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message 1: by Crystal (new)

Crystal | 1 comments Title: Sound of Nothing
Genre: YA high fantasy
Length: 94k words
Timeframe: End of June would be best, but I'm flexible.

Blurb:
In the peaceful and secluded Konota valley, every sixteen-year-old embarks on a sacred journey to find their animal soul-keeper. The life-long bond protects their soul from malicious demons that would devour it, leaving behind an empty husk. Quiet and uncertain Shaya hopes that finding her keeper will solidify her place in her tribe, but her return with a frightening beast—a mix of bird and reptile—drives her further to the fringes.

Shaya soon learns her keeper is a drakon, a legendary creature from the northern mountains, but her struggle for acceptance is hampered by invaders riding into the valley on the backs of more drakons. Not only is the safety of the entire tribe threatened, but Shaya’s place among them is in danger as well when they begin to question her loyalty. When circumstance forges a shaky friendship between Shaya and a headstrong drakon rider girl, she realizes the invaders might offer what she’s always wanted. She must decide whether finally belonging is worth turning her back on the people who rejected her and betraying the few who still believe in her.


message 2: by David (new)

David Thompson | 1 comments Hey, as a beta reader I can provide you with my honest feedback on characters, pace of the story, plot development and an overall impression. Keep in mind I would give you my honest opinion. Also my packages are pretty affordable for what they provide you with. I have a cheaper package that I'll read up to 25k words and It's just 20 dollars. My premium one, I'll read up to 100k words and it's just 65 dollars, what a bargain. We can always negotiate prices. I have a profile on Fiverr, where you can get to know me better and also see my reviews. I can also send you 2 of my works. In case you still have any doubt, you can email me: davidthompsonwriter@gmail.com or just add me on discord: davidthompson98 for more info.


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