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message 1: by Racheal (last edited Apr 24, 2025 01:38AM) (new)

Racheal Joy | 49 comments Hello, soon to be satisfied client.

I'm Racheal and I'm here to use my magic fingers on my keyboard to give your novel a fresh outlook. With plenty of experience under my belt from sleepless nights devouring my favorite novels and fictional works, I look out for details that can make all the difference. I work mostly with romance, erotica, mystery, crime, paranormal, fantasy, historical fiction, suspense and thriller genres.
I look out for;

 •Plot structure and pacing
 •Character arcs and development
 •Factual errors and descriptions
 •Setting and theme
 •Tone, voice and point of view

I deliver in-line comments and possible suggestions with the use of Google docs. I also deliver a fully comprehensive reader report detailing my honest and reliable feedback.

My rates are $1.1/1000 words. Contact me via jegedetemitope78@gmail.com. As you skim through this summary, I strongly believe you are one step closer to being a happy client.


message 2: by H (last edited May 17, 2024 12:26PM) (new)

H (readerwritergamerbooklover) | 4 comments I worked with Racheal, and she is a great beta reader! She finished my whole novel-length mystery manuscript with a very fast turnaround and gave really thorough feedback, catching several mistakes I had missed in my multiple passes. Then she gave me a thorough beta reader report on my piece, answering all the questions I had along the way as well as giving advice on more things. Definitely recommend her.

Also, she was very responsive and quick to reply to emails or messages. So I really enjoyed my experience working with her!


message 3: by Racheal (last edited Apr 24, 2025 01:39AM) (new)

Racheal Joy | 49 comments Hello everyone,
Still looking for an affordable and experienced beta reader?
Presently, there are 5 days to the end of the month and there is a vacant space for one more manuscript. If you would like that manuscript to be yours, contact me via jegedetemitope78@gmail.com
My rates remain $1.1/1000 words.
Let me be your experienced beta reader.


message 4: by Racheal (last edited Jun 06, 2024 05:52PM) (new)

Racheal Joy | 49 comments After beta reading for my client, Victoria she left a review as stated below;


"Hi! I went through it and I'm glad to have another eye look at my work. I really appreciate the comments and notes in different chapters but most especially the separate report. It carried the feedback I expected. I wanted a feedback from a readers perspective and I got it. I'm really glad that what seemed like plot holes and points of confusion were pointed out. And it didn't take a long time for the feedback which I also liked too. Thank you so much!"

If you would like to request my services, do not hesitate to contact me via jegedetemitope78@gmail.com. I can't wait to hear from you!!!


message 5: by Racheal (last edited Apr 24, 2025 01:40AM) (new)

Racheal Joy | 49 comments Hii everyone,

I'm Racheal and I'm here to carry your book to new heights. With plenty of experience under my belt from sleepless nights devouring my favorite novels and fictional works, I look out for details that can make all the difference.

I work mostly with romance, erotica, mystery, crime, paranormal, fantasy, historical fiction, suspense and thriller genres.
I look out for;

 •Plot structure and pacing
 •Character arcs and development
 •Factual errors and descriptions
 •Setting and worldbuilding
 •Tone, voice and point of view

I deliver in-line comments and suggestions with the use of Google docs and the MS word software. I also deliver a fully comprehensive reader report detailing my honest and reliable feedback.

My rates are $1.1/1000 words. Contact me via jegedetemitope78@gmail.com to receive competent delivery on your manuscript.


message 6: by Racheal (last edited Apr 24, 2025 01:41AM) (new)

Racheal Joy | 49 comments Hello, Dear Writers

Are you looking for a detailed and honest beta reader for your manuscript? I am Racheal and I am here to elevate your manuscript to the greatest height possible.

Presently, there are 10 days to the end of the month and 2 slots are available. If you want your manuscript to be handled with the best care, do not hesitate to contact me via jegedetemitope78@gmail.com.
My rates are $1.1/1000 words. I can't wait to hear from you.


message 7: by BYRON (new)

BYRON A | 11 comments I used Rachel's Beta Reader services and it was one of the best decisions I've made.

