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message 1: by Marianna (new)

Marianna Porterfield | 2 comments Hi everyone!

I’m looking for a beta reader (or two!) to read the first two chapters of my fantasy reverse harem novel and share your honest thoughts.

A little about the book:
It’s a character-driven fantasy with romantic tension, emotional stakes, a strong heroine, and several morally complex love interests. If you enjoy slow-burn magic, worldbuilding with heart, and relationships that develop over time, this might be your thing!

A little about me:
This is my very first book, and writing has always been something I deeply wanted to do. I finally took the leap, and now I’m hoping to find out—does this story have potential? Is it something worth polishing and continuing?

What I’m looking for:

General impressions: Does it hook you? Do the characters feel alive?

Language feedback: English is not my first language, so I’d truly appreciate notes on flow, grammar, and natural phrasing.

Style & clarity: Does the writing feel engaging and clear?

This is an early draft, so I’m not looking for line edits—just honest, kind feedback to help me grow as a writer.

If you’re open to reading few chapters and sharing your thoughts, I would be so grateful!


message 2: by Kate (new)

Kate Rybak | 1 comments Hi there!
I’d love to read your work and share my thoughts.
Feel free to contact me at: katyarkatya13@gmail.com


message 3: by Liz (last edited Jul 02, 2025 05:15AM) (new)

Liz (joycecarolnopes) | 535 comments Mod
Hey M,

Welcome to the community. Just a heads up: We've been dealing with a scammer issue in the last couple of months. You may want to check out this thread:
https://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/...

Best of luck,

Lisa


message 4: by Ana P (new)

Ana P  | 42 comments Hello, Marianna!
Would love to take a look at it!
I leave u my email 15porterhernandezanapaula@gmail.com


message 5: by Jochebed (new)

Jochebed Praise | 20 comments Hey Marianna, am interested in beta reading your novel to give you an honest and indepth feedback. You can share your manuscripts with me on jochebedpraise37@gmail.com


message 6: by Giovanni (new)

Giovanni Jacobs | 382 comments Hey Marianna! That sounds like a reasonable request. I can certainly do that for you.
I'll the first 2 chapters for you.
DM me.


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