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Which voice: is it First ("I"), Second ("You"), Third ("He/She"), or somewhere in between?
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I am currently reading this book and I am trying to decide what voice is this. Here is the first couple of sentences.
"On the corner of Lenox and 135th Street, stood a deadbeat town with deadbeat folks looking for a deadbeat time. The only sign of life for undead folks was at Jimbo’s hamburger palace, where you could be an American hero."
Any suggestion?