Professional Book Editing Services – Developmental, Line Editing, and Beta Reading for Fiction and Non-Fiction

[M.M.]

I used Hayley for some beta-reading services. She did some amazing work and helped me sharpen my first draft. I highly recommend!

[Cat]

Hayley did some beta reading for my manuscript, and she was super detailed and thorough. Her feedback was very insightful and useful and I really recommend her services for anyone looking for a beta reader.

[Michael]

Hayley David provided an extraordinary review of my first few chapters!
I am incredibly grateful for her thoughtful and detailed feedback. Her keen eye for character development and pacing helped me identify areas where my story lacked clarity and where my characters needed more consistency with reader expectations. She offered constructive suggestions that inspired several key revisions. Her comments were always clear, actionable, and encouraging, which made the revision process much less daunting.
What truly set this beta reader apart was her ability to balance critique with praise. She highlighted my manuscript's strengths, which boosted my confidence, while also challenging me to push my writing further. Her professionalism, reliability, and genuine enthusiasm for my story made her an invaluable voice representing potential readers. I highly recommend her to any writer seeking honest, insightful, and supportive feedback.

[Andrea]

Hayley gave me a really detailed feedback of my work, highlighting key points that helped me massively to improve the flow of my novel.

I really recommend her services because she will do a great job! guaranteed!

[Henshin]

Hayley gave free feedback on my first chapter. She offered both spirit-boosting strengths and thoughtful suggestions for improvement. I greatly appreciate the care and attention—it’s clear she reads with both kindness and insight.

[Steven]

Hayley provided the best feedback of any of the seven beta readers I used for my most recent book. She highlighted strengths, potential areas for improvements, pacing (good and bad), characterization, and a plethora of other story elements that helped me polish the story into a brilliant shine. I will definitely consult her with my next book. I can't recommend her highly enough!