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Kenny wishes you luck, she has found out her exam schedule for January.
Anna is squealing on the inside. She just rewrote a kissing scene (it's in the Kissing Scenes topic... no duh!), and it's much better now. "Go look at it," she says encouragingly. "Is it too cheesy?"
Kenny smiles.."I didn't read it...yet." Looks around, and seeing no one in the room, screams in agony. "NOOO! It's dying! The topic is dying!" Then she gets off her PMSing streak and goes to drink her hot chocolate.
Kat watched as the snow tumbled softly to the ground outside her bedroom window.
Kim would like to say hi to everyoneshe is fedup with her challenge from her friend to not come on the computer for a month
kim lasted 3 weeks but couldnt not say hi to everyone before christmas
she hopes no one has forgotten her and she wishes everyone a very merry christmas.
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Kenny is happy that people have posted. "It doesn't feel like Christmas Eve yet."
RedPath sighs happily, feeling completely comfortable in her sitting position. BUt she's hungry, and wants some food and water. Should she get up and risk losing her peaceful feeling? Or should she just sit there while her stomach begs pityfully for nourishment? A very hard descision indeed.....
Kenny thinks she should remain languid and peaceful, food is overrated.
RedPath nods, and stays where she is, ignoring her stomach.
Kenny giggles,getting up from ehr perch on the ceiling and walking the one foot to her cupboard to grab a snack."I like overrated things."
Abbee watches amused. Abbee's mom is dragging her to the mall. "HELP!!" she cries.
"Have fun!" Kenny yells,jumping down again from the roof to go grab the tea she just made.
RedPath's mom just came home, and she is happy. But she makes no move to greet her, because 1) She's in her comfortable position, and 2) A cat is on her lap.
Kenny beams,enjoying how RedPath is being languid. She also seems to like the word languid.
RedPath agrees, "Languid is awesome." She repeats it over and over again, much to the annoyance of her parents.
Kenny wants to know if RedPath actually saidit to her parents over and over again.
RedPath nods, "They're telling me stop," she says, laughing so hard that the cat on her lap woke up.
Kim wishes everyone a VERY MERRY CHRISTMAS!!only 3 hours and 13 minutes to go..
well thats if you live in england anyways..
RedPath smiles and wishes her Merry Christmas as well. On the East Coast of America, they have about 8 more hours.
Anna has 8 hours and 58 minutes. Pah.
Anna is being a lazypants today. She hopes she will remain this tired throughout the day so she can actually sleep tonight. She's always the last one to fall asleep, and she hates it terribly. And of course she is always the first one up. This year, she swears that if it's taking too long for people to wake up, she is going to cough loudly until they wake up, then pretend to be sleeping so she doesn't look guilty. Anna grins innocently.
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Kenny shouts brightly to everyone, "MERRY CHRISTMAS!" she doesn't,however,state that she now has the Twilight series in hardcover. No,she is not a Twi-hard.
Anna grins more. She got an iPod touch today. Yay!
"I know!" She squeals. "It was really weird at first, because the iPod was wrapped under the tree, and the speakers weren't, so I was like 'What? How can I use speakers when I don't have an iPod?'"
Anna wrote: ""I know!" She squeals. "It was really weird at first, because the iPod was wrapped under the tree, and the speakers weren't, so I was like 'What? How can I use speakers when I don't have an iPod?'""Deleted Member got 1 year of iphone service money, a barnes and noble gift card, an SLR camera, 75$ Amazon gift card, and a little ball that you can make ice cream in! Along with Twilight journals and the Scene It game for the movie (she is not a twihard either)
She also got a protable video camera that doens't have a video card, from her mother, and the ability to play Santa for my little sis. DM got to eat cookies and a carrot :)
deleted member wrote: "Anna wrote: ""I know!" She squeals. "It was really weird at first, because the iPod was wrapped under the tree, and the speakers weren't, so I was like 'What? How can I use speakers when I don't ..."Kenny appluads Deleted Member's un-Twi-hardness. "You got some cool stuff."
Kenny reminds DM that you have to talk in third person. Then she picks up some snow and thros a snowball at her for fun. "Gotcha!" she shouts,running away.
Ugh! DM runs after her throwing snowballs back
Anna is using goodreads with her iTouch! She finds it very enjoyable, though the numbers and links and stuff are freaking tiny. Haha.
Kenny laughs,sprinting away from DM and runnign across the ceiling. "Hey Anna! that's cool!" She gets hit by a snowball and rushes to make a new one.
Dm pauses and she hears her father using his cordless dremel and then goes back to dancing to Tik toK
Kennt thinks TikTok is a funny song, she takes this chance to hit DM with a slushball.
DM coughs and fusses like a little kid as it hits her in the mouth.
Kenny covers her mouth to stifle the laughter then goes offline to clean her kitchen.
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