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Who can help me writing my fantasy book please

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message 1: by Sanaa (new)

Sanaa | 164 comments I'm looking for ideas for my fantasy book please help mee
These are some of the main ideas that I liked and wanted to start my book with:
A girl who loves reading enters a small hidden library on a city street, taking her into another world
She finds herself in a time and place other than our time and place. The world is upside down there, where life begins at night, day goes to sleep, and so on


message 2: by Reva (new)

Reva Sanders ♠️♥️ (revasanders) | 8 comments This sounds like an interesting concept! what type of ideas specifically are you looking for? I.e., plot twists, opening scenes, characteristics or backgrounds of characters etc. please feel free to add me if you would like to discuss more!


message 3: by Sanaa (new)

Sanaa | 164 comments Thank you, but can you provide some ideas to complete the story because I really could not complete the remaining part (I mean, after the girl enters the other world, what happens next?)


message 4: by Zeeshan (new)

Zeeshan Ali Durrani | 23 comments that sounds very interesting, since you are creating a world upside down, you can create reverse aging, you enter old but grow young and eventually turn into a child, also you can create different floors for different ages like ground floor is for age 60-80 and then as the girl climbs up she first reaches 50-60 and then to 40-50 age group floors


message 5: by Zeeshan (new)

Zeeshan Ali Durrani | 23 comments the girl barely opens each book, books are actually scrolls of old parchment narrated to the reader(girl), each letter touches upon a story of life relating to that age group(floor) in which it is placed, now all you need is a set of stories..


message 6: by Sanaa (new)

Sanaa | 164 comments Exactly!! In the beginning, the girl is wandering around the city and finds herself in a rather dark street, in which she finds all the shops closed except for a small library lit with candles. She enters and finds an old man welcoming her. She is attracted by a strange and old book. She asks about its price, and the old man tells her, “It is free, but be careful because this is... The book could cost you your life.” The girl does not care about what he told her, so she leaves the library and opens it directly, but finds it empty. She enters the library again, but finds it empty of books and that old man, and finds the place completely different. She quickly exits and finds the sky dark. She runs quickly to her house and finds strange people in her house. She asks about her family, but they tell her that they have been hidden for a long time.


message 7: by Sanaa (new)

Sanaa | 164 comments and?


message 8: by Sanaa (new)

Sanaa | 164 comments Oh why writing a novel must be so hard! Suddenly thoughts flow into my mind and suddenly stop


message 9: by Zeeshan (new)

Zeeshan Ali Durrani | 23 comments hahha it's called writer's block, highly accomplished writers get through this..
I do like your story ngl, but it doesn't exactly fit into high fantasy, but I see that you wanna make it like Jumanji, every book a new adventure a new life like experience, honestly I also wanted to write for so long but couldn't get the time in all studies : (


message 10: by madzia.koziolek (new)

madzia.koziolek | 67 comments I think the best thing to do before actually writing the book is to shortly plan each chapter. If you do that you won’t have to stop in the middle of writing to think what should happen next


message 11: by madzia.koziolek (new)

madzia.koziolek | 67 comments also I love your idea!


message 12: by Zeeshan (new)

Zeeshan Ali Durrani | 23 comments but why are you being so hard on yourself?? get a page done daily or half a page, Madeline Miller took 10 years to write song of Achilles, give yourself time, and try to sprinkle seeds that grow on their own in their own time, why pre determine everything??


message 13: by Sanaa (new)

Sanaa | 164 comments Thank you for all your motivation! You really encouraged me to start writing this novel. I will read more books and collect ideas to complete it. All my love for you.


message 14: by Sanaa (new)

Sanaa | 164 comments Thanks, do you know what else? Since I invented the idea of ​​the upside down world, perhaps age can also be upside down, for example, gradually from old age to childhood. When a girl enters this world, she finds herself trapped by the laws of this world. She finds that she is one year older than her real age (before she enters this world, she will be 17 and after that she will be 18), so she has one year to leave this world, otherwise she will die and disappear forever. I personally liked this time, what about you?


message 15: by Judith Speed (new)

Judith Speed | 208 comments Who is the girl? How does she react to the new world? What is her back story? What motivates her? I think that when you delve deeper into this, the plot could open up.


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