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message 1: by Carlos (last edited Jun 02, 2015 02:11PM) (new)

Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 5 comments UNDER CONSTRUCTION

Full Name: Alex Garcia Blaze
First Name: Alex
Middle Name: Garcia
Last Name: Blaze
Meaning of names: Alex: means "Defender of, protector of mankind" in both greek and american meaning
Garcia: means "brave in battle" in spanish and in Teutonic means "spear strength"
Blaze: means "fire" (doesn't really mean that. i just made it up what the name blaze means)

Age: 19
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Nationality: American, Indian American
Relationship status: Single
Crush: None
Occupation: X-men though he still goes to class to learn due to choosing to and helping out the teachers from time to time

Appearance: my link text

Alex is an guy of 6 feet with ink/raven black hair and weighs 210 lbs with natural smooth russet skin that makes girls envy him along with dark warm chocolate brown eyes that make girls melt and that seem to contain an ocean of sadness but twinkle slightly with amusement. He has an charming, warm smile that makes people want to be friends with him with strong healthy snow white teeth and is extremely hot with dark sexy looks along with being extremely strong and muscular. He has an extremely well strong, solid, lean and athletic body build for someone his age and has an hard but smooth 8 pack, muscles, biceps and triceps. He has a bit of an bad boy look to him with looks of an leader though he isn't and has an air of command around him that seems to make people want to follow him though he also has an aura of unexplained danger and power around him.

Ghost Rider Appearance: http://www.lindashauntedhalloween.us/...

http://f.ptcdn.info/017/016/000/13932...

https://lh4.googleusercontent.com/-zS...

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When Alex becomes the ghost rider, Alex becomes an demon with the appearance of an skeleton that is as fit as Alex is in human form with being as tall as 6'5 and weighs 215 lbs, five times more then he does in human form, as well as having an skull that is set/encased with red-orange flames

Personality: Despite Alex's looks he is very caring and friendly towards other people, putting other people's needs before his own and is an fun loving dude who likes to have fun once in a while as well as being extremely smart using his surroundings and the objects around him to his advantage as well as getting straight A's and B's in school. He also is an thrill seeker, doing dangerous stunts or tricks that would make other people think twice about doing. He has a bit of an bad boy attitude though he is respectful to others even though his hot head temper sometimes gets the best of him despite how hard he tries to keep it in check. He is most of the time quiet and appears to be sullen along with being somewhat withdrawn. He is also an lady's man and knows how to treat and respect an girl and is a bit of an teaser towards them. Despite this, Alex can also become extremely hostile and dangerous if he chooses to as well as ruthless and for some reason his attitude seems to affect the people around him so that they feel the same way as he does.

History: Alex is the biological son of an unknown woman and Johnny Blaze, the original ghost rider though no one knows who Alex's mom is except for his father. As an baby Alex had only an father to support him as he grew up though despite what people thought of him growing up without an mom Alex did pretty well with just an father. He grew up with an passion for motorcycles and motorcycle stunts like his father Johnny Blaze as well as having an talent for knowing what type of vehicle an car or an motorcycle was as well as knowing how to fix it. At age 13 he joined his father in motorcycle stunt and as he grew up he quickly became very popular as well as having a lot of admirers though he did go to school and surprising despite moving a lot, he did extremely well in school growing up, getting straight A's and B's in every grade so naturally he had an good life with an bright future with everything going well for him until the devil came. Alex, age 18, was on an tour bus doing an world wide motorcycle stunt trip with Johnny when the bus they were in suddenly swerved to the right and flipped onto its roof making Alex hit his head and knocking him unconscious, the bus sliding along the the road a few feet until it came to an stop.

When Alex became conscious, he saw that his cloths were ripped in places where he landed on the glass though he didn't look at the himself and he managed to get outside from the bus, still bleeding a lot. As he got outside and get up, he found out that even though he should had been weak like anyone else just becoming conscious he felt that he was was still very strong and as he had looked down at himself he saw the glass in him when he watched in amazement as the shards of glass seemed to come out of him and the scratches healed. In the middle of his surprise, he had heard the sound of an motorcycle roaring to life as it sped off and when he looked to the side, he saw an guy with an skeleton skull on fire with an chain wrapped around its body speeding off on an motorcycle that wasn't like any motorcycle he had seen with its wheels on fire rushing towards an strange person with an black cane in his hands and an silver skull on top of the cane. After a few minutes of watching the two fight, the creature (being ghost rider) was beaten and killed, resuming or retaking the form of Alex's father. Alex would just stare at the body in horror and shock when the other man seemed to have noticed Alex and began walking to him to kill the boy when Alex looked at the devil with an look of pure hatred and his eyes full of blood lust

X-men nickname: Ghost Rider
Abilities/Powers: Motorcycle: As the ghost rider and when riding his bike, Alex's motorcycle can travel faster then conventional motorcycles and can maneuver impossible feats such as riding straight up a vertical surface, sheer walls or across water. He can change/cause/make his motorcycle to transform and surround itself with hellfire or simply create an new cycle from pure hellfire. He can also summon his motorcycle to him as well as also give his fiery ability to his motorcycle and other vehicles.

