Completed YA Fantasy – 97k (Magical Squid Game)

[James]

Hi. I'm looking for a fresh set of eyes to give feedback on my completed manuscript that is a mix of Squid Game and Blood At The Root set in a secret 51st and only magical state in America.

I prefer to read Fantasy, but I can swap with any genre (except romance it's not really my thing).

Thanks.

Best,

James

[Nicholas]

Hello James, I am interested in swapping manuscripts for critique. I love fantasy books and could provide feedback within 2-3 weeks.
Here is some information on my book.

1. Title (working title is fine): American Dark-Age


2. Genre: Post-apocalyptic/Destopian


3. Word count: 111,000


4. Summary: It's a dystopian/post-apocalyptic novel about 110,000 words. The book is told from the perspective of a young man named Ruggard who must go on an odyssey through the often brutal, Balkanized post-apocalyptic America.


5. Any specific feedback you’re looking for: How well the story flows and if the characters feel real enough, emotions, etc. Any other feedback is welcome.

Please feel free to ask me any questions you may have.

[James]

Nicholas wrote: "Hello James, I am interested in swapping manuscripts for critique. I love fantasy books and could provide feedback within 2-3 weeks.
Here is some information on my book.

1. Title (working title i..."

Hi Nicholas,

Awesome! You can email me at Jamesgettys52@gmail.com with a list of questions/areas you'd like me to focus on if there are any in addition to the feedback you already mentioned.

Best,

James