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Dec 26, 2009 02:37PM
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Oh right, France. Her grandmama lives there, all her family(mothers side) goes to France every Christmas.
Kenny thinks that is cool, "Did it feel like Christmas?" She only asked that because it really didn't feel like Christmas at her house.
Ummm. Thats a hard question. At some points it did, or maybe just because she was trying so hard to make it feel like Christmas. Everything was a little forced this Chritmas. But thats just Juliet's family. Get dozens of overbearing french people in a house and the Christmas spirit tends to go away.
Kenny objects, he did it all by himself and she manmaged to write it without description of the actual; act. "It stayed PG DM," she states,sad for Arabella and hating on Merrick.
Pfft, I don't give a crap about PG, me and censorship see no point in eachother unless it's for a people younger than I. I give a crap that he actually did it!
Kenny didn't want to do this to Arabella, but she wants Merric kto be dead, and this was the most gratifying way.
Shift will make sure he knows that when he is incapacitated cause he is so sick and she stabs him with his knitting needles!
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Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader.
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Juliet wrote: "Huh. Juliet asks how come your username is deleted memeber?"Kenny replies for her, "She thought it would be funny,since her picture shows up white. So she jsut changed it." she shrugged, she's ahd to explain this a few times at DM's request. Kenny doesn't mind at all.
DM enjoys Kenny explaining for her very much, as she is tired, her parents went out when she specifically toldd them to pick her up, and her jolliness from Christmas, and her niceness meter have run out. She had a slumber party because it was her BFFs 13th birthday, DM hates slumber parties because she is antisocial.
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Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader.
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Brigid should be writing … Her mc's are about to meet the devil. YAY! Then she can write the tragic ending!! woooooo :D
♥ Brigid ♥ wrote: "Brigid sent her manuscript! *does a happy happy joy joy dance*"RedPath dances with her, for she is happy for her.
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Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader.
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♥ Brigid ♥ wrote: "Brigid sent her manuscript! *does a happy happy joy joy dance*"Sella screams with happiness!
♥ Brigid ♥ wrote: "Brigid should be writing … Her mc's are about to meet the devil. YAY! Then she can write the tragic ending!! woooooo :D""Wow, really?" Sella says. "You're already there? AWESOME!" Sella can't wait until Cassandra and Jason meet the devil! And she can't wait for the tragic ending, which she knows and NO ONE ELSE BESIDES BRIGID AND SELLA KNOW IT! YAY!
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Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader.
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Sella wrote: "♥ Brigid ♥ wrote: "Brigid sent her manuscript! *does a happy happy joy joy dance*"
Sella screams with happiness!"
Brigid covers her ears. haha.
Sella screams with happiness!"
Brigid covers her ears. haha.
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Sella wrote: "♥ Brigid ♥ wrote: "Brigid should be writing … Her mc's are about to meet the devil. YAY! Then she can write the tragic ending!! woooooo :D"
"Wow, really?" Sella says. "You're already there? AWESOM..."
"Yup," says Brigid. She can't wait for Jason and Cassie to meet Lotu either. Bwa haha. (And Brigid knows Cassandra will throw up on her shoes for calling her Cassie, but it takes less time to type, so …) Actually … Brigid believes that one other person besides Sella and herself know the ending of Walking Shadow. And it's … Marisol? Maybe? Brigid forgets. But that's all. haha :D
"Wow, really?" Sella says. "You're already there? AWESOM..."
"Yup," says Brigid. She can't wait for Jason and Cassie to meet Lotu either. Bwa haha. (And Brigid knows Cassandra will throw up on her shoes for calling her Cassie, but it takes less time to type, so …) Actually … Brigid believes that one other person besides Sella and herself know the ending of Walking Shadow. And it's … Marisol? Maybe? Brigid forgets. But that's all. haha :D
♥ Brigid ♥ wrote: "Sella wrote: "♥ Brigid ♥ wrote: "Brigid should be writing … Her mc's are about to meet the devil. YAY! Then she can write the tragic ending!! woooooo :D""Wow, really?" Sella says. "You're already..."
Sella gasps. "Why does Marisol know the ending too?" she asks, puzzled.
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Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader.
