OUT OF LUX discussion


True. Evelyn probably isn't aware of the fact that it is an act. And I agree, she probably wouldn't approve of Lala's friendship with Elara and Lysa. We can see how that goes :)
@Bella Sounds good! And if she and her husband ever found out about Athena's boyfriend? Oh boy, the drama that would happen lol.
@Elizabeth
Yeah, Evelyn and Alianna probably wouldn't have interact with her each much. But they would probably get along since she acts like a typical Delacroix lol. But she truly does have a kind side, she just feels like she would bring the Delacroix name down if she showed it more.

@ elizabeth
That's a really good point about the hospitals - completely makes sense that they're all under Thorne control! I think we can work with that corrupted administrator angle though? Maybe?
What if instead of focusing on hospitals, Kieran works at the intersection where Thorne medical resources meet other noble houses? Like maybe he discovered that some medical supplies were being diverted or misused by other houses for less noble purposes (like the Calicos using healing crystals for jewelry instead of medical equipment, or something like that).
And yeah, the gambling den would need to work differently without money - maybe it's trading in favors, secrets, or rare magical items instead? That could actually make it more interesting!
I think you're right that Avaliyah would appreciate the uncovering of corruption part - maybe that's something they could bond over if they reconnect? The tension could come from his methods rather than his goals, which would make for interesting family dynamics I think!

Ash!
Yep! And that angle sounds like it could work for me too! I’m sorry there’s so much to discuss and alter
Ooh…I like that! The calicos would absolutely do something like that too, they and the seaveys and Delacroix’s are the worst lol and very classist and traditional in many senses, they’d totally use medical equipment for like. Potions or poisons (well one would) or take like, pain medications because they want them lol. At least some members would so that’s actually a really fun idea
I like that too actually! And that’s something that, yeah, avaliyah wouldn’t like and neither would her mother so that could add some tension as well. And yes! Agreed about them bonding over that if they reconnect but having tension over some methods. Like. If she knew calicos or someone noble was using equipment in a bad way, she’d want it to stop, and she can abide by some morally questionable methods, but I think gambling would leave a bad taste in her mouth haha

No worries! I'm just coming into the group and want to work with what's already there and developed rather than making people feel like I'm running the show. I should have really looked through the other characters before starting on him!
I've updated Kieran in my brainstorms based on our conversation. If you wanna take a look? see if I'm missing anything.
I think this gives Kieran and Avaliyah an interesting dynamic - they share core values about helping people, but his methods would definitely create some family tension.
Maybe we can wait to see if the mods approve of this direction before I get started on making his full character sheet? I'm excited about the potential here!

Okay, well, I see this got handled immediately! I was going to hop in and offer guidance but I see our older members were on it immediately. Thank you, Bella and Ezzabee! And Ash, I know this group has a lot going on and that there are many pre-existing things to get information on, but I promise there's a place here for you. I know people tend to worry that they're unwelcome in older groups that have a lot of pre-established plots and dynamics, but we truly have so many areas that need characters and dynamics worked out! Just wanted to offer that reassurance, I really appreciate how receptive and understanding you are about things! 🧡

Absolutely makes sense! And it’s okay, truly. I’ll take a look, and yeah! We can have the mods check for sure.
I agree it does! And me too :)
Okay just checked and seems good to me! Love the face claim

Thank you both so much! It really means a lot, especially coming into an established group with such rich worldbuilding.
@Rory - I appreciate the reassurance! I was a bit nervous about joining a group with so many dynamics, but everyone has been incredibly helpful and welcoming. I'm excited to find my place in Lux and contribute to the ongoing stories.
@Elizabeth - I'm glad the updated concept works! I'm really liking how Kieran is shaping up as a character with connections to your Thorne family while still having his own distinct path. And thanks for the face claim feedback - Rome Flynn feels perfect for the character I'm envisioning!
I'm looking forward to getting the official green light from the mods so I can start building out Kieran's full character sheet.

True. Evelyn probably isn't aware of the fact that it is an act. And I agree, she probably wouldn't approve of Lala's friendship with Elara and Lysa. We can see how that goes :)
@Bella So..."
sounds good!

@ash
You’re welcome! And so am I :) this will be fun, I’m excited someone’s making another Thorne actually. And your concept is great, thank you so much for working with what I had established/your patience and I hope it didn’t change Kieran too much from your OG vision

AIDEN
FINAL CALICO KID IS DONE?!?!
Okay Kyleigh what are your thoughts for familial relations? I see he’s angry at Eadric (who isn’t), but does he hide this anger from his father?
And before she left, Alianna probably disliked how kind and shy Aiden was, but she acted sweet to his face or when in public, but if she did bully him she probably blackmailed or threatened him to keep quiet
Artemisia probably wants to get close to him because she also adores school and is a kinder person but worries he hates her for not being his mothers daughter


Finally finished him lol. So for Eadric, yeah, he mostly just hides his anger for him, as he's afraid of how he would react.
I can totally see Alianna acting like that in front him. He wanted to tell Eadric and Elara how terrible of a person she is, but he knows that they wouldn't believe since they adore her so much.
I can get by that! He doesn't hate Artemisia, just the fact that she's not Elara's daughter. Maybe they can have some type of conversation about it?
@Bella
XD. Yeah, maybe they have more a strained relationship because of that? But they could bond over their love for math and science?

yeah, that sounds good. there's also the whole Alex not being elara's son thing (although that is a well-kept secret). for the record, Alex also hates that.

okay cool. I hadn’t been sure so I wanted to clarify, thank you!
Yup…yeah Eadric definitely wouldn’t believe him, he’s probably fired like one staff member who dared to try to tell him Alianna was being a borderline abuser
I am down for that conversation!!

we have a complete set of calicos <3
elara would probably love aiden a lot because he is her son and he is kind and gentle and very loving

and let's not get started on all the forbidden or at the very least not "ideal" romances...

the calicos are the literal definition of a mess
but there’s also the delacroixs…"
I feel like the Delacroix’s are less of a mess but they, the calicos, and seaveys are absolutely awful lol


i love that we made them before any other noble family existed and now their prejudice against the other nobility is proven to be at least in part valid. they're wilding out there, including fae and taz's parents

bella! obviously I'm gonna change the first three pictures but this was my thought so far xd https://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/...