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message 1: by Mari (last edited Aug 14, 2025 12:56PM) (new)

Mari Morgan | 8 comments HI everyone, I’m lookin for 1 or 2 beta readers for my completed romantic comedy A Very Improper Affair approx 100,000.
In return, I’d love to give you feedback/beta read on your own book of approx the same amount of words or less if you like. I am interested in romantic comedy, historical romance ( if it takes place in the Uk) —not anything American historical- and I love time travel romance. I am an avid reader and have been writing stories since i was a child. I am a kind editor—I know how difficult it is to write a book. I am gentle with my feedback. As for my own book here is my blurb!
Quincy Kirk crossed the Atlantic for her PhD, not a boyfriend. During a break from Oxford, she’s sent to catalogue the private library at a crumbling English estate. She expected dust, deadlines and maybe the occasional ghost, certainly not Edward Harrington: infuriating arrogant , frustratingly handsome….With sparks flying a little sister bent on engineering a happily-ever-after, and a chorus of posh London friends who wield snobbery like a social weapon, Quincy and Edward find themselves tangled in something dangerously close to love.
I am looking for beta readers to let me know. 1/ did the story hold your attention
2/did the pacing feel right for a romantic comedy. 3/ was the ending satisfying
4/were my characters likeable 5/ (the hardest one) were the steamy scenes steamy!! 6/ were there any parts that felt confusing or off. 7/if you had picked this up on kindle unlimited, would you have read it to the end. 8/ at what point (hopefully it doesnt) did it lose your interest.
Thanks everyone.
PS on a spicy level it’s probably a 3 outta 5.


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