Seeking Paid Beta Reader for Psychological Thriller (First Three Chapters)

[Chris]

Hi Beta Readers,

I'm seeking a paid beta reader for the first three chapters of my psychological thriller (approximately 15 pages/6000 words). Your insights would be invaluable in refining the first part of my manuscript and I'm particularly interested in pacing, character development, and overall engagement feedback.

The synopsis is below. If you're available and interested, please email me (chris[dot]a[dot]tubbs[at]gmail[dot]com) your rates and turnaround time.

I look forward to the possibility of working with you.

Best regards,

Chris
chris[dot]a[dot]tubbs[at]gmail[dot]com

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Synopsis:

Late twenties schoolteacher Ellie Harper can’t believe her luck: she’s finally met the perfect man in San Francisco. He’s handsome, charming, and leads a jet-setting life doing lucrative cyber surveillance work for the US government.

But there’s one problem: everything about him is a lie.

When Ellie realizes this, she ends the relationship to protect herself and quickly rebounds with a new man. But she soon finds out she’s pregnant.

Five months have passed since the breakup, and she’s just beginning a suburban life, having rebounded with a nice guy, when she uncovers a terrifying truth about her ex: he’s still madly in love with her and will never move on.

Because once you fall for him, he won't let you go. He’ll stop at nothing to prove his love—harassment, spying, blackmail—whatever it takes. Nowhere is safe, neither online nor offline, until you're back in his loving arms.

With her life and family at stake, Ellie realizes there is only one way to escape him.

[Dana]

Sounds wonderful Chris!

I'd be interested, haven't read a thriller in a while!
I can send an email your way, but I'll post a message here too for your reference. If you get this before my email, feel free to check out my page with terms and testimonies.

https://prestoverse.blogspot.com/p/be...

We'd have to negotiate on price, but I can guarantee you for just a few chapters it'd be super cheap =)

Talk to you soon,
Dana Thompson

[Precious]

Ooh I'm excited!
Hello Chris, I would very much love to read your manuscript as I am a lover of thrillers(all kinds)

So far, my most beloved psychological thriller is Behind her eyes by Sarah pinbourogh and I got giddy reading your blurb.

this is my email reshyreads@gmail.com

your email address isn't clear so I'll try and send you an email but you can email me too.

I sincerely look forward to working with you.

[Emmanuel]

Hi Chris,
I'd be happy to beta read your first 3 chapters if you're still in need of a beta reader. You may place your order at https://www.fiverr.com/s/2KKdbWX at $10 or reach me at emmanbetareader@gmil.com if necessary.
I hope to hear from you,
Warm regards,
Emmanuel

[Melinda]

I am interested in beta reading your book. It sounds like an amazing story. I am trying to get back into beta reading after a hiatus and this would be a wonderful start. I have beta reading experience with a variety of genres and would love to find out if we are a good fit. I have worked with authors on Goodreads, Amazon, and Upwork. I am excited to get started since I love to read and review books. I look forward to hearing from you and wish you all the best in your book's success whether you choose me to work with or not. I'm flexible with the price and my turnaround time is whenever you need it to be.

[Tina]

Hi Chris,
The blurb sounds really interesting! I would love to help you out! Given your word count, I would charge 10.00 $ dollars Canadian. Feel free to email at latine33@hotmail.com if you are still looking for someone

[Harmeet]

Hey Chris,

I'd love to read the chapters. The blurb sounds really intriguing! If you're interested, please reach me at harmeetkhera05@gmail.com :)

[Haley]

Hi Chris,

I'd love to give your book a read! I have 9 years of experience as a beta and proof reader. My turn around is 5-10 days depending on the length of the piece.

I provide in-line feedback as well as an end report.

my webpage is-
haleysproofreadingandbetaservice.wordpress.com

please email haleybo@hotmail.co.uk if interested.

