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message 701: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ♥Cal♥ wrote: "Cal showed Kenny's story from Death's point of view to her friend, and explained why she had been laughing. They now know she's insane; and she didn't even have to try to prove it."

Kenny laughs because that is funny.


message 702: by Laura (new)

Laura (xmagical) | 405 comments "Ahh," Cal agrees. "That's a good name for it, Mallory."

Cal's mouth hurts from smiling too much today. She was like :D all day long.


message 703: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Kenny's face hurts from frowning...crying, ya know: the stuff you do at funerals. But by the end she got to sing a little and do some small smiles of remembrance to the good times.


message 704: by Laura (new)

Laura (xmagical) | 405 comments Aw...Cal says she's sorry...she's never lost anyone close to her, but she knows it's gotta be tough.


message 705: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Kenny nods, "Thank-you."


message 706: by Laura (new)

Laura (xmagical) | 405 comments "So how's your week been?" Cal asks, smiling.


message 707: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Meh.."


message 708: by Laura (new)

Laura (xmagical) | 405 comments "Gah, I know the feeling," Cal replies. "Writer's block all week, had school when no one else did (cept homeschoolers) and has been walking into doors a lot. Joy, oh joy."


message 709: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "That sucks...but no school is awesome!"


message 710: by Laura (new)

Laura (xmagical) | 405 comments "It would be, only I'm homeschooled," Cal says, laughing. "So I had school."


message 711: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Homeschoool...is it cool?"


message 712: by Laura (new)

Laura (xmagical) | 405 comments Well if Cal starts school by 8:30 AM-ish, she's normally done by 1 PM, which means more writing time, but there are ups and downs.


message 713: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "That's cool."


message 714: by Laura (new)

Laura (xmagical) | 405 comments "Not really," Cal thinks, grimacing. "I hate being homeschooled, actually."


message 715: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Meh, I hate highschool."


message 716: by Laura (new)

Laura (xmagical) | 405 comments "Ooh, have you heard the song Hey There Delilah? That song is so cute, but it's a creepy song. He wrote it about some girl he met once," Cal says, she's listening to it right now.


message 717: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I have heard it," *chuckles*


message 718: by Laura (new)

Laura (xmagical) | 405 comments "It's a stalker song o.o" Cal responds, laughing. "But it's a cute stalker song. If that makes any weird sort of twisted sense."


message 719: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Very stalked song...it's practically for Edward Cullen...he is a creeper.Well...not for him then..cause he's not cute."


message 720: by Laura (new)

Laura (xmagical) | 405 comments That made Cal laugh. "Yeah, boo Tw*light. He looks like he just woke up or something and has bed-head. o.o"


message 721: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Kenny laughs too. "Ahahha, yeah.."


message 722: by Laura (new)

Laura (xmagical) | 405 comments "He actually does, which is why it's pathetic."


message 723: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I KNOW!"


message 724: by Laura (new)

Laura (xmagical) | 405 comments "Hehe yeah," Cal laughs. "So whatcha been up to lately? I've finally gotten over my writer's block, so I'm happy."


message 725: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Oooh, really? That's cool. I'm going to North Carolina in three days."


message 726: by Laura (new)

Laura (xmagical) | 405 comments "Really? We (My aunts, uncles, grandparents, and cousins, all on my dad's side) rent a beach-side house for a week during the summer. I have a 14 year old cousin who's like exactly like me, so we always have fun. 'Cept for when I do stupid things like getting a cactus stuck in my foot and climbing over the fence with it. Creepy memories."


message 727: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Ahhgh, that would hurt.."


message 728: by Laura (new)

Laura (xmagical) | 405 comments Cal laughs in reply. "Yeah, some memories are more fun than others."


message 729: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Yes..lol" Yes Kenny just said 'lol'.


message 730: by Laura (new)

Laura (xmagical) | 405 comments Cal said that outloud today without realiziing it, causing her friend to (sadly literally) rotfl.


message 731: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Kenny smiles, "At least I'm not the only one."


message 732: by Laura (new)

Laura (xmagical) | 405 comments "Nope," Cal cheerfully admits. "My friends know I'm a total geek, in disguise as a normal person."


message 733: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Ehehe, in disguise..oh yes."


message 734: by Laura (new)

Laura (xmagical) | 405 comments "Okay, in disguise as a hyper, talkative, blonde who everyone swears dyes her hair brown. Better?"


message 735: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Ahahahaha! Yes."


message 736: by Laura (new)

Laura (xmagical) | 405 comments "Ooh, yum, cake." Cal has decided she is officially in love with angelfood cake.


message 737: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Mmmmm. Angelfood cake is good."


message 738: by Laura (new)

Laura (xmagical) | 405 comments "Yeah," Cal agrees. "But. Pie is still better than pudding."


message 739: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Pie is mjuch bettah,"


message 740: by Laura (new)

Laura (xmagical) | 405 comments "EXACTLY! My friend Nate swears that pudding is better," Cal explains.


message 741: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "No. It is good, but as good."


message 742: by Laura (new)

Laura (xmagical) | 405 comments "Unless it's chocolate, because chocolate is amazing."


message 743: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Meck..I like vanilla."


Maria [the clockwork creeps on useless lives] (mariachhile) | 8772 comments Mod
maria screams, "AUGGGHHHHHHHH I WISH MY BROTHER WOULD LEAVE ME ALONE! I LOCK MY DOOR, HE UNLOCKS IT. HE PUNCHES ME. I'M NICE SO I DON'T HURT HIM." Maria apologizes for writing in all caps and being annoying but she feels that it's appropriate for the moment.


message 745: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "How old is he?"


message 746: by [deleted user] (new)

Bellie gasps. "Hang on... Cal, you're homeschooled? Cool, someone else! Only I'll be going to public high school this fall, but for now I'm homeschooled! It's just that both my parents work, so they don't have a whole lot of time and it's gotten harder now that I'm about to be at high school level. So they have to send me to public school." She shrugs. "I don't mind, though. I'm kind of looking forward to it. Maybe I'll be able to have more friends besides the ones I talk to online. I only have one right now and I never get to see her."


message 747: by Laura (new)

Laura (xmagical) | 405 comments "That's cool, yeah, I've met a lot of homeschoolers on here," Cal responds, smiling.
"Ugh, Maria, I know what you mean. My 7 year old sister has no idea what privacy is called. So basically I put any of my writing/drawing/etc up high."


message 748: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Highschool...." *shudders*


message 749: by [deleted user] (new)

Bellie rejoices. "I haven't! But I haven't been here for long. I used to know some in person, but they all moved away or went to high school. My friend says she doesn't mind it, except that her ex-almost-boyfriend is a jerk. Other than that she likes it. And she hates homework, but she gets it done. She thinks I'll do pretty well, anyway..."
Bellie nods. "I have two 9 year old sisters and a 4 year old. They drive me crazy sometimes. Luckily they've gotten out of the hitting phase."


message 750: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I posted a reply on the RP Squirrel!"


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