Feedback required on Self-Help book blurb

[Cristian]

For this type of books I have not searched the market so not sure how the blurbs usually are. Still I have a few pointers:

For your hook, consider strengthening the opening line to directly address the reader: "Ever stood at the edge of a cliff, peering into an abyss that mirrors your deepest despair? This is where the transformative journey of Breaking EGO's Chain begins."
Or something like that instead of imagine. Relate to the audience you reaching out to instead of teaching to a new one or teaching to the one that already in that position.

Work on the flow a bit more to ensure a smooth transition between sections. For instance, add a bridging phrase between the bullet points and the "Why This Book?" section: "In addition to these discoveries, you'll also learn why this book stands out."
Something like that. Again though, if this is common in this type of books then keep the format, just do some market research on it.

Call to Action: Strengthen the call to action to make it more compelling: "Don't wait any longer. Start your journey towards inner peace and resilience today. Get your copy now and transform your life!"

Hope that helps a bit.

[Cristian]

This will be in the back of the book? If so it's too long and you will either have to make the fonts too small or remove some things. I would go with the ladder. Condense it and remove the author bio. You can have a author bio inside the book. Remember that a Blurb is a great hook for people to even think on reading your books. I am busy so I can't look at every detail on this second round but those would be my tips.