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Nicole Moore | 5 comments ⚔️JOIN MY BETA TEAM FOR THE LIGHT OF DARKNESS🌗

Hi friends! I’m looking for a small, committed group of beta readers for my new historical fantasy novel, The Light of Darkness — Book 1 of 5 in The Darkborn Prophecies series. Whether you can commit to this one book or possibly join me for the entire 5-book journey, I’d be honored to have you on this team.

Set in England during the Black Plague of 1349, this historical fantasy brings the superstitions of the time to life — think angels and demons, druid seers and warriors, prophecy and power, and a rising darkness only the light can stand against.

The book has already been soft-released on Amazon (available now in eBook and paperback), but I’m preparing for a final, polished re-release in 4 weeks, a month before the second book The Shadows of Darkness will be released—and I want to make it the best it can be. (I’ll be sending sign up forms for the second book “The Shadows of Darkness” soon.)

I’m looking for beta readers who can read the full novel within 2-3 weeks and give feedback on specific story elements (don’t worry—grammar isn’t one of them).

What kind of feedback I need:
• Pacing – Did any parts drag or feel rushed?
• Plot clarity – Were there confusing or unrealistic moments?
• Character development – Did the characters feel real and compelling? Who were your favorite, not so favorite and what you wished to see more from them? If anything.
• Emotional engagement – Did you feel something? Were certain scenes powerful (or not)? What was your favorite scene? (I know mine 😉) What was your least and why?
• Continuity – Did anything feel like a plot hole or unfinished thread such as unresolved mysteries or moments??
• Dialogue – Did the conversations flow naturally? Any awkward spots?
• World-building – Did the setting and magic feel immersive and clear?

You don’t need to worry about grammar or sentence structure. I want to know what moved you, what confused you, what made you turn the page or want to stop.

There are limited spots so I can really take in each person’s feedback—so if this sounds like you, please sign up below! Available Formats: ePub, PDF, Word on BookFunnel or I can email it to you.

Google Form Sign Up Here for FREE copy 👉: https://forms.gle/rrkHAQwqyyJnEySs7

More about me & the book 👉: www.nicolemooreauthor.com
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Thanks for helping me bring this story—and series—to life.
—Nicole 🥰


Liz~In~Colorado  (usershow187510908-liz-incolorado) | 5 comments Hi Nicole 🌷

I sent you an email.. I'm not sure what happened originally but still want very much to be part of the whole 5 bk read! Bookfunnel would be great!
Liz ❤️
Parrotheadedseasiren@gmail.com


Nicole Moore | 5 comments I emailed you 🥰🙏


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Elia. K | 6 comments Hi, my name is Elia Kha, I was wondering if you do physical copies? Your book looks great, and if it's possible I would like to request a physical copy. If that's not possible I completely understand!

Thank you so much for your time!
-Elia

My email is ekb00k8@gmail.com


Liz~In~Colorado  (usershow187510908-liz-incolorado) | 5 comments Nicole wrote: "I emailed you 🥰🙏"

Got it!


Nicole Moore | 5 comments Elia, I emailed you ☺️🙏


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