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message 501: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Kenny wonders if she should stop writing as Kenny and go by her new name.


message 502: by Jayda (new)

Jayda | 2761 comments Jayda is happy because she finally finished her sixth novel today!!! :D


message 503: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Kenny says congratulations.

and she thinks she spelled that wrong.


message 504: by Jayda (new)

Jayda | 2761 comments Jayda says thank you and is pretty sure that she spelt it right! :)


message 505: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments She shrugs and smiles tiredly. "Goodnight."


message 506: by Dana (new)

Dana Salman Kendall [is a motor oil?:] wrote: "Kenny wonders if she should stop writing as Kenny and go by her new name."

Jack is starting to wonder if Kenny is even Kenny's real name, or is it Kendall? (There was a girl in Jack's class in second grade named whose name was spelled Kendle. It's so cute!)




message 507: by Ky (last edited Jan 29, 2010 04:21AM) (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Kenny grins, "Kenny is a nickname, but maybe Kendall isn't my real name either...who knows?"


message 508: by [deleted user] (new)

Skitts refuses to give any hints as to whether Mallory is her real name or not. She's had several names on here, but Mallory McSkittles is like, a huge insiders joke.


message 509: by [deleted user] (new)

She means the McSkittles part, though.


message 510: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Kenny says that that reminds her of McDonalds..but..skittles.


message 511: by [deleted user] (new)

Skitts has a friend with the last name of McDonald.


message 512: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Really?" Kenny chuckles.


message 513: by [deleted user] (new)

"Indeed," Skitts says. "She's awesome."


message 514: by Clarence :P (new)

Clarence :P Mallory McSkittles (Skitts) wrote: "Skitts has a friend with the last name of McDonald."

Clare knows two families with the last name "McDonald"! But they don't have anything to do with Mcdonalds.
Clare is waiting for her sister to come home so they can leave.


message 515: by [deleted user] (new)

Skitts's friend has nothing to do with McDonalds either...at least she doesn't think she does...


message 516: by Hannah (new)

Hannah | 954 comments Hannah is so bored. She wants to read something, but the only books she has available at the moment are depressing and serious. She wants to read something lighthearted and funny.


message 517: by Jayda (new)

Jayda | 2761 comments Jayda HATES it when her computer goes slow, AND she's in a bad mood at the same time. She just wants to scream at everything and hit something!!! And then her mom is getting mad at her, surely her dad is going to talk to her, and her sister is giving her the rather silent treatment. Jayda hates days like this. They SUCK.


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Jayda wrote: "Jayda HATES it when her computer goes slow, AND she's in a bad mood at the same time. She just wants to scream at everything and hit something!!! And then her mom is getting mad at her, surely her ..."

Maxy hates days like that too. She kind of had one yesterday, except for later at night. She got in a fight with her mom and was extremely irritated. She was so mad that she ended up screaming at her phone when her friend refused to answer.


message 519: by Annemarie, hi (new)

Annemarie Carlson (annielawlz) | 3393 comments Mod
Juliet can sympathize too, today for her has been ugg. One of her bestest friend decided not to talk to her for no reason, and her mother, ... There are no words to describe how mad Juliet and her mother are at each other.


message 520: by [deleted user] (new)

Maxy symbolically weeps for Juliet and Jayda.

Maxy does not want to clean her room. Clothes are all over the floor, and she's been to exhausted to clean for the past three weeks. And she has the Shamwow song stuck in her head. Even Shamwow songs can't totally cheer up a tired Maxy.


message 521: by Jayda (new)

Jayda | 2761 comments Jayda is feeling much better then earlier... Working out helped, and writing. That helped too. She is sorry that Anna and Juliet have to go through similar/the same things :/


message 522: by Dana (new)

Dana Salman The only Hero You will NEVER See in Action wrote: " Kenny grins, "Kenny is a nickname, but maybe Kendall isn't my real name either...who knows?" "

Jack sighs. "Could you give me a hint?" she asks.
Aside to Skitts she says, "And I thought your name was Maria?"






message 523: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Kenny grins. "Nah, it'd be too easy."


message 524: by [deleted user] (new)

Mallory McSkittles (Skitts) wrote: "Skitts refuses to give any hints as to whether Mallory is her real name or not. She's had several names on here, but Mallory McSkittles is like, a huge insiders joke."