1. she has a fast turnaround time

2. she has a keen eye for detail and left me notes line for line and chapter for chapter. She caught holes in my plot that I had not considered

3. She is very polite. her criticisms are honest and she tells you the good and the bad? but tactfully enough to not hurt your feelings.

highly recommend


message 8: by Racheal (last edited Apr 24, 2025 01:41AM) (new)

Racheal Joy | 49 comments Hii everyone,

I'm Racheal and I'm here to be that fresh pair of eyes you require for your intellectual child. With plenty of experience under my belt from sleepless nights devouring my favorite novels and fictional works, I look out for details that can make all the difference and fall in tune with your characters, feeling their emotions along with them.

I work mostly with romance, erotica, mystery, crime, paranormal, fantasy, historical fiction, suspense and thriller genres.
I look out for;

 •Plot structure and pacing
 •Character arcs and development
 •Factual errors and descriptions
 •Setting and worldbuilding
 •Tone, voice and point of view

I deliver in-line comments and suggestions with the use of Google docs/MS word software. I also deliver a fully comprehensive reader report detailing my honest and reliable feedback.

My rates are $1.1/1000 words. Contact me via jegedetemitope78@gmail.com to receive competent delivery on your manuscript


message 9: by Racheal (last edited Apr 24, 2025 01:42AM) (new)

Racheal Joy | 49 comments Hello, Dear Writers

Are you looking for a detailed and honest beta reader for your manuscript? I am Racheal and I am here to elevate your manuscript to the greatest height possible.

Presently, there are 11 days to the end of the month and 3 slots are available. If you want your manuscript to be handled with the best care, do not hesitate to contact me via jegedetemitope78@gmail.com.
My rates are $1.1/1000 words. I can't wait to hear from you.


message 10: by Jocelyn (new)

Jocelyn Cordeiro | 1 comments I had a very good experience working with Racheal. She has a strong attention to detail, picking up on the smallest inconsistencies that I completely missed. She knows how to share her honest opinions without hurting your feelings.

I also want to mention that she is very patient. When it came time for payment, I was experiencing some difficulties with my PayPal and couldn't make the payment right away. Racheal was very patient during the ordeal. Thankfully, the payment went through.

Thank you so much Racheal. I look forward to working with you again in the future.


message 11: by Racheal (last edited Apr 24, 2025 01:43AM) (new)

Racheal Joy | 49 comments Hii everyone,

I'm Racheal and I'm here to be that fresh pair of eyes you require for your intellectual child. With plenty of experience under my belt from sleepless nights devouring my favorite novels and fictional works, I look out for details that can make all the difference and fall in tune with your characters, feeling their emotions along with them.

I work mostly with romance, erotica, mystery, crime, paranormal, fantasy, historical fiction, suspense and thriller genres.
I look out for;

 •Plot structure and pacing
 •Character arcs and development
 •Factual errors and descriptions
 •Setting and worldbuilding
 •Tone, voice and point of view

I deliver in-line comments and suggestions with the use of Google docs/MS word software. I also deliver a fully comprehensive reader report detailing my honest and reliable feedback.

My rates are $1.1/1000 words. Contact me via jegedetemitope78@gmail.com to receive competent delivery on your manuscript


message 12: by Racheal (last edited Apr 24, 2025 01:43AM) (new)

Racheal Joy | 49 comments Hii everyone,

I'm Racheal and I'm here to be that fresh pair of eyes you require for your intellectual child. With plenty of experience under my belt from sleepless nights devouring my favorite novels and fictional works, I look out for details that can make all the difference and fall in tune with your characters, feeling their emotions along with them.

I work mostly with romance, erotica, mystery, crime, paranormal, fantasy, historical fiction, suspense and thriller genres.
I look out for;

 •Plot structure and pacing
 •Character arcs and development
 •Factual errors and descriptions
 •Setting and worldbuilding
 •Tone, voice and point of view

I deliver in-line comments and suggestions with the use of Google docs/MS word software. I also deliver a fully comprehensive reader report detailing my honest and reliable feedback.