Penance stare: As the ghost rider Alex has an most notable power called the "penance stare"- the ability to cause others to experience a level of emotion/mental pain equivalent to that which they have caused others as a result of illegal or immoral activities. He mostly uses this ability to capture someone's soul and send that soul to hell.

Mystical chain: As the ghost rider Alex uses an heavy chain the length of 3 feet which possess magical properties. The chain can grow in length and is supernaturally strong, being practically invincible to breaking as hell fire is in it or its made out of hell fire.

Hellfire: As the ghost rider Alex possesses complete control over hellfire and regular fire, he can generate and project hellfire in massive amounts and manipulate it in anyway he likes. He also has the ability to destroy the undead.

Superhuman strength: As the ghost rider Alex can lift several tons more then anyone else with superhuman strength can

Superhuman speed: As the ghost rider Alex can in manner that is very close and related in an manner to teleportation

Superhuman stamina: As the ghost rider, Alex has superhuman stamina which means he doesn't tire that easily and can be at full strength and not tire for more then a few hours

Superhuman durability: As the ghost rider, Alex body can withstand attacks much more then others can if harmed with weapons made or forged from heaven. As a human, Alex body is still able to withstand pain and physical trauma such as punches, kicks and things related to that as well as maybe getting hit by a car depending how fast it's going like if it is going at high speeds then yea that would kill him or break something in him.

Invincibility: As the ghost rider Alex can be killed by weapons of heaven, by god or by the devil.

Magic: Unlike his father the original ghost rider, Alex is able to use magic though the spells rely on Alex's strength/energy and in can take either small or large amounts of Alex's strength/energy depending on what kind of spell it is, how big the spell is and how powerful it is.

High Body Temperature: Alex has an high body temperature that is allows him to be able to withstand freezing low temperatures that would normally kill an regular person and it makes it practically impossible for him to get sick or get infected with an sickness.

Weakness's: In order to assume the form of the ghost rider, Alex needs to be in the shadows as he can't change at will as well as he is forced to change at night when evil is around and whenever he tries to fight it he just causes himself pain

Due to sharing the same body, Alex and Zarathors (the ghost rider) often fight over dominance and control of Alex's body, sometimes causing his great pain

Whenever Alex forces the ghost rider to transform, his powers are limited due to Alex being in control instead of Zarathos

If high on drugs like cocaine, or if the person is blind, or if he cannot make eye contact due to the victim having more than two eyes, Ghost Rider's Penance Stare cannot function.

Even though Alex is invincible he can still be hurt by other means
Skills: Alex is excellent in fixing and repairing vehicles as he grew up knowing them all his life

As the ghost rider, Alex's powers are boundless and godlike with only the human host, being alex, keeping the powers in check.

Alex is excellent in different kinds of combat and even more better as the ghost rider

At night Alex's powers increase both in strength and size, making them much more powerful as well as dangerous then they already are.

Alex is able to force the ghost rider to transform

Family: Johnny Blaze (father)

Vehicle: my link text

Other form: https://lh4.googleusercontent.com/-B-...

https://lh3.googleusercontent.com/-a6...

http://s596.photobucket.com/user/phei...

http://motorcycletravelamerica.com/us...

Other:
- is one of the most powerful and dangerous person in the x-men and in the school



『ᴡɪᴄᴋʟɪɴɢ ᴛʀᴀsʜ ● ɢᴏᴏᴅʙʏᴇ』 (wickling) | 26 comments
"is one of the most powerful and dangerous person in the x-men and in the school " Sounds pretty OP.



message 3: by Kikki (new)

Kikki (kikki-not-kiki) especially for a 19 year old


『ᴡɪᴄᴋʟɪɴɢ ᴛʀᴀsʜ ● ɢᴏᴏᴅʙʏᴇ』 (wickling) | 26 comments
Didn't they make a rule on magic, too?



message 5: by Kikki (new)

Kikki (kikki-not-kiki) Mm...I thinks its more of there's no magic in Xmen, just superpowers.


『ᴡɪᴄᴋʟɪɴɢ ᴛʀᴀsʜ ● ɢᴏᴏᴅʙʏᴇ』 (wickling) | 26 comments
"As an answer for the magic question:
It cannot be an all powerful magic. It has to be sort of...focused? into one central field."

I assume she means like pyromancy, conjuration, illusion, and so forth.



