Update Description of Tomiétrèla

[Kolter]

Hello,

I would like the description to be updated on my book Tomiétrèla. The description is:

"
In a dying world, a young girl, Dorothy, is thrust into The Grand City. She seeks to escape this city but has to travel through 454 rooms to room 0.

But, "The further you are from your room, the more and more of your body turns into sand." Could she truly escape?
"

Thank you,
Kolter Sands

[Greg]

Done.