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But Brigid felt bad because she doesn't want to tell EVERYONE the ending. And she's almost done anyway, so everyone should just read it. Gosssh. :P
♥ Brigid ♥ wrote: "But Brigid felt bad because she doesn't want to tell EVERYONE the ending. And she's almost done anyway, so everyone should just read it. Gosssh. :P"
Psh. Why would we do that? It's not like you're an amazing writer or anything... Oh, wait...
Psh. Why would we do that? It's not like you're an amazing writer or anything... Oh, wait...
Nada thinks Anna/Maxy forgot to write in third person:)
And Nada congradulates Brigid and wishes her luck!
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Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader.
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♥ Brigid ♥ wrote: ""Because Marisol asked about the ending," Brigid answers. "So … I told her. heh heh." :)""That doesn't matter," Sella pouts. "When people ask me about my endings, I don't just tell them. Poop on you."
♥ Brigid ♥ wrote: "Brigid thanks Nada. :)BRIGID WILL FINISH WRITING WALKING SHADOW TODAY! SHE WILL!!!!! "
She will? "HOLY CRAP THAT IS SO AWESOME!" screams sella.
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Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader.
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Sella wrote: "♥ Brigid ♥ wrote: ""Because Marisol asked about the ending," Brigid answers. "So … I told her. heh heh." :)"
"That doesn't matter," Sella pouts. "When people ask me about my endings, I don't just ..."
Brigid typically doesn't tell people endings either. In fact, she should probably just stop telling people endings altogether … because then all this "I know the ending and you don't" drama starts and it kind of freaks her out. XD
"That doesn't matter," Sella pouts. "When people ask me about my endings, I don't just ..."
Brigid typically doesn't tell people endings either. In fact, she should probably just stop telling people endings altogether … because then all this "I know the ending and you don't" drama starts and it kind of freaks her out. XD
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Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader.
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Sella wrote: "♥ Brigid ♥ wrote: "Brigid thanks Nada. :)
BRIGID WILL FINISH WRITING WALKING SHADOW TODAY! SHE WILL!!!!! "
She will? "HOLY CRAP THAT IS SO AWESOME!" screams sella."
Brigid blushes. "Heehee. Well, I'm probably being too optimistic," she admits. "I'm not really near the ending yet, but I'm getting there."
BRIGID WILL FINISH WRITING WALKING SHADOW TODAY! SHE WILL!!!!! "
She will? "HOLY CRAP THAT IS SO AWESOME!" screams sella."
Brigid blushes. "Heehee. Well, I'm probably being too optimistic," she admits. "I'm not really near the ending yet, but I'm getting there."
♥ Brigid ♥ wrote: "Sella wrote: "♥ Brigid ♥ wrote: ""Because Marisol asked about the ending," Brigid answers. "So … I told her. heh heh." :)""That doesn't matter," Sella pouts. "When people ask me about my endings,..."
"Good idea," Sella says. "You shouldn't tell anyone but me your endings anymore. XD"
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Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader.
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Jayda is pissed right now because her friend Kate (from Catch Me) is being ridiculous, petty, selfish, and inconsiderate! UGHHHH!
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Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader.
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Jayda wrote: "Jayda is pissed right now because her friend Kate (from Catch Me) is being ridiculous, petty, selfish, and inconsiderate! UGHHHH!"
Brigid is sorry. :(
Brigid is sorry. :(
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Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader.
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deleted member wrote: "“Brigid!! Don’t bang your head on the wall!!” DM begins to say"
Brigid continues to bang her head against the wall anyway. She does this frequently.
Brigid continues to bang her head against the wall anyway. She does this frequently.
♥ Brigid ♥ wrote: "deleted member wrote: "“Brigid!! Don’t bang your head on the wall!!” DM begins to say"Brigid continues to bang her head against the wall anyway. She does this frequently. "
DM starts crying
Jayda wishes that she could say that it was okay, but it isn't. Kate is just pissing her off, and rubbing things in her face, and taking for granted that Jayda gave up the guy she LOVED for her and now Kate is just decided to move onto another guy, the guy that NESSA now likes! THIS IS RIDICULOUS!!!Jayda wants to pull her hair out because of all of this!
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Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader.
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Jayda wrote: "Jayda wishes that she could say that it was okay, but it isn't. Kate is just pissing her off, and rubbing things in her face, and taking for granted that Jayda gave up the guy she LOVED for her and..."
Brigid wonders if Jayda would like a hug … even though it won't really fix anything. :/
Brigid wonders if Jayda would like a hug … even though it won't really fix anything. :/
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