Feedback on reading to the public

[Paul]

I wanted to share with you my brief reading from a short story I wrote called "The Portal." The story is one of 20 stories and poems in a new anthology called "Crescendo: A Community of Writers" (on Amazon). Since I have not done this often, any feedback or tips on my speaking style would be appreciated.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xU_Ph...