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Kim hates snow.Its been snowing the last 2 days and today was a snow day because the whole of Kims area of england is about 5 inches deep in snow and England has run out of Salt-grit-stuff to clear the roads with so none of the roads are safe to drive on. In kims area alone there are 380 schools closed which is most of them.
Kim is happy that its a snowday just not happy about the snow.
Jayda is jealous of Kim! Here in Georgia it hardly EVER snows! And when it does it's MAYBE an inch :( Hopefully it'll stick, because it's snowing now! :D
Kim laughs at jayda's hopefullness ((is that a word))"It rarely ever snows that much in england," kim explains. "When it does its only a tiny bit and even then it melts within a few days."
this is the worst england has had it in about 10 years and kim hates it.
Jayda thinks that is a word."It rarely ever snows in Georgia, period," she says. "It did last winter, but only a little bit. It melted by the next day."
Jayda laughs and finds something humorous, but she knows that if she said it she might start a debate or something, so she will keep her lips sealed!
Jayda is excited for the snow!!! Hopefully it will stick and make the roads icy so that she won't have to do anything tomorrow!!!
Kim agrees with the last but Jayda wroteKIm has done nothing all day but go on goodreads, download the trial of photoshop and go on that and talk to Ilana on Skype!
Jayda has written and texted and read mostly all day!
Kim wrote: "Kim nods.Kim feels sorry for Jack.
She hates small kids"
Kenny really really likes small kids as long as they don't try to eat her. She's kidding. She usually likes them and being around them. But sometimes you have to draw the line.
JAYDA IS EXCITED BECAUSE SHE JUST FINISHED WRITING CHAPTER THREE OF REBEL AND SHE LOVESSSSS IT!
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Juliet is used to little kids a lot of her siblings are little so she gets used to it.
Where she is, Michigan it snows all the time and gets super cold. As a matter of fact there supposed to get like 6 inches tongiht so hopefully no school!
Kenny is used to little kids xcause her mum runs a home daycare. She laughs.
Randomly.
Anna is reeeeeeeally moody right now. She's angry because someone broke her friend's locker and stole said friend's ONE-WEEK-OLD iPod. "People are lame. Too lame for words," she says disdainfully. "Even lame doesn't cover it, and lame is one great word."
lol, I keep my iphone in my pocket of my coat.
jack is jealous of All of you, because she lives in the UAE and thus she hasn't seen snow in five years!! And it hardly ever even rains, but when it does, it's dust, sand-coated rain (how is that even possible?) Jack is also jealous because she is still not allowed an iPod (isn't fifteen old enough?! Jack has seen four-year-olds with iPods! Not fair!!)
Jack wrote: "jack is jealous of All of you, because she lives in the UAE and thus she hasn't seen snow in five years!! And it hardly ever even rains, but when it does, it's dust, sand-coated rain (how is that e..."Kenny understands only the iPod frusteration. She wasn't allowed t o have one until she was 14...which is now. And she bought it herself.
She also didn't have email until year ago.
There is far too much snow where she is!
Fyopiagdt the CIA Pirate wrote: "lol, I keep my iphone in my pocket of my coat."Kenny reminds Cia Pirate that she can't talk in first person.." hehe."
Jayda wonders if it's really weird that she just read up on different airport security methods, and enjoyed it?
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Anna agrees with Juliet. Today was crappy in the extreme, and Anna feels like collapsing on her bed and crying. Maybe she will. Or maybe she'll just get to a depressing part in her story.
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*snivels* fyopiagdt has English homework and Essays coming up!! Then tests! Why would anyone do that to Fyopiagdt!?
Anna cheered herself up. Or, rather, her character cheered her up. She loves that Joseph Everett Dixon. "Aaaaah," she sighs contendedly. And she's not sure if contendedly is a word. If not, it is now. She shall put it in the dictionary she's making with Delaney sometime in the future.
Hannah clarifies. "It's contently," she says. She doesn't have any idea how she knows that.She wants some cookies.
"Thank you," Anna says, sighing *contently* this time.
Anna wants some ice water, but she's already freezing... What to do?
Anna wants some ice water, but she's already freezing... What to do?
Hannah wrote: "Hannah clarifies. "It's contently," she says. She doesn't have any idea how she knows that.She wants some cookies."
"Actually," Kenny interrupts. "It's 'contentedly'." She is such a nerd.
Anna is happy for Jayda as well. She wishes she was in love. Then, Anna begins wondering... "With who?!" she asks, not able to contain her random outburst of excitement and awesomeness.
Anna (Maxy) wrote: "Anna cheered herself up. Or, rather, her character cheered her up. She loves that Joseph Everett Dixon. "Aaaaah," she sighs contendedly. And she's not sure if contendedly is a word. If not, it is n...""You were close." Kenny says after telling almost the exact same thing to Hannah.
Hannah disagrees. "I'm pretty sure it's contently..."
Anna looked it up, and apparently they both work. "'Contently' and 'contentedly' are both in the dictionary," she says. She is an even bigger nerd!
Kenny sighs. "All I know is that contentedly is a word."
Jayda smiles slyly at Anna specifically and laughs a little. "JACE WAYLAND!" Then she frowns. "It's problematic, though... since it seems impossible to have him..." Then she laughs again. "Oh well! It doesn't mean that I can't enjoy it, regardless!"
Hannah asks, "The dude from Mortal Instruments?"
Anna isn't sure who that is exactly... "Is he the one from the Mortal Instruments series?" she questions. She hasn't read the series.
Hannah checked out Mortal Instruments from the library, but hasn't had a chance to read it yet.
"Yes!" Jayda giggles. "I! LOVE! HIM!" :) Haha.
Jack says, "I'm a bigger nerd than all of you; in my free time, I read the dictionary, learn some new words."Jack has to go to school tomorrow. It sucks to have a different weekend than everybody else; Fridays and Saturdays instead of Saturdays and Sundays.
Hannah reads her school textbooks in her free time. That must count for some nerdiness points!
Jack wrote: "Jack says, "I'm a bigger nerd than all of you; in my free time, I read the dictionary, learn some new words."
Jack has to go to school tomorrow. It sucks to have a different weekend than everybo..."
"You have to go to school on Sundays?" Anna asks sympathetically. Anna has Saturdays and Sundays, but she goes to church on Sunday, so...
Jack has to go to school tomorrow. It sucks to have a different weekend than everybo..."
"You have to go to school on Sundays?" Anna asks sympathetically. Anna has Saturdays and Sundays, but she goes to church on Sunday, so...
Anna (Maxy) wrote: "Jack wrote: "Jack says, "I'm a bigger nerd than all of you; in my free time, I read the dictionary, learn some new words."Jack has to go to school tomorrow. It sucks to have a different weekend..."
fypiagdt says she would love to have Jack's weekend. Fyopiagdt also says that since fyopiagdt isn't Christian or Islamic, or Jewish,or Hindu, she has no obligations to a place of worship. That makes her happy :)
Anna (Maxy) wrote: "Jack wrote: "Jack says, "I'm a bigger nerd than all of you; in my free time, I read the dictionary, learn some new words."Jack has to go to school tomorrow. It sucks to have a different weekend..."
Kenny goes to church on Sunday too, but it's only about two hours of her morning.
Anna's is three hours. But she doesn't mind, except when she's reeally tired.
Anna also smiles, but her eyes are so droopy that she probably doesn't look as happy as she is.
Anna puts on an extremely cheesy grin. "Thank you."
Kenny chuckles. "That was me last night-this morning. I went to bed after two."
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Plus, she's having a LOT of inspiration right now!