Sneak-peak of my WIP

[⋆｡‧˚ʚ Shawna ɞ˚‧｡⋆]

Soon Wade and I were chuckling. About the absurdity of the situation. About our homes. Of course this was only a glimpse of my real laugh. Like Andy warned, don’t get too comfy.
Once we were finally done laughing, I sunk against the cold stone wall. Wade strided over and his burly figure sank down next to me. He sighed as if to spark something. I shot him a glance and a quick smirk as I tipped my head back. A metal bar above my head caught my attention. I hopped to my feet yet I still couldn’t seem to reach the bar.
Strong hands grasped my waist. I gasped at the sudden contact.
“Sorry to startle you. Looked like you needed some help,” he chuckled. I shot him a quick eye roll as he lifted me to the bar; yet I was smirking. My hands repositioned themselves on the cold metal and I started to pull myself up just like when I was a kid and used to climb the old birch tree in my backyard. I would sit under the droopy leaves and watch the sunrise every day. I didn’t have as much practice as I did as a child but I could still easily pull myself up to the top several times. His arms stayed under me but he didn’t need to assist me again after I reached the bar.
I saw my muscles strain. My tight corset made it harder to use my core. When my arms couldn’t pull me up any longer, I started to drop to the floor. When I expected my boots to hit the ground; they didn’t. Instead I landed in a pair of burly arms. I scrambled to my feet out of embarrassment; my face evidently getting red.
He chuckled at my sudden flush.
Why does he have to be such a gentleman? I absolutely hate it.
Just then Andy barges through the door holding a ring of keys. I’m suddenly aware of how close Wade and I were standing. My flushed face and the tension in the room made Andy’s presence feel awkward. He cleared his throat to speak.
“I wanted to show you guys the roof before I let you finally rest for the night–or whatever you two were planning to do.”

[⋆｡‧˚ʚ Shawna ɞ˚‧｡⋆]

Constructive criticism is welcome of course!

[Rowan]

Does take place in the 17th or 18th century? Or is it a purely fictional world?
Are they in a jail cell? Or locked somewhere they can’t get out of?

Also, I really liked it.

[⋆｡‧˚ʚ Shawna ɞ˚‧｡⋆]

It is a fictional world yes and they are in a cabin because they needed help from the elves on their quest. Also I’m glad you liked it!