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Feb 11, 2010 10:54AM
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Jayda thanks Kenny and agrees - headaches do suck. She gets them a lot :/ Almost every day... It's horrid.
lolz. good one Marie. Funny-I have a character in a book I'm writing right this minute that is named after you!" Mandy says in third person because of Kenny! :)
♫ Mandy ♫ wrote: "lolz. good one Marie. Funny-I have a character in a book I'm writing right this minute that is named after you! :)""THIRD PERSON!" Kenny shouts gleefully. "You must write in third person."
Jayda is so pissed at her friend because she told her all excitedly (like she does everytime with this guy) that Jayda's crush (a guy that she literally LOVES) just asked her to prom!"Oh goody! I really care! NOT! Just SHUT UP and get over yourself! I don't care if I know! I don't want to know wheneber he asks you out, or makes you cookies, or chooses you over me for prom!"
Now Jayda has literally no chance of getting asked to prom. Yippee. Her dreams of going to prom with someone she really likes and cares about are shattered. Joy.
Kenny frowns and pats Jatda's back. "That really sucks Jayda." Kenny also thinks that this friend isn't being very nice,rubbing everything in Jayda's face.
Jayda agrees. Kate is a b-word. She would say it, but she knows that she shouldn't. Jayda has put up with her crap for the past however many months. She can't do it anymore. She's so over it. Kate is playing two guys and she rubs it in Jayda's face when she plays the guy she likes. Seriously.Jayda is over this.
Kennyninja (the ninja is silent) wrote: "♫ Mandy ♫ wrote: "lolz. good one Marie. Funny-I have a character in a book I'm writing right this minute that is named after you! :)""THIRD PERSON!" Kenny shouts gleefully. "You must write in t..."
"Fine!" Mandy says sullenly. "I'll edit that." :)
Jayda wrote: "Jayda agrees. Kate is a b-word. She would say it, but she knows that she shouldn't. Jayda has put up with her crap for the past however many months. She can't do it anymore. She's so over it. Kate ...""That is so heinous of her!" Kenny shakes her head unhappily.
Jayda wants to have an anti-prom. Considering she has pretty much a 0% chance of getting asked at this point, she thinks it would be best. She doesn't want to go and watch him and her dance all night while she's all alone. So, anti-prom it is, no matter if she's alone or with friends.
"Anti-prom sounds fun. What would you do?"
"No idea," Jayda admits. "Watch movies, eat candy and popcorn all night, just... I guess, totally normal sleepover type stuff? I'll have to think this through..."
Jayda hopes it will be. Her mom is trying to convince her out of her, but Jayda doesn't want to go to some stupid prom without a date just to watch her friend and crush dance the whole night. Stupid.
"That would just be making it worse. Anti-prom sounds fun. In fact..I don't like dances, I wonder if my mom would let me have one..in three years, when I have prom." Kenny giggles.
"I totally agree," Jayda says. "It def would be making it worse. I mean, if I have a couple of girlfriends that are going to be single, too, then maybe I'll go. But I want to have a date, not go alone. There's no point and I'd just be depressed all night." Jayda smiles a little. "Haha, that would be great!"
Kenny attempts a smile but really isn't up to it. She says not to worry, it's not because of this convo: it's because of life.
Aw. Jayda knows the feeling...But she's feeling a little bit better BECAUSE IT'S SNOWING!!! IT NEVER SNOWS HERE!!!
Kenny despises snow, but it's different for her cause she lives in Canada. "So, you like snow? That's cool. I like it sometimes."
"I like it on occasion. We're lucky if we get it once a winter. I live in Georgia, and so far we've gotten it twice! But this is the most it's snowed in a long time!"Jayda couldn't live in Canada. She hates the cold. Snow is an exception, haha.
"I love Georgia! My grandma used to live there!"Kenny understands that, she usually hates it too.
Jayda wrote: "Aw. Jayda knows the feeling...But she's feeling a little bit better BECAUSE IT'S SNOWING!!! IT NEVER SNOWS HERE!!!"
Cal is happy too--no school 'cause of the amazing snow. So she might be ready to bounce off the walls, since she didn't have school any of this week or last week.
Kenny says that it's Friday; there'd be no school regardless. Right?
Cal knows there's no school tomorrow, but she didn't have it any of this week, so that's why she's happy.
"Ahh, I get it! Je suis tres stupide!" Kenny laughs gaily.
"I'm rather...blonde somtimes, too," Cal agrees. "Okay, most of the time. Fine, all. Gosh, so particular."
Kenny giggles. "Meh, tu es tres magnifique!"
Cal is super-bored--and stuck with a case of writer's block. She has officially decided that she hates writer's block.
"Me too, high five!" that is something Kenny used to say whenever she agreed with someone. "I hate having writers' block!!!"
"Who doesn't?" Cal asked, making a face. She's bored, 'cause of no new books to read and nothing to write. So basically nothing for her to do.
Kenny is a little less bored because she is roleplaying.
"Ahh," Cal agrees. "Roleplays are fun. No one is on the ones I'm on currently." But she's a bit less bored now because she just got done reading some of Kenny's writing, which she thinks is amazing.
Kenny blushes. "thank-you for reading my writing..."
Cal would say thank you for writing your writing only then she would be super confuzzled so she just won't say that. So instead she'll just go read more.
"Thank-you for your comments! Looking forward to more.." Kenny smiles sadly.
"Ooh, have you heard of the book Red Badge of Courage?" Cal asks, making a face.
"Because it's the worst book ever in the history of awful books," Cal replies. "And lucky me, I have to read it for school."
Kenny chuckled. "That sucks!! And thank-you for the comment about how Death feels of how we interpret him.." *laughs*
Cal was actually laughing at that point; just another way to prove her insanity to everyone else. She's getting lots of weird looks now from her sister, after she explained that she was laughing over death.
Kenny laughed even harder. "Really? That's hilarious! Did you explain or just let her think you were insane?" Kenny does that a lot.
Cal doesn't really have to explain her insanity anymore, which is very sad when you think about. But she has to go now, since she has to wake up early tomorrow. Waking up early on a Saturday in awful in Cal's opinion... *bleh face*
"Bye bye Cal!! Have a good sleep! And yes...ugh waking up early.." *shudders*
"Ew, I know right?" Cal replies, shuddering. "Worse on a Saturday than any other day...Oh well. 'Night, cya later!"
Cal showed Kenny's story from Death's point of view to her friend, and explained why she had been laughing. They now know she's insane; and she didn't even have to try to prove it.
Mallory is happy because it's her grandma's birthday today, but she's not happy because tomorrow is Singles Awareness Day.
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