even though it says so in her name...
Kenny disagrees with Skitts disageeing with her.
Jack can't believe Kenny and Skitts are having this conversation. BTW, she thinks Skitts is a cool name. How is it connected to Marisa?
Who's on here? Reply Now! I need you!
Not really. Someone has to not be in school today for some reason!!!
Jayda is so excited because she's almost done with the first Mortal Instruments book! :DDD
Jack wrote: "Jack can't believe Kenny and Skitts are having this conversation. BTW, she thinks Skitts is a cool name. How is it connected to Marisa?"Kenny laughs because she was in the conversation and she still thinks it was weird. That's what she loved about it.
Jack is starting to believe every one in this group is weird, herself included, as Bookworm said in another discussion
Jack wrote: "Jack is starting to believe every one in this group is weird, herself included, as Bookworm said in another discussion"Kenny agrees wholeheartedly.
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Kenny smiles, cause that had her sad at first.
Hannah doesn't want to do her homework...
Abbee is tired. And wishes evil blonde science teacher gave less hw.
Hannah has an evil blonde science teacher, also. >_< But she's pretty nice.
Jack wrote: "Jack can't believe Kenny and Skitts are having this conversation. BTW, she thinks Skitts is a cool name. How is it connected to Marisa?"
Skitts is connected to Marisa because Marisa loves Skittles.
Skitts is connected to Marisa because Marisa loves Skittles.
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