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message 201: by Annemarie, hi (new)

Annemarie Carlson (annielawlz) | 3393 comments Mod
Juliet hasn't been on the internet in two weeks, because she's half way around the world and apparently being on the interent is "disrupting family time" or somethingl like that, her mothers words. But anyways its almost midnight and no one is up. Haha Juliet feels like a rebel sneaking around, late at night.


message 202: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Kenny wants to know where Juliet is.


message 203: by Annemarie, hi (new)

Annemarie Carlson (annielawlz) | 3393 comments Mod
Oh right, France. Her grandmama lives there, all her family(mothers side) goes to France every Christmas.


message 204: by Ky (last edited Dec 26, 2009 02:45PM) (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Kenny thinks that is cool, "Did it feel like Christmas?" She only asked that because it really didn't feel like Christmas at her house.


message 205: by Annemarie, hi (new)

Annemarie Carlson (annielawlz) | 3393 comments Mod
Ummm. Thats a hard question. At some points it did, or maybe just because she was trying so hard to make it feel like Christmas. Everything was a little forced this Chritmas. But thats just Juliet's family. Get dozens of overbearing french people in a house and the Christmas spirit tends to go away.


message 206: by Daisy (new)

Daisy | 149 comments DM scolds Kenny angrily for letting Merrick rape Arabella in Pirate RP


message 207: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Kenny objects, he did it all by himself and she manmaged to write it without description of the actual; act. "It stayed PG DM," she states,sad for Arabella and hating on Merrick.


message 208: by Daisy (new)

Daisy | 149 comments Pfft, I don't give a crap about PG, me and censorship see no point in eachother unless it's for a people younger than I. I give a crap that he actually did it!


message 209: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Kenny didn't want to do this to Arabella, but she wants Merric kto be dead, and this was the most gratifying way.


message 210: by Daisy (new)

Daisy | 149 comments Ohhhh....she want's Merrick to be dead? Shift can oblige, she will use Daisies!


message 211: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Kenny also thinks it will be even more funny for Merrick to die because of daisies.


message 212: by Daisy (new)

Daisy | 149 comments Shift will make sure he knows that when he is incapacitated cause he is so sick and she stabs him with his knitting needles!


message 213: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Awesome!" Kenny shouts, "Death by knitting needles and Daisies!"


message 214: by Daisy (new)

Daisy | 149 comments it's as feminine as Shift gets :)


message 215: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Kenny also thinks that is funny.


message 216: by Daisy (new)

Daisy | 149 comments DM grins!


message 217: by Annemarie, hi (new)

Annemarie Carlson (annielawlz) | 3393 comments Mod
Huh. Juliet asks how come your username is deleted memeber?


message 218: by Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader. (new)

Brigid ✩ | 11973 comments Mod
Brigid sent her manuscript! *does a happy happy joy joy dance*


message 219: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Juliet wrote: "Huh. Juliet asks how come your username is deleted memeber?"

Kenny replies for her, "She thought it would be funny,since her picture shows up white. So she jsut changed it." she shrugged, she's ahd to explain this a few times at DM's request. Kenny doesn't mind at all.


message 220: by Daisy (new)

Daisy | 149 comments DM enjoys Kenny explaining for her very much, as she is tired, her parents went out when she specifically toldd them to pick her up, and her jolliness from Christmas, and her niceness meter have run out. She had a slumber party because it was her BFFs 13th birthday, DM hates slumber parties because she is antisocial.


message 221: by Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader. (new)

Brigid ✩ | 11973 comments Mod
Brigid should be writing … Her mc's are about to meet the devil. YAY! Then she can write the tragic ending!! woooooo :D


message 222: by RedPath (new)

RedPath | 853 comments ♥ Brigid ♥ wrote: "Brigid sent her manuscript! *does a happy happy joy joy dance*"

RedPath dances with her, for she is happy for her.



message 223: by Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader. (new)

Brigid ✩ | 11973 comments Mod
:D


message 224: by Sella (new)

