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Jan 28, 2010 08:46PM

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Jack is starting to wonder if Kenny is even Kenny's real name, or is it Kendall? (There was a girl in Jack's class in second grade named whose name was spelled Kendle. It's so cute!)
Skitts refuses to give any hints as to whether Mallory is her real name or not. She's had several names on here, but Mallory McSkittles is like, a huge insiders joke.
She means the McSkittles part, though.
Skitts has a friend with the last name of McDonald.
"Indeed," Skitts says. "She's awesome."

Clare knows two families with the last name "McDonald"! But they don't have anything to do with Mcdonalds.
Clare is waiting for her sister to come home so they can leave.
Skitts's friend has nothing to do with McDonalds either...at least she doesn't think she does...


Jayda wrote: "Jayda HATES it when her computer goes slow, AND she's in a bad mood at the same time. She just wants to scream at everything and hit something!!! And then her mom is getting mad at her, surely her ..."
Maxy hates days like that too. She kind of had one yesterday, except for later at night. She got in a fight with her mom and was extremely irritated. She was so mad that she ended up screaming at her phone when her friend refused to answer.
Maxy hates days like that too. She kind of had one yesterday, except for later at night. She got in a fight with her mom and was extremely irritated. She was so mad that she ended up screaming at her phone when her friend refused to answer.
Juliet can sympathize too, today for her has been ugg. One of her bestest friend decided not to talk to her for no reason, and her mother, ... There are no words to describe how mad Juliet and her mother are at each other.
Maxy symbolically weeps for Juliet and Jayda.
Maxy does not want to clean her room. Clothes are all over the floor, and she's been to exhausted to clean for the past three weeks. And she has the Shamwow song stuck in her head. Even Shamwow songs can't totally cheer up a tired Maxy.
Maxy does not want to clean her room. Clothes are all over the floor, and she's been to exhausted to clean for the past three weeks. And she has the Shamwow song stuck in her head. Even Shamwow songs can't totally cheer up a tired Maxy.


Jack sighs. "Could you give me a hint?" she asks.
Aside to Skitts she says, "And I thought your name was Maria?"
Mallory McSkittles (Skitts) wrote: "Skitts refuses to give any hints as to whether Mallory is her real name or not. She's had several names on here, but Mallory McSkittles is like, a huge insiders joke."
Maxy is one of the insiders on this insiders joke. She grins creepily, then stops because she is alone in a dark kitchen at 10:30 at night. She should not be scaring herself.
Maxy is one of the insiders on this insiders joke. She grins creepily, then stops because she is alone in a dark kitchen at 10:30 at night. She should not be scaring herself.

Jack sighs. She's always late in conversations because she's clear across the globe. It is 2:50 in the afternoon where she is now.



Kenny enjoys telling people what time it is and proceeds to do it again. "6:23."

Jack must've caught it from Juliet because now she's sick too. *cough* *cough*
Maxy should be doing homework. Instead, she's trying to figure out how to make her story not clichéd.
Kriss is sick, and she hasn't even been in this topic IN FOREVER! She still blames all you sick peoples.
Maxy isn't sick... yet. But she's still annoyed. "Is it even possible to write a romance that's not somewhat clichéd?" she cries out. (It's a rhetorical question, but answers are welcome.)

Kriss nods in response. "Indeed . . . It's fun to write romances like that." Kriss's favorites are when the romances are in the middle of wars, or caused them. Kriss thinks those are the best kinds.

So does Kenny. She is also extremely bored.
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