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Feb 02, 2010 07:23PM
"Don't be, you did not do anything." Kenny smiles.
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Kenny chuckles. "Laura! Romance should NEVER be the main part!" *laughs insanely* "Terrible, horrid things have to happen too!"
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"That story died...a rather painful and slow death." *giggles madly*
Laura wrote: "Laura thinks that romance shouldn't be the only driving factor in a story..."
Maxy agrees. "Some interesting things have to be happening in or around the romance for sure."
Maxy agrees. "Some interesting things have to be happening in or around the romance for sure."
yeah, but never about it. then there's no doubt that it'll be cliche.
Jack wrote: "The only Hero You will NEVER See in Action wrote: " Kenny grins, "Kenny is a nickname, but maybe Kendall isn't my real name either...who knows?" "
Jack sighs. "Could you give me a hint?" she ask..."
Skitts says her name was never Maria.
Jack sighs. "Could you give me a hint?" she ask..."
Skitts says her name was never Maria.
Anna (Maxy) wrote: "Maxy should be doing homework. Instead, she's trying to figure out how to make her story not clichéd."
Skitts says it's awesome as it is and you shouldn't change it.
"Why is everyone so paranoid about being clichéd?" she wonders. "It's not like you can't be awesome and clichéd at the same time!"
Skitts is...annoyed. And mad. And fed up with all the crap in the world.
"Stop complaining about your math test and the crapload of homework you have," she grumbles. "Complain about the World Bank and how it does much worse than ripping people off."
Skitts says it's awesome as it is and you shouldn't change it.
"Why is everyone so paranoid about being clichéd?" she wonders. "It's not like you can't be awesome and clichéd at the same time!"
Skitts is...annoyed. And mad. And fed up with all the crap in the world.
"Stop complaining about your math test and the crapload of homework you have," she grumbles. "Complain about the World Bank and how it does much worse than ripping people off."
Jack wrote: "Your name is Mallory McSkittles because you like skittles, right? Or so you told Jack once. "
"Indeed," Skitts sighs tiredly.
"Indeed," Skitts sighs tiredly.
How does the World Bank do things much worse than ripping people off? Laura wonders. Then, she voiced her question.
"Don't even get me started," Skitts mutters angrily. "Just know that it has something to do with poor countries and water."
"Ah, I understand already. Thank you, O wise one."Laura bowed her head with respect and flounced out of the room in her lilac frock, happy and awed to have an answer from the mighty one.
"Wait, since when am I mighty and/or wise?" Skitts (who will now call herself "Mallory") asks, confuzzled.
Mallory decides she should probably sync her iPod and then actually get off the comp.
Mallory decides she should probably sync her iPod and then actually get off the comp.
iPods are fun but Kenny has decided that next time dang iTunes syncs her sister's playlist to her iPod she will destroy it. She despises only having 94 songs most of which suck. Horribly. She misses her 501 songs of fantabulousness...including Def Leppard and Creed....
Jack is in the middle of spring break and she has nothing to do all day but get on the comp.
Jack wrote: "Jack is in the middle of spring break and she has nothing to do all day but get on the comp.""Spring break? Woah. It's only February! My spring break is in March."
"Goodnight, Kenny," says Mallory.
"Bonnuit," Mallory yawns, hoping she spelled it right.
"You did, you spelled it right! Bonnuit mademoiselle. A de main."(A de main: until tomorrow)
"Kenny," Maxy begins, "I have a question: Can it also be spelled bonne nuit? I've seen it that way before, so I was just wondering..."
Mallory feels rather sheepish about her incompetance in French.
Mallory McSkittles (Skitts) wrote: "Mallory feels rather sheepish about her incompetance in French."
Maxy feels much more sheepish about her incompetance in Spanish. "Silly Mallory," Maxy laughs.
Maxy feels much more sheepish about her incompetance in Spanish. "Silly Mallory," Maxy laughs.
Jayda is excited to finish writing this next chapter of Rebel and to post it!!! She loves writing this book so much!!! :DDD
Anna (Maxy) wrote: "Mallory McSkittles (Skitts) wrote: "Mallory feels rather sheepish about her incompetance in French."
Maxy feels much more sheepish about her incompetance in Spanish. "Silly Mallory," Maxy laughs."
"Hahaha," Mallory laughs.
Maxy feels much more sheepish about her incompetance in Spanish. "Silly Mallory," Maxy laughs."
"Hahaha," Mallory laughs.
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Maria [the clockwork creeps on useless lives], Butts butts
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Mallory is listening to Rachmaninov. "That dude was tight," she thinks. "His songs are so intense."
Anna (Maxy) wrote: ""Kenny," Maxy begins, "I have a question: Can it also be spelled bonne nuit? I've seen it that way before, so I was just wondering..."""Oui, it can. It depends on how you are saying it. Like in english we can say 'goodnight' or 'good night'. Same in french: 'bonnuit' et 'bonne nuit'."
ChrysantheLlama (Aka Maria if you haven't guessed) wrote: "Maria is freezing because she lives in Minnesota and went outside to shovel for half an hour without any winter apparel..."Kenny is freezing because she lives in Canada and it's below 0 degrees Celsius. Plus she lives in her basement so it's even colder down there...not below 0 though. "You are probably much more cold than I am."
"Haha, I think 'buenos noches' is only separated," Mallory says. "But 'porque' is because and 'por qué' is why."
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Jack sighs. "Could you give me a h..."
My name's maria :D
Mallory McSkittles (Skitts) wrote: ""Haha, I think 'buenos noches' is only separated," Mallory says. "But 'porque' is because and 'por qué' is why."""Interesting."
Mallory grins slyly. "I am a Face-Eater of many names."
"I have so many darn names, half of them either hard to pronounce or incredibly long. Frig." *laughs* "Even my real name, (last,first,middle) is long! I have five names in my real name."
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Maria [the clockwork creeps on useless lives], Butts butts
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I wrote 'meow like dogs' :D I'm proud of myself
ChrysantheLlama (Aka Maria if you haven't guessed) wrote: "Ok, so in Family and Consumer Science (FACS), Maria was working on her stupid "self esteem" poster. One of the fill in the blanks things was At my house we _________
I wrote 'meow like dogs' :D I'..."
Mallory is proud of you too, but would like to point out that you are typing in the first person.
I wrote 'meow like dogs' :D I'..."
Mallory is proud of you too, but would like to point out that you are typing in the first person.
Kriss wrote: "Kriss is so utterly happy right now. She finally finished chapter thirty two of The Seventh Dimension."Kenny is reading it!
Mallory is listening to....excerpts from West Side Story....
Is she the only one who thinks it would have been better if Maria killed herself?
Is she the only one who thinks it would have been better if Maria killed herself?
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Maria argues, "Only for half of it!"
Just this part: I wrote 'meow like dogs' :D I'm proud of myself, she shows.
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Is she the only one who thinks it would have been better if Maria killed herself?"
Maria is offended :P Don't worry, Maria is only playing dumb (me Maria) SHe knows that Maria is from west side story
ChrysantheLlama (Aka Maria if you haven't guessed) wrote: "Mallory McSkittles (Skitts) wrote: "ChrysantheLlama (Aka Maria if you haven't guessed) wrote: "Ok, so in Family and Consumer Science (FACS), Maria was working on her stupid "self esteem" poster. On..."
oic
oic
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