Sella Malin | 3094 comments ♥ Brigid ♥ wrote: "Brigid sent her manuscript! *does a happy happy joy joy dance*"

Sella screams with happiness!


message 225: by Sella (last edited Dec 27, 2009 03:21PM) (new)

Sella Malin | 3094 comments ♥ Brigid ♥ wrote: "Brigid should be writing … Her mc's are about to meet the devil. YAY! Then she can write the tragic ending!! woooooo :D"

"Wow, really?" Sella says. "You're already there? AWESOME!" Sella can't wait until Cassandra and Jason meet the devil! And she can't wait for the tragic ending, which she knows and NO ONE ELSE BESIDES BRIGID AND SELLA KNOW IT! YAY!


message 226: by Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader. (new)

Brigid ✩ | 11973 comments Mod
Sella wrote: "♥ Brigid ♥ wrote: "Brigid sent her manuscript! *does a happy happy joy joy dance*"

Sella screams with happiness!"


Brigid covers her ears. haha.


message 227: by Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader. (new)

Brigid ✩ | 11973 comments Mod
Sella wrote: "♥ Brigid ♥ wrote: "Brigid should be writing … Her mc's are about to meet the devil. YAY! Then she can write the tragic ending!! woooooo :D"

"Wow, really?" Sella says. "You're already there? AWESOM..."


"Yup," says Brigid. She can't wait for Jason and Cassie to meet Lotu either. Bwa haha. (And Brigid knows Cassandra will throw up on her shoes for calling her Cassie, but it takes less time to type, so …) Actually … Brigid believes that one other person besides Sella and herself know the ending of Walking Shadow. And it's … Marisol? Maybe? Brigid forgets. But that's all. haha :D


message 228: by Sella (new)

Sella Malin | 3094 comments ♥ Brigid ♥ wrote: "Sella wrote: "♥ Brigid ♥ wrote: "Brigid should be writing … Her mc's are about to meet the devil. YAY! Then she can write the tragic ending!! woooooo :D"

"Wow, really?" Sella says. "You're already..."


Sella gasps. "Why does Marisol know the ending too?" she asks, puzzled.


message 229: by Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader. (new)

Brigid ✩ | 11973 comments Mod
"Because Marisol asked about the ending," Brigid answers. "So … I told her. heh heh." :)


message 230: by Niki (new)

Niki | 2381 comments Niki asked about the ending too. >.<


message 231: by Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader. (new)

Brigid ✩ | 11973 comments Mod
But Brigid felt bad because she doesn't want to tell EVERYONE the ending. And she's almost done anyway, so everyone should just read it. Gosssh. :P


message 232: by [deleted user] (new)

♥ Brigid ♥ wrote: "But Brigid felt bad because she doesn't want to tell EVERYONE the ending. And she's almost done anyway, so everyone should just read it. Gosssh. :P"

Psh. Why would we do that? It's not like you're an amazing writer or anything... Oh, wait...


message 233: by Nada (last edited Dec 28, 2009 07:09AM) (new)

Nada | 19 comments Nada thinks Anna/Maxy forgot to write in third person
:)
And Nada congradulates Brigid and wishes her luck!


message 234: by Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader. (new)

Brigid ✩ | 11973 comments Mod
Brigid thanks Nada. :)
BRIGID WILL FINISH WRITING WALKING SHADOW TODAY! SHE WILL!!!!!


message 235: by Lydia (new)

Lydia Lydia feels bored at the moment.


message 236: by Sella (new)

Sella Malin | 3094 comments ♥ Brigid ♥ wrote: ""Because Marisol asked about the ending," Brigid answers. "So … I told her. heh heh." :)"

"That doesn't matter," Sella pouts. "When people ask me about my endings, I don't just tell them. Poop on you."


message 237: by Sella (last edited Dec 28, 2009 02:49PM) (new)

Sella Malin | 3094 comments ♥ Brigid ♥ wrote: "Brigid thanks Nada. :)
BRIGID WILL FINISH WRITING WALKING SHADOW TODAY! SHE WILL!!!!! "


She will? "HOLY CRAP THAT IS SO AWESOME!" screams sella.


message 238: by Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader. (new)

Brigid ✩ | 11973 comments Mod
Sella wrote: "♥ Brigid ♥ wrote: ""Because Marisol asked about the ending," Brigid answers. "So … I told her. heh heh." :)"

"That doesn't matter," Sella pouts. "When people ask me about my endings, I don't just ..."


