Can I read your first chapter for free? (It’s my way of saying hi)

[Rele]

Writing a book is a wild, beautiful ride — but even the best stories risk losing readers in ways that are hard to see from the inside. Maybe it’s a subtle pacing dip, a plot thread that gets tangled, or a character beat that doesn’t land quite right.

That’s where I come in.

I’m a beta reader who loves catching those disconnect moments — the places where a reader might pause, skim, or put the book down — and gently helping you find ways to pull them back in. I read with care, clarity, and the goal of helping your story truly connect with the people it’s meant for.

If you’d like a second pair of eyes on your first chapter (for free!), I’d love to read it and share a short, honest breakdown of what’s working and where your story might lose someone — plus how to keep them hooked instead.

Send me a message if that sounds good — no pressure, just a human who loves stories offering a soft landing for yours. ✨

P.S. If you ever need a break from edits, I’ll be crocheting or sketching something I’ll probably never finish — feel free to distract me

[Makara]

Hey! I’d love to share my first chapter with you! Should I email it along?

[Rele]

Yes, sounds great. My email is relekgware@gmail.com