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Who can help me writing a book?
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Jun 02, 2024 01:25PM
Who can help me writing a book?
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You already have something in mind? I could be your beta reader, and maybe give you suggestions if you're stuck
A girl who loves reading enters a small hidden library on a city street, taking her into another world She finds herself in a time and place other than our time and place. The world is upside down there, where life begins at night, day goes to sleep, and so on
Exactly!! In the beginning, the girl is wandering around the city and finds herself in a rather dark street, in which she finds all the shops closed except for a small library lit with candles. She enters and finds an old man welcoming her. She is attracted by a strange and old book. She asks about its price, and the old man tells her, “It is free, but be careful because this is... The book could cost you your life.” The girl does not care about what he told her, so she leaves the library and opens it directly, but finds it empty. She enters the library again, but finds it empty of books and that old man, and finds the place completely different. She quickly exits and finds the sky dark. She runs quickly to her house and finds strange people in her house. She asks about her family, but they tell her that they have been hidden for a long time.
I find this an interesting beginning. Do you plan it to be a time traveling type book, in which she goes to different chapters of the book that in turn takes her to different times and places, maybe to do that for future books.Do you have an ending in mind?
Thanks, do you know what else? Since I invented the idea of the upside down world, perhaps age can also be upside down, for example, gradually from old age to childhood. When a girl enters this world, she finds herself trapped by the laws of this world. She finds that she is one year older than her real age (before she enters this world, she will be 17 and after that she will be 18), so she has one year to leave this world, otherwise she will die and disappear forever. I personally liked this time, what about you?
Interesting. Or she starts at 18, then she finds out she grows younger with each year. In which she could go back to 17, then 16 and so on.
