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ChrysantheLlama (Aka Maria if you haven't guessed) wrote: "quoting you, Maria did not just write in first person"
Mallory realizes that.
Mallory realizes that.
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Mallory hates winter with a fiery passion.
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Mallory is listening to Operator Please and she's really happy about it.
ChrysantheLlama (Aka Maria if you haven't guessed) wrote: "Maria is happy today though. It was 25 degrees above 0!"*shakes head* "Lucky you?"
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Probably because she lives in Canada.
ChrysantheLlama (Aka Maria if you haven't guessed) wrote: "Maria asks why Kenny shakes her head."*laughs and says yes to Skitts' comment*
The only Hero You will NEVER See in Action wrote: "ChrysantheLlama (Aka Maria if you haven't guessed) wrote: "Maria asks why Kenny shakes her head."
*laughs and says yes to Skitts' comment*"
Mallory laughs and feels really intelligent.
*laughs and says yes to Skitts' comment*"
Mallory laughs and feels really intelligent.
"You should feel intelligent." *skips to the beat of a random song*
"Moo?" *stops skipping* "Je ne comprende pas!"
Jayda hates the way facebook looks now!!! >.<
Jayda wrote: "Jayda hates the way facebook looks now!!! >.<"Kenny has no clue what it looks like. She doesn't have Faboo.
The only Hero You will NEVER See in Action wrote: "Jayda wrote: "Jayda hates the way facebook looks now!!! >.
Kenny has no clue what it looks like. She doesn't have Faboo."
Mallory high fives Kenny. "I don't have one either."
Kenny has no clue what it looks like. She doesn't have Faboo."
Mallory high fives Kenny. "I don't have one either."
*high fives happily* "Awesome! Glad I'm not the only one..my age that is."
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Mallory's mother is anti-Facebook.
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ChrysantheLlama (Aka Maria if you haven't guessed) wrote: "lol i do but the rule is my mom has to be my friend. I don't go on that often though :)""third person"
Mallory McSkittles (Skitts) wrote: "Mallory's mother is anti-Facebook."Kenny's mom and dad have Faboo, but they won't let her have it. She doesn't really care: she has goodreads.
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"third person""
Maria is very sorry for blanking out :(
The only Hero You will NEVER See in Action wrote: "Jack wrote: "Jack is in the middle of spring break and she has nothing to do all day but get on the comp.""Spring break? Woah. It's only February! My spring break is in March.""
We have spring break in Febuary because there's no such thing as winter in Dubai. There's only Rain and Summer. And I suppose when it's not raining that counts as spring.
"Hmm, interesting. In Canada, spring is our rainiest season."
"WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW!" says Laura.
"Hehe, ooh, I'm hungry..grapefuirt!" Kenny says very randomly.
"I hate grapefruit," says Jack skeptically, twitching her nose. Then, also randomly, she says, "Kenny, am I too negative?"
"I'm sick," Laura groans, "I think I got food poisoning."
Jack wrote: ""I hate grapefruit," says Jack skeptically, twitching her nose. Then, also randomly, she says, "Kenny, am I too negative?"""No you aren't too negative, but grapefruits are yummeh!"
"I had a weird dream last night...I think it had something to do with a mix of 2012 and Jurrassic Park, but anyway we needed something to eat and all we had were fruits."
Anna (Maxy) wrote: "Maxy isn't sick... yet. But she's still annoyed. "Is it even possible to write a romance that's not somewhat clichéd?" she cries out. (It's a rhetorical question, but answers are welcome.)"Mandy is thinking about how to reply to Anna Maxy..."If you like romances, you HAVE to see Emma, the new episodes that are based on a book by Jane Austen. SO GOOD!" She exclaims.
Mallory doesn't think Maxy's romance is too clichéd. "It's awesome, though!" she says.
"I envy you people," says Laura, "I had a dream last night in which I was staring at a rock. It was so exciting I think I almost peed my pants."
Laura wrote: ""I envy you people," says Laura, "I had a dream last night in which I was staring at a rock. It was so exciting I think I almost peed my pants."""That sorta reminds me of a Calvin and Hobbes comic. Calvin has a dream that he's counting grains of rice, and then he wakes up, saying, 'I bored myself awake!'" Jack chuckles.
"I love Calvin and Hobbes!!" Mandy grins. "I have a cousin named Calvin and he had a dog named Hobbes, seriously!!"
Laura wrote: ""I envy you people," says Laura, "I had a dream last night in which I was staring at a rock. It was so exciting I think I almost peed my pants.""
Mallory would be rolling on the floor laughing if she didn't feel so crappy.
Mallory would be rolling on the floor laughing if she didn't feel so crappy.
♫ Mandy ♫ wrote: ""I love Calvin and Hobbes!!" Mandy grins. "I have a cousin named Calvin and he had a dog named Hobbes, seriously!!""
If Mallory's name was Calvin, she'd name her pet Hobbes too.
If Mallory's name was Calvin, she'd name her pet Hobbes too.
'mmhmm', Jack thinks, Hobbes is so cute.
If Kenny's name was Calvin, she'd be a boy.
Jayda has a headache... But she wants to get through her writer's block so that she had post the next chapter of Rebel, AND get closer to a part that she's looking very forward to! :)
Kenny hopes Jayda feels better soon because headaches suck.
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