please let me know how i write???

[Maha]

hi there! i have written a horror, paranormal fictiona and posted its first chapter...pleassseeee let me know how i did???

http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/2...

[Wayne]

I'm not sure you know this, but characters are an integral part of a story. While you may write fine and develop a good plot, the characters are just as important. To use some one elses characters is not appropriate, even if you aren't trying to publish it or sell it or whatever. To create your own characters is half the challenge of writing. I'm not trying to mean or anything like that just a bit of advice is all.

[Yassemin]

Your spellings not up to scratch either.

[Maha]

Wayne wrote: "I'm not sure you know this, but characters are an integral part of a story. While you may write fine and develop a good plot, the characters are just as important. To use some one elses characters ..."

hey! I think u are actually talking about the Harry Potter Fan fiction, and because it is a fan fiction it is supposed to have the author's characters. anyway thanks for reviewing. and thanks for he advice too. I will keep that in mind...:)

[Maha]

Yas wrote: "Your spellings not up to scratch either."

Well, thanks for telling. aome of them i am sure are just typing mistakes. I'd be grateful if you would let me know some of my mistakes. that will help improving. thanks for reviewing Yas.