Special August Offer: 2 Chapters Free + Discounted Full Read

[Harmeet]

Your story deserves more than polite and boring “I liked it” comments. You need detailed, honest feedback that pinpoints exactly where readers get hooked, where pacing starts to drag, which characters they will connect with, and which scenes could be unforgettable with the right adjustments.

For the month of August, I am offering a FREE beta read of your first two chapters. You will receive detailed, actionable feedback on reader engagement, pacing, tone, flow, character connection, and any early red flags for plot or clarity.

If you are satisfied with my feedback style, you will receive 20% off a full-manuscript beta read booked this month.

I have a background in line editing and proofreading, which means I can address both story-level and sentence-level issues. My feedback is constructive, specific, and tailored to your genre and target audience. I work with a variety of genres including fantasy, romance, and thrillers, and my goal is always to help you produce the strongest version of your work.

Your feedback report will include chapter-by-chapter notes highlighting strengths and areas for improvement, suggestions for tightening pacing and building tension, comments on worldbuilding, dialogue authenticity, and character depth, as well as reader-perspective questions that show where your audience may crave more.

❗️Limited Slots: I take only 3–4 authors per month so I can give each book my full attention. Once slots fill, this deal closes.

Bonus: Includes light proofreading to catch distracting typos or grammar slips at no additional cost.

To book your beta read, email me at harmeetkhera0@gmail.com :)