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Weekly Short Story Contests > Week 259 (May 2-9). Stories. Topic: Robot Overlord

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Anne (annefrn) | 916 comments Melissa wrote: "Found time to write something! Here is my short story submission for the topic: Robot Overlord. Feedback is ALWAYS welcome!

Science 101 by: Melissa Andres
Word Count: 802


Raiden Alders was l..."


Melissa, Glad you made it this week! You've got a real knack for writing flash fiction. This week's was a good lesson about 'be careful what you wish for'! :) I'm sure those kids never imagined what could be unleashed.


message 52: by Connie (last edited May 09, 2015 09:06AM) (new)

Connie D. | 656 comments ANNE- Excellent story! What an act of faith between Ro-Ten and Doc........I suppose Doc could have done anything he wanted once the chips were removed.

MELISSA- I always enjoy your stories about children. Their looks, thoughts, and actions are always so charming. And even where something awful is happening, you don't make it gruesome.


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Garrison, Edward, Mark, Anne and Connie - Thank you all for your kind words on my story. I really appreciate it!

Everyone - I did read stories but didn't take the time to write out thoughts and comments. I enjoyed each. They were all done well and in differently wonderful ways! Unfortunately, we can only vote for one person. Bravo everyone!


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Arun Iyer (aruniyer) | 370 comments My favorite topic and I missed it T_T


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