Brigid typically doesn't tell people endings either. In fact, she should probably just stop telling people endings altogether … because then all this "I know the ending and you don't" drama starts and it kind of freaks her out. XD


message 239: by Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader. (new)

Brigid ✩ | 11973 comments Mod
Sella wrote: "♥ Brigid ♥ wrote: "Brigid thanks Nada. :)
BRIGID WILL FINISH WRITING WALKING SHADOW TODAY! SHE WILL!!!!! "

She will? "HOLY CRAP THAT IS SO AWESOME!" screams sella."


Brigid blushes. "Heehee. Well, I'm probably being too optimistic," she admits. "I'm not really near the ending yet, but I'm getting there."


message 240: by Sella (new)

Sella Malin | 3094 comments ♥ Brigid ♥ wrote: "Sella wrote: "♥ Brigid ♥ wrote: ""Because Marisol asked about the ending," Brigid answers. "So … I told her. heh heh." :)"

"That doesn't matter," Sella pouts. "When people ask me about my endings,..."


"Good idea," Sella says. "You shouldn't tell anyone but me your endings anymore. XD"


message 241: by Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader. (new)

Brigid ✩ | 11973 comments Mod
Brigid sighs … and promptly begins to bang her head against the wall.


message 242: by Daisy (new)

Daisy | 149 comments “Brigid!! Don’t bang your head on the wall!!” DM begins to say


message 243: by Jayda (new)

Jayda | 2761 comments Jayda is pissed right now because her friend Kate (from Catch Me) is being ridiculous, petty, selfish, and inconsiderate! UGHHHH!


message 244: by Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader. (new)

Brigid ✩ | 11973 comments Mod
Jayda wrote: "Jayda is pissed right now because her friend Kate (from Catch Me) is being ridiculous, petty, selfish, and inconsiderate! UGHHHH!"

Brigid is sorry. :(


message 245: by Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader. (new)

Brigid ✩ | 11973 comments Mod
deleted member wrote: "“Brigid!! Don’t bang your head on the wall!!” DM begins to say"

Brigid continues to bang her head against the wall anyway. She does this frequently.


message 246: by Daisy (new)

Daisy | 149 comments ♥ Brigid ♥ wrote: "deleted member wrote: "“Brigid!! Don’t bang your head on the wall!!” DM begins to say"

Brigid continues to bang her head against the wall anyway. She does this frequently. "


DM starts crying


message 247: by Jayda (new)

Jayda | 2761 comments Jayda wishes that she could say that it was okay, but it isn't. Kate is just pissing her off, and rubbing things in her face, and taking for granted that Jayda gave up the guy she LOVED for her and now Kate is just decided to move onto another guy, the guy that NESSA now likes! THIS IS RIDICULOUS!!!

Jayda wants to pull her hair out because of all of this!


message 248: by Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader. (new)

Brigid ✩ | 11973 comments Mod
Jayda wrote: "Jayda wishes that she could say that it was okay, but it isn't. Kate is just pissing her off, and rubbing things in her face, and taking for granted that Jayda gave up the guy she LOVED for her and..."

Brigid wonders if Jayda would like a hug … even though it won't really fix anything. :/


message 249: by Jayda (new)

Jayda | 2761 comments Jayda would like a hug. Because at least she'd feel like someone cared about her! Even if it isn't Kate :/ -sigh-

Jayda thinks that this is just wayyyy too complicated and stupid. So far, being a teenager sucks.


message 250: by Acacia (new)

Acacia (acaciaa) *hug*


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