[David]

Hey, as a beta readeer I can provide you my honest feedback in characters, pace of the story, plot development and an overall impression. Keep in mind I would give you my honest opinion. Also my packages are pretty affordable for what they provide you with. I have a cheaper package that I'll read up to 25k words and It's just 20 dollars. My premium one, I'll read up to 100k words and it's just 65 dollars, what a bargain. We can always negotiate prices. I have a profile on Fiverr, where you can get to know me better and also see my reviews. I can also send you 2 of my works. In case you still have any doubt, you can email me: davidthompsonwriter@gmail.com or just add me on discord: davidthompson98 for more info.

[Ashley]

I am interested in reading for you. As an experienced reader with references, I think I would be a good fit for you. tainer.1@osu.edu if you would like to reach out. I would do the 1st chapter free to see if we are a good fit.

[Anna]

Hi Chris, I would live to beta read for you.

Here are my rates and what I offer.

I will read your story and send you very detailed feedback, often times specifying what are my reflections as I am reading. (a reader report)
I will focus on:
- the characters (are they likable, enjoyable, did you manage your goal of making them awful ...)

- the story (pacing, great moments, twists, dead ends, dragging parts...)

- is your world believable? Is it detailed enough, or too detailed. 

-repetitions, beautifully written parts, quotes I loved.

$20 for 10000 words (2 days delivery)
$60 for 50000 words (7 days delivery)
$100 for a 100000 words (12 days delivery)

My email is andzela_a@yahoo.com
References and sample work are available upon request.
Martin Brisebois mbrisebois@lbpearson.ca
Tammy Euliano teuliano@gmail.com
Jaclyn Warren jcwarren1194@gmail.com
Maggie Shaw maggie.shaw@eregendal.com
Guy Boutin firfytr@aol.com

Regards, 
Anna

[Marvin]

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Here are my rates and what I offer.

I will read your story and send you very detailed feedback, often times specifying what are my reflections as I ..."

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[Melinda]

I have beta reading, proofreading, and editing experience and have written many book reviews for books on different platforms. I can beta read a book of any length and can work with any book genre. I am hardworking, reliable, responsible, organized, detail oriented and meet deadlines. I am an effective cross functional communicator, rapid and adaptive learner, committed high receiver, skilled collaborator, dynamic solution-oriented professional. I love beta reading, proofreading, editing and writing reviews and look forward to writing yours.
I am interested in your book. It sounds like an amazing story. I am trying to get back into beta reading, proofreading, and editing after a hiatus and this would be a wonderful start. I have experience with a variety of genres and would love to find out if we are a good fit. I have worked with authors on Goodreads, Amazon, and Upwork. I am excited to get started since I love to read and review books. I look forward to hearing from you and wish you all the best in your book's success whether you choose me to work with or not.
Here are my Upwork reviews:
"Melinda delivered excellent work on this project and we enjoyed working with her. Her communication was top-notch, she met all deadlines, and her skills were strong. She adapted and learned whatever had to be learned. At one point we asked for an additional milestone, and she was very forthcoming and happy to meet our new, changing requirements. She was hands-on through the entire process. Her greatest strength has to do with seeing the tiny details, some of which we did not see ourselves. On a personal note, I enjoyed working with her and undoubtedly have additional jobs for her in the future. Don’t hesitate. Hire her!"

"I would work with Melinda again. Her prompt communication, adherence to deadlines, and cooperation was much appreciated, and mark her as a true professional. She's very skilled at what she does, and I couldn't have asked for more. Thank you!"

"Great work! Will definitely rehire for future projects requiring reviews."

"Amazing job! Would definitely recommend her!"

"Excellent job"

[Caroline]

Hey Chris,

My name is Caroline. I offer beta reading services. I love reading Psychological thrillers and would love to beta read for you.

What You Can Expect:
✦ General impressions of your story's flow and consistency.
✦ In-depth critique of plot, characters, and pacing.
✦ Feedback on dialogue, writing style, and reader engagement.
✦ Chapter-by-chapter analysis for more detailed manuscripts.(If your work is split into chapters)
✦ A detailed report.
✦ Honest but Encouraging Critique

Since your manuscript is approximately 6000 words, You can pay me what you want

Contact me via email chapterchatswithcaroline or via my blog https://chapterchatswithcaroline.word...