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Jan 22, 2010 03:42PM
Skitts is sad for Maxy. She seemed to be in a good mood and then was suddenly all like BLARGGGGGGGG.
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Maxy probably needs food. Yes, she needs food.
"Then get your butt into wherever you keep food in your house and eat," Skitts commands.
"So I need to put my butt in the pot and pan on the stove?" Maxy giggles at the image.
Kenny laughs too, quietly from on the ceiling.
jack says "when in doubt, eat chocolate". She lives by that rule and so far it's helped her..most of the time.
Jayda is obsessed with this Tokio Hotel song on their new CD - Love & Death. IT'S ADDICTING!!!
Anna (Maxy) wrote: ""So I need to put my butt in the pot and pan on the stove?" Maxy giggles at the image."
"Yes, that's exactly what I meant," Skitts rolls her eyes. "I want you to scald your butt. I meant go get some crackers or make yourself a sandwhich or something."
"Yes, that's exactly what I meant," Skitts rolls her eyes. "I want you to scald your butt. I meant go get some crackers or make yourself a sandwhich or something."
Jack wrote: "jack says "when in doubt, eat chocolate". She lives by that rule and so far it's helped her..most of the time."
Yum, Skitts thinks. Chocolate is so nummy.
Yum, Skitts thinks. Chocolate is so nummy.
Hannah is sad and bored. She's sad because she's bored, and bored because she's bored.
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Jayda is crazy because she's attempting to write 9,000 words in about four hours or so :/
Skitts is listening to Dolly Parton. She's the only teenager she knows who thinks that Dolly is awesome. DOLLY IS THE OLD-SCHOOL COUNTRY GODDESS.
Jack is glad she finished all her quizzes (and is wondering whether 'quizzes' has two z's)
Jayda wrote: "Jayda is crazy because she's attempting to write 9,000 words in about four hours or so :/"Hannah almost faints. She can't even write more than three hundred words in a day.
Jack wrote: "Jack is glad she finished all her quizzes (and is wondering whether 'quizzes' has two z's)"
Skitts tells Jack that "quizzes" does indeed have two 'z's.
Skitts tells Jack that "quizzes" does indeed have two 'z's.
Jack thanks Skitts, then wonders why her comments usually end most other conversations.
Hannah wrote: "Jayda wrote: "Jayda is crazy because she's attempting to write 9,000 words in about four hours or so :/"Hannah almost faints. She can't even write more than three hundred words in a day."
Jayda is happy because she did it! :D In total on Saturday she wrote 13,000+ words! YAY FOR ACCOMPLISHING STUFF!
Skitts dances to "Bad Idea" by Lemon Demon.
Kenny perks up at one word in particular, and it's part of the Artist's name. "LEMON! NOOOOO!"
"Whaddya got against lemons?" Skitts asks Kenny. Then she gasps as "Thinking of You" by Katy Perry starts playing.
"Nothing," she chuckles. "I love lemons..but lemonitus is not so fun..it left me scarred.." *can't stop laughing*
RedPath smiles fondly at the memory of lemonitus.
Fondly? Kenny laughs again. "Okay ya, it was fun."
"Lemonitus?" Skitts cocks her head. "What?"
RedPath grins wickedly, "I wanna tell her!"
"And I wanna know!" Skitts frowns.
RedPath clears her throat, "It all started in the 'First Sentences' topic."
☺Mallory McSkittles (Skitts) wrote: ""And I wanna know!" Skitts frowns."Hannah doesn't know what lemonitus is, either.
RedPath ~Enna-girl~ wrote: "RedPath clears her throat, "It all started in the 'First Sentences' topic.""
Skitts debates whether or not she wants to go find out. "Can't you just tell me?"
Skitts debates whether or not she wants to go find out. "Can't you just tell me?"
She nods, "Okay, and then someone (I shall not name who) wrote a sentence about a lemon. Then someone after her wrote a lemon-based sentence as well. Pretty soon, about most of the sentences for a couple of pages were all about lemons." Then RedPath goes on to explain how they got in trouble, and how some people are now prone to fits of lemon-obsessions.
Hannah wishes she had seen this topic earlier. :p
Kenny laughs her head off because she was ONE of the first people to write about lemons...and one of the first to make it go crazy and turn into a disease..she likes Lemons far too much.
RedPath ~Enna-girl~ wrote: "She nods, "Okay, and then someone (I shall not name who) wrote a sentence about a lemon. Then someone after her wrote a lemon-based sentence as well. Pretty soon, about most of the sentences for a ..."Hannah is now itching to write a sentence about lemons.
Skitts says, "When life gives you lemons, throw them back and say, 'Hey! That was my head you just hit! WATCH IT, DORK!"
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Jayda REALLYYYYYYYYY wants to post the next chapter of Rebel, but also wants to wait until tomorrow! Hmmm...
Clare thinks Jayda should do what her heart tells her to do. (Clare think's that she is very wise, but really, she's not very wise.)
Jayda doesn't know what her heart is saying about that :/ -sigh-
Clare doesn't know what Jayda should do then. Clare thinks.
Skitts is eating a bowl of cheerios with blueberries. It's very good.
JAYDA IS SO HAPPY BECAUSE SHE STARTED WORKING OUT AGAIN AND EVEN THOUGH SHE'S SORE RIGHT NOW SHE KNOWS IT'LL BE WORTH IT!!!
Maxy can't find any good info on cystic fibrosis. Well, she can, but nothing answers her question. "Is it the cystic fibrosis itself that kills a person," she begins, "or something else?" She needs to know soon. It's very important.
Juliet wrote: "Juliet says "Pssh. When life gives you lemons, make grapefruits and watch as people stare at you in amazement and awe."RedPath clears her throat, "Actually, when life gives you lemons, they're probably poisoned.
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Anna (Maxy) wrote: "Maxy can't find any good info on cystic fibrosis. Well, she can, but nothing answers her question. "Is it the cystic fibrosis itself that kills a person," she begins, "or something else?" She needs..."R.P has faith in Maxy. "You'll definitely find it," she encourages.
RedPath ~Enna-girl~ wrote: "Juliet wrote: "Juliet says "Pssh. When life gives you lemons, make grapefruits and watch as people stare at you in amazement and awe."RedPath clears her throat, "Actually, when life gives you l..."
Jack agrees with Juliet. She wishes she had been there during the 'lemonitis' insanity. She likes lemons.
Anna (Maxy) wrote: "Maxy can't find any good info on cystic fibrosis. Well, she can, but nothing answers her question. "Is it the cystic fibrosis itself that kills a person," she begins, "or something else?" She needs..."
Skitts rummages through some family medical books. "Blast," she mutters. "This is obnoxious. CRIKEY! I did not need to see a detailed picture of ectropion! A ha!" Skitts reads aloud to Maxy that "repeated bouts of pneumonia are common in children with the disease and usually lead to bronchiectasis...wait, what's that?" *goes to page 363* "Oh, it's another respiratory illness... well, this book says that the pneumonia and bronchiectasis can be fatal, and the fact that their bodies can't produce the enzymes required to digest food properly is what's most deadly about CF, so...?"
Skitts rummages through some family medical books. "Blast," she mutters. "This is obnoxious. CRIKEY! I did not need to see a detailed picture of ectropion! A ha!" Skitts reads aloud to Maxy that "repeated bouts of pneumonia are common in children with the disease and usually lead to bronchiectasis...wait, what's that?" *goes to page 363* "Oh, it's another respiratory illness... well, this book says that the pneumonia and bronchiectasis can be fatal, and the fact that their bodies can't produce the enzymes required to digest food properly is what's most deadly about CF, so...?"
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