『ᴡɪᴄᴋʟɪɴɢ ᴛʀᴀsʜ ● ɢᴏᴏᴅʙʏᴇ』 (wickling) | 26 comments
Also, Invincibility? Only hurt by heavenly weapons and gods? There isn't any gods or heaven, I think. Isn't it just planets and aliens? Anyway, that is DEFINITELY OP.



message 8: by Kikki (new)

Kikki (kikki-not-kiki) ah okay, must have been buried in the other stuff haha


message 9: by Carlos (last edited Jun 02, 2015 01:55PM) (new)

Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 5 comments Ⓑⓘⓖ ● Ⓑⓐⓓ ● Ⓦⓤⓛⓕⓘⓔ『 Sᴜᴍᴍᴇʀ Hʏʙᴇʀɴᴀᴛɪᴏɴ | Hɪᴀᴛᴜs 』 wrote: ""is one of the most powerful and dangerous person in the x-men and in the school " Sounds pretty OP."

technically it really doesn't make him OP. Even though it says he is one of the most powerful and dangerous person in the x-men and in the school doesn't mean he can't be or is impossible to be beaten/defeated by anyone else and I'm pretty sure it says that "as the ghost rider Alex is invincible" meaning only in that form not any other form


message 10: by Carlos (new)

Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 5 comments Kikki (not Kiki)- ❝I would rather walk with a friend in the dark, than alone in the light.❞ wrote: "especially for a 19 year old"

and when jean grey was a kid she was very powerful for someone her age


message 11: by Kikki (last edited Jun 02, 2015 02:05PM) (new)

Kikki (kikki-not-kiki) Rather than try to argue as I'm already seeing it won't get far, I'll leave this to the mods to sort out since they can tell you easy enough if its too OP or not


message 12: by Carlos (new)

Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 5 comments Ⓑⓘⓖ ● Ⓑⓐⓓ ● Ⓦⓤⓛⓕⓘⓔ『 Sᴜᴍᴍᴇʀ Hʏʙᴇʀɴᴀᴛɪᴏɴ | Hɪᴀᴛᴜs 』 wrote: ""As an answer for the magic question:
It cannot be an all powerful magic. It has to be sort of...focused? into one central field."

I assume she means like pyromancy, conjuration, illusion, and so ..."


I never put that his magical is all powerful. I put that he is able to use magic though the spells rely on his strength/energy and the spells can take either small or large amounts of Alex's strength/energy depending on what kind of spell it is, how big the spell is and how powerful it is. So basically he can use magic but if it is an extremely powerful spell such as destroying an entire continent or spells/magice as powerful as that then yea it would either be impossible for him to do or he could do it but it would kill him without an doubt


message 13: by Carlos (new)

Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 5 comments Ⓑⓘⓖ ● Ⓑⓐⓓ ● Ⓦⓤⓛⓕⓘⓔ『 Sᴜᴍᴍᴇʀ Hʏʙᴇʀɴᴀᴛɪᴏɴ | Hɪᴀᴛᴜs 』 wrote: "Also, Invincibility? Only hurt by heavenly weapons and gods? There isn't any gods or heaven, I think. Isn't it just planets and aliens? Anyway, that is DEFINITELY OP."

and there is an character that someone made that they put that the character can use the power of god or heaven


message 14: by Kikki (last edited Jun 02, 2015 02:32PM) (new)

Kikki (kikki-not-kiki) Carlos wrote: "Ⓑⓘⓖ ● Ⓑⓐⓓ ● Ⓦⓤⓛⓕⓘⓔ『 Sᴜᴍᴍᴇʀ Hʏʙᴇʀɴᴀᴛɪᴏɴ | Hɪᴀᴛᴜs 』 wrote: "Also, Invincibility? Only hurt by heavenly weapons and gods? There isn't any gods or heaven, I think. Isn't it just planets and aliens? Any..."

I don't see that power listed as an approved character, are you sure you're looking in the right group for that? Its not even in any of the other character creation threads as a WIP or not yet approved character with that power


message 15: by Lexa (last edited Jun 02, 2015 02:33PM) (new)

Lexa (x1d4dbx1f30cx1d4e3x1d4d2) | 100 comments It'd be good if the character had some pros and some cons. So far, (from what I can see), he is the ideal superhero, but not a very balanced X man. He gets all the girls, he can perform magic, he can go super Saiyan, etc... And to top it all off, he is one of the most powerful mutants in the school.

What I would suggest is making his demonic form out of control, and not invulnerable, just very powerful at telekinesis, so he can control solids, liquids, gases, etc, instead of magic. Prehaps he can only use a fragment of his power in his base form, eg: tipping over cups, making ripples in water. As for looks, there must be a setback; maybe he isn't into getting into a relationship, as he is afraid of his powers hurting them... Or maybe he is simply an obnoxious late teen looking to get laid. As for the class... You could consider making him a sort of student, but focusing solely on controlling his powers.


『ᴡɪᴄᴋʟɪɴɢ ᴛʀᴀsʜ ● ɢᴏᴏᴅʙʏᴇ』 (wickling) | 26 comments
The mod said "As an answer for the magic question:
It cannot be an all powerful magic. It has to be sort of...focused? into one central field."

And yes, he seems VERY OP to me. Invincibility, only killed by gods? Claiming they are among the most powerful? Power-playing.



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