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Lolita, light of my life, fire of my loins.
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And this is the only immortality you and I may share, my Lolita.
-The temerity! Forgive me, Nabokov. And this seems more like a summary in free verse. Will try some more later.

First: Sometime after he said the word Pause, I went mad and landed in the hospital.
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Last: "You get it," I said. "Let him come to me."
Filler story in spoiler tag. And I want to create a meme from yesterday's fight ahahahahaha

May in Ayemenem is a hot, brooding month.
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Tomorrow.
LOL

It was inevitable: the scent of bitter almonds always reminded him of the fate of
unrequited love.
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"Forever", he said.
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These are the first and last sentences of my most recent favorite read, Station Eleven by Emily St. John Mandel:
FIRST LINE: The king stood in a pool of blue light, unmoored.
LAST LINE: He likes the thought of ships moving over the water, toward another world just out of sight.
Bridging the first and last lines:
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It must be mentioned that the "king" in the first line and the "he" in the last are completely different persons in the book. :)

Our story opens where countless stories have ended in the last twenty-six years: with an idiot - in this case, my brother Shaun - deciding it would be a good idea to go out and poke a zombie with a stick to see what happens.
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We stepped inside.
Medyo bitin yung last line ng book when it's taken out of context. :))

I'm halfway finished with one of the prizes, though kailangan ko pang bumili ng stuffing. Don't miss out on this oppportunity to own the only crafty thing I'll ever make in my life!

In the late summer of that year we lived in a house in a village that looked across the river and the plain to the mountains.
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After a while I went out and left the hospital and walked back to the hotel in the rain.
Grabe, ang gloomy ko naman. :-P

Ironically, since the attacks, the sunsets have been glorious.
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And for now, that is enough.

But I didn't keep track of the people who participated. I still owe you stamps! Please give me your passports the next time we meet.
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The first and the last sentences of a novel have power. The opening line invites you into a new reality, an incantation that puts you squarely in the novel's world. The closing line, on the other hand, has the capacity to haunt you days after you thought you've left that novel behind.
Your mission, should you choose to accept it, is this:
1. Get the first and last sentence of one novel. Arrange them with the first sentence first, last sentence next.
2. Write new lines that you can insert between the sentences in order to create something new.
3. You can only insert 1-3 new sentences or lines.
4. The resulting product can be either a verse or flash fiction. It doesn't have to be related to the source novel.
To give you an example I am going to choose the book Fahrenheit 45 by Ray Bradbury
(view spoiler)[First sentence: It was a pleasure to burn.
Last sentence: When we reach the city.
It was a pleasure to burn
Our breaths took in the same night
And it felt like coming home
We were bone-tired travelers crying in relief
When we reach the city
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Submit as many entries as you want. The winner will get a sticker for their TFG passport plus a special prize.
Let me know if you have questions!