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message 101: by Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader. (new)

Brigid ✩ | 11973 comments Mod
Brigid's creative writing assignment is to write a story in the view of someone who is the opposite gender – so she has to write a story from a boy's perspective. Brigid thinks this will be fun, and not too hard since she's done it like a million times before … She just needs a scenario to write about. Hmmm … O_o


message 102: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Kenny is too..she procrastinated a little but is starting...now!


message 103: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Stephanie is procrastinating too...procrastinating cleaning the bathroom!


message 104: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I hate cleaning the bathroom.." Kenny muses.


message 105: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) "Me too. Turns out I have to do it today instead." Grumbles.


message 106: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I did too! Just finished, now we're going to put up the tree." Kenny smiled. "But that will prob be put off for an hour or two!"


message 107: by ♫Huneeya♥ (new)

♫Huneeya♥ | 437 comments Huneeya can't imagine cleaning out the bathroom....she tries hard not to sound spoiled BECAUSE SHE IS NOT.


message 108: by Annemarie, hi (new)

Annemarie Carlson (annielawlz) | 3393 comments Mod
Juliet laughs, she doesn't usually have to clean out the bathroom, but when she does it sucks. Juliet's frusterated right now though, because she just finished the fourth Percy Jackson book but she doesn't have the fifth, "ARRG!"


message 109: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Kenny grins and says sarcastically. "I hate you! I always clean the bathroom!" then she laughs because syaing that saracstically made her think of a convo from the niogh before.


message 110: by Jayda (new)

Jayda | 2761 comments Jayda is happy because she's been able to write (on average) about one 10+ page chapter a day, if not more then that! Yay for being able to write after dealing with horrible writer's block!


message 111: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Kenny applauds Jayda's success.


message 112: by Krys (new)

Krys (krisslee) | 5015 comments Mod
Kriss applauuds Jayda as well... Kriss is mad. She accidently stepped on her glasses, and now she thinks they might be crooked.


message 113: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Uh,oh." Kenny gasps, she doesn't ever wear her glasses.


message 114: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "That's evil!" Kenny says, giggling.


message 115: by Krys (new)

Krys (krisslee) | 5015 comments Mod
Hannah wrote: "Hannah remembers a time when her sibling took her cousin's glasses and broke them in half... She also wonders how it's possible to step on someones glasses when they're supposed to be on their face..."

Kriss was getting out of the shower and her glasses fell on the floor when she went to grab them.


message 116: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "That sucks."


message 117: by Annemarie, hi (new)

Annemarie Carlson (annielawlz) | 3393 comments Mod
Juliets wearing glasses right now, for the first time in a long time, she usually wears contacts. Its odd.


message 118: by Annemarie, hi (last edited Dec 12, 2009 12:16PM) (new)

Annemarie Carlson (annielawlz) | 3393 comments Mod
Juliet used to be afraid of them, but since she is so vain so she got used to them.


message 119: by Jayda (new)

Jayda | 2761 comments Jayda wears reading and computer glasses, but her mom is forcing her to get regular glasses at the beginning of the year :( Jayda does NOTTTTTTT want freaking glasses! This is SO FRUSTRATING!


message 120: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "me too!"


message 121: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Kenny has had the glasses since gr.5 but never wears them because they are tacky and only for reading/computer anyways.


message 122: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Kenny (is a Christian girl) wrote: ""I did too! Just finished, now we're going to put up the tree." Kenny smiled. "But that will prob be put off for an hour or two!""

Stephanie nodded her head. "We already put our tree up. The bathroom looks good If I do say so myself."


message 123: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "My tree is up now, and my hands and arms are all cut up because of it!"


message 124: by Stephanie (last edited Dec 12, 2009 04:10PM) (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Hannah wrote: "Hannah remembers a time when her sibling took her cousin's glasses and broke them in half... She also wonders how it's possible to step on someones glasses when they're supposed to be on their face..."

Stephanie snickers.


message 125: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Stephanie doesn't need glasses. Laughs evilly.


message 126: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Kenny (is a Christian girl) wrote: ""My tree is up now, and my hands and arms are all cut up because of it!""

"Why are they cut?" Stephanie scratches her head.


message 127: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I had to spread the branches, and the tiny little thingies cut my hands and arms."


message 128: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) "Ouch! What kind of tree do you have? Is it filled with knizes or soemthing?"


message 129: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "It is a fake tree, but the fake pine needles are paperthin and give tiny cuts easily..only a few actually bled." Surprisingly Kenny enjoys this job, it only hurts after and even then it's more aof a stinging/tingling sensation.


message 130: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Stephanie nods her head now understanding. "So it's like getting a bunch of paper cuts?"


message 131: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Yup, some worse than others."


message 132: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Stephanie winces internally. "Soudns awful. We have a real Christmas tree at my house. Or my mom's and dad's I shoudl say. Since I don't own it."


message 133: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Nice, it would be too hard at my house.. the little kids and all."


message 134: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) "How little are they? If you don't mind me asking?"


message 135: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Well my mom runs a home daycare."


message 136: by Stephanie (last edited Dec 12, 2009 05:05PM) (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) "Oh. Okay. My mom is a para educator at a public school. My dad works from home most the time. He works with computers."


message 137: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Cool."


message 138: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) "Yeah. But he's gone on a buisness trip this week...he'll arrive like a day or two before my birthday."


message 139: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Nice..happy early birthday!"


message 140: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) "YAY! THANK YOU! I'M SO EXCITED. IT'S IN one...two..three....seven...nine days!"


message 141: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "YAY! holy close to Christmas much?"


message 142: by RedPath (new)

RedPath | 853 comments RedPath smiles, and thinks about how cool birthdays are,"That's awesome!"


message 143: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Setphanie smiles. "My dad's is even closer. His is on Christmas Eve. I LOVE BIRTHDAYS THOUGH!"


message 144: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "woah!" Kenny's birthday is on Easter monday this year.


message 145: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) "COOL! Ugh, bye. I gotta go!" Stephanie tries to find the strength to x out gmail.


message 146: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Bye!"


message 147: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Stephanie comes back. Surprised there are not a million posts here.


message 148: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Kenny is always surprised when there are no posts. But she is happy that there is finally at least one! "Thanks Stephanie!"


message 149: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Stephanie is surprised its taken this lone for someone to reply! "You're welcome!"


message 150: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Kenny isn't surprised..not about her own comment. You see, she was away yesterday at the Science Centre.


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