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♥ Brigid ♥ wrote: "Brigid sighs … and promptly begins to bang her head against the wall. "Sella thinks that her fiance should not bang her head against the wall, because that means losing precious brain cells, and possibly will hinder Brigid from writing further WS chapters.
Jayda wrote: "Jayda wishes that she could say that it was okay, but it isn't. Kate is just pissing her off, and rubbing things in her face, and taking for granted that Jayda gave up the guy she LOVED for her and..."Sella screams. Sella wants to punch Kate!! Sella asks, "Wait, so Kate doesn't like Levi anymore? She moved onto another guy?" Sella wonders if that means that Jayda can now have Levi.
Sella gives Jayda a hug.
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Sella thinks that her fiance should not bang her head against the wall, because that means losing preciou..."
Brigid frequently loses brain cells. In fact, she thinks WS is making her lose brain cells. But on the bright side, she's written … uh … almost two more chapters? Maybe three? Brigid forgets.
DM feels sad cause everyone is ignoring her when she burst into tears
Jayda thanks Brigid, Acacia, and Sella all for the hug!Sella, Jayda will explain briefly.
"Basically what happened was that Kate still likes Levi... kind of... Okay. Let me explain better. This new guy, Brian moved into Nessa and Kate's ward/church, you know? So, Nessa started liking him and Kate admitted that she kind of liked him, but that she didn't want to because of how much conflict with Levi had already happened. Anyway, so then Kate told Nessa that she still kind of likes Levi but that she's getting bored with him. WTH! So, I basically want to scream and throw a fit and punch her because she's taking my sacrifice for granted. Plus, Levi still likes Kate. I mean, this whole thing isn't a triangle anymore. Its a freaking love OCTAGON because Nessa likes Brian, Brian likes Kate, Kate likes Brian AND Levi, Levi likes Kate (and maybe Jayda, but at this point she isn't sure) and Jayda LOVESSSS Levi. UGH!"
Jayda wonders if that explains it, at least somewhat?
Nada got lost in the love shapes, but hopes things for Jayda will get better and simpler.
RedPath is angry and frustrated. Microsoft Word has stopped letting her type, so she cannot work on her story, which desperately needs her attention. While she was trying to get it to work, RedPath cursed a couple times. Luckily they were under her breath, so no one heard her. Even RedPath is surprised at the very colorful vocabulary she has accumulated.
RedPath isn't sure whether or not to be reassured by this or not. She just pat DM's back, congratulating her on her word usage.
Jayda thanks Nada for hoping that. She hopes that, too.
Dm is mad cause her charrie is set on killing herself
Kenny missed a lot, it doesn't always show her when new things pop up. She only read a few, like the one from her friend Deleted Member. She says your welcom, because she likes to help people. She also wishes to say that she is enjoying the fourth and last book of the Twilight series. "I have made my own team," Kenny snarls. "I'm on Team Jasper/Emmet/Alice. They are SOO much better.." Kenny laughs happily.
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Acacia joins in on the "can't wait for Glee" discussion.
Kenny thinks that all the morbid writers in this group should join the "Morbidity is Sweet" group. She posts a link to go with it: http://www.goodreads.com/group/show/2...
Jayda is excited because WriYe has started, and she already has 10,000 words written! But, once you consider how many words she needs to have by the end of the year to meet her goal (608,445 words to be exact) it's a little frightening. She just keeps telling herself, "Only 1,667 words a day!"
Abbee thinks that is cool. And knows she can not write that many.
Jayda is excited! She doubts she can write that amount of words in a year, but she thinks its worth a try!
Magdelina is awed by Jayda's writing. Magdelina accomplished her goal of 300 words a day yesterday and was excited that her year was starting out well, but knows she could never write 1,667 words a day for a whole year.
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Brigid must go finish writing Walking Shadow, because it is driving her nuts.
Hannah isn't WriYe, either. At the moment she is bored because she has nothing to do, but also sad that Winter break is almost over... :[
Magdelina is extremely upset that school must start up again tomorrow, because that means she will be forced to be productive in things other than writing. Why can't writing always be the focus?
Hannah agrees, school starting would mean less time to write. And Hannah seriously needs to write another chapter, because her characters are starting to rebel.
Anna is frustrated and she's not completely sure why.
Kenny wishes school didn't start for two more weeks.
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Now Brigid has to go finish writing her book in the next two hours, or Sella will eat her. O_o
Kenny, or the Non-Edible Cannibal, thinks that Twilight is a good story. She's not obsessed, and actually was a Twi-Hater only a few months ago. All that has changed and she has no idea why she'd writing on here. Myabe it's her 'second person' that is writing for her.
Hannah thought Twilight was good, too. She just doesn't like it when people get all obsessive over it.
"I jsut saw a commercial for mighty beans! I used to play with those!" Kenny shouts enthusiastically.
The Non-Edible Cannibal (Kenny) wrote: "Kenny, or the Non-Edible Cannibal, thinks that Twilight is a good story. She's not obsessed, and actually was a Twi-Hater only a few months ago. All that has changed and she has no idea why she'd w..."Fyopiagdt was a hater :) is not anymore...but does not know...she thinks it's mostly description.
The Non-Edible Cannibal (Kenny) wrote: ""I jsut saw a commercial for mighty beans! I used to play with those!" Kenny shouts enthusiastically."Hannah used to play with them, too. They were cool. :]
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Jayda wonders if its really weird, scary, or just crazy that she has 23 New Years resolutions???
Hannah only has six resolutions... Well, technically it would be five, because the last one is, "Achieve all New Years resolutions."
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Jayda doesn't usually stop doing hers by the end of January. Most things she completes, but there are some that she stopped in about June or so xD
Anna enjoyed showing her bossy side to the eigth grade girls at Oz practice. Oh, the joys of being a high-schooler.
Jayda feels all weird and depressed right now o.O Time to go write!
Kenny is glad she is not the only girl who played with Mighty Beans.
Kim has finally come back to the third person topic!!she has been trying to catch up with Writers Who Are Children from the month break she has from it and has now got 200 topics to visit down to 40
Oh so that's where Kim has been. See, Jack's been wondering (but I guesse Jack hasn't been involved with Writers Who Are Children as much as she would like). Jack is getting rather annoyed with the kids screaming all around her. She shudders. She hates family barbecues.
Kim nods.Kim feels sorry for Jack.
She hates small kids
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Jayda thinks that this is just wayyyy too complicated and stupid. So far, being ..."
Brigid hugs Jayda, and is sorry about Kate. Hopefully things will get better. :( And yes, being a teenager does suck.