Maxy is one of the insiders on this insiders joke. She grins creepily, then stops because she is alone in a dark kitchen at 10:30 at night. She should not be scaring herself.


message 525: by Dana (new)

Dana Salman It's 10:30 at night where you are? Or atleast it was five hours ago when you posted that comment.
Jack sighs. She's always late in conversations because she's clear across the globe. It is 2:50 in the afternoon where she is now.


message 526: by Dana (new)

Dana Salman Your name is Mallory McSkittles because you like skittles, right? Or so you told Jack once.


message 527: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "It's 4:03 in the afternoon here!" Kenny says for no real reason other than to say it.


message 528: by Dana (new)

Dana Salman "Well, now let me see.." Jack conntemplates for a moment. "It's been 6 hrs since you posted that comment. That was approximately 1:40 at night where I am. Wow. So we're like..9 hrs and 40 min's time difference. Kenny you live in Canada, right?" Jack asks.


message 529: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Yes, I do, it's almost 11 pm here."


message 530: by Madeline (new)

Madeline "You must be on the East Coast of Canada," madeline said, half to herself....


message 531: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Yup, and south too. Now it's 11:30."


message 532: by Dana (new)

Dana Salman Jack chuckles at Kenny's insistant comments on the time. "Erm...now 2:15 in the afternoon," she says after checking her watch, following suit.


message 533: by Annemarie, hi (new)

Annemarie Carlson (annielawlz) | 3393 comments Mod
Juliet is home sick, "Blah."


message 534: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Jack wrote: "Jack chuckles at Kenny's insistant comments on the time. "Erm...now 2:15 in the afternoon," she says after checking her watch, following suit."

Kenny enjoys telling people what time it is and proceeds to do it again. "6:23."


message 535: by Dana (new)

Dana Salman Juliet wrote: "Juliet is home sick, "Blah.""

Jack must've caught it from Juliet because now she's sick too. *cough* *cough*




message 536: by Laura (new)

Laura  | 911 comments Laura is not sick.


message 537: by [deleted user] (new)

Maxy should be doing homework. Instead, she's trying to figure out how to make her story not clichéd.


message 538: by Krys (new)

Krys (krisslee) | 5015 comments Mod
Kriss is sick, and she hasn't even been in this topic IN FOREVER! She still blames all you sick peoples.


message 539: by [deleted user] (new)

Maxy isn't sick... yet. But she's still annoyed. "Is it even possible to write a romance that's not somewhat clichéd?" she cries out. (It's a rhetorical question, but answers are welcome.)


message 540: by Laura (new)

Laura  | 911 comments Laura still isn't sick. Laura is trying not to get a headache from reading Edgar Allan Poe.


message 541: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Kenny thinks that it's not uber easy to make an un-cliched romance..


message 542: by Krys (new)

Krys (krisslee) | 5015 comments Mod
Kriss agrees. Kriss has only ever made one partly- un-cliched romance that is still unwritten.


message 543: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Kenny nods.


message 544: by Krys (new)

Krys (krisslee) | 5015 comments Mod
Kriss thinks that's why it's always best to mix in romances with fantasies, ect.


message 545: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Another nod, "Yep..that would be why the only romance I've ever really done exists with people who have powers." Kenny chuckled.


message 546: by Krys (new)

Krys (krisslee) | 5015 comments Mod
Kriss nods in response. "Indeed . . . It's fun to write romances like that." Kriss's favorites are when the romances are in the middle of wars, or caused them. Kriss thinks those are the best kinds.


message 547: by Laura (new)

Laura  | 911 comments Laura is watching a weird advertisement...


message 548: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Kriss wrote: "Kriss nods in response. "Indeed . . . It's fun to write romances like that." Kriss's favorites are when the romances are in the middle of wars, or caused them. Kriss thinks those are the best kinds."

So does Kenny. She is also extremely bored.


message 549: by Krys (new)

Krys (krisslee) | 5015 comments Mod
Kriss is sorry.


message 550: by Laura (new)

Laura  | 911 comments Laura thinks that romance shouldn't be the only driving factor in a story...


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