My rates are $1.1/1000 words. Contact me via jegedetemitope78@gmail.com to receive competent delivery on your manuscript


message 13: by Racheal (new)

Racheal Joy | 49 comments Halloween is coming, dear writers!

As the spooky season unfolds, I've been brewing up a special treat for you.

This Halloween, focus on crafting a story that will leave readers spellbound, not spooked.

I'm offering a 10% discount for all genres except horror. There are 10 days left for 6 lucky manuscripts to have this opportunity. Book my services to get quality beta reading providing:

- Constructive feedback to strengthen your narrative and plot
- Expert analysis to enhance character development, setting and world building
- Detailed suggestions for pacing, point of view and tone
- Correct factual errors and descriptions

For more information and further discussion, you can contact me via jegedetemitope78@gmail.com.
Can't wait to work with you!!!!


message 14: by Racheal (new)

Racheal Joy | 49 comments Halloween is near, dear writers!

This Halloween, focus on crafting a story that will leave readers spellbound, not spooked.

I'm offering a 10% discount for all genres except horror. There are 4 days left for 4 lucky manuscripts to have this opportunity. Book my services to get quality beta reading providing:

- Constructive feedback to strengthen your narrative and plot
- Expert analysis to enhance character development, setting and world building
- Detailed suggestions for pacing, point of view and tone
- Correct factual errors and descriptions

For more information and further discussion, you can contact me via jegedetemitope78@gmail.com.
Can't wait to work with you!!!!


message 15: by Brett (new)

Brett James | 1 comments Rachael was wonderful to work with! Her turn-around time was great, I really appreciated her in-line comments and feedback, and she helped refine my vision for my story. I can't recommend her enough!

I will definitely be working with her again in the future!


message 16: by Racheal (last edited Apr 24, 2025 01:44AM) (new)

Racheal Joy | 49 comments Hii everyone,

I'm Racheal and I'm here to be that fresh pair of eyes you require for your intellectual child. With plenty of experience under my belt from sleepless nights devouring my favorite novels and fictional works, I look out for details that can make all the difference and fall in tune with your characters, feeling their emotions along with them.

I work mostly with romance, erotica, mystery, crime, paranormal, fantasy, historical fiction, suspense and thriller genres.
I look out for;

 •Plot structure and pacing
 •Character arcs and development
 •Factual errors and descriptions
 •Setting and worldbuilding
 •Tone, voice and point of view

I deliver in-line comments and suggestions with the use of Google docs/MS word software. I also deliver a fully comprehensive reader report detailing my honest and reliable feedback.

My rates are $1.1/1000 words. Contact me via jegedetemitope78@gmail.com to receive competent delivery on your manuscript


message 17: by Racheal (last edited Apr 24, 2025 01:45AM) (new)

Racheal Joy | 49 comments Hii everyone,

I'm Racheal and I'm here to be that fresh pair of eyes you require for your intellectual child. With plenty of experience under my belt from sleepless nights devouring my favorite novels and fictional works, I look out for details that can make all the difference and fall in tune with your characters, feeling their emotions along with them.

I work mostly with romance, erotica, mystery, crime, paranormal, fantasy, historical fiction, suspense and thriller genres.
I look out for;

 •Plot structure and pacing
 •Character arcs and development
 •Factual errors and descriptions
 •Setting and worldbuilding
 •Tone, voice and point of view

I deliver in-line comments and suggestions with the use of Google docs/MS word software. I also deliver a fully comprehensive reader report detailing my honest and reliable feedback.

My rates are $1.1/1000 words. Contact me via jegedetemitope78@gmail.com to receive competent delivery on your manuscript


message 18: by Racheal (last edited Apr 24, 2025 01:45AM) (new)

Racheal Joy | 49 comments Hii everyone,

I'm Racheal and I'm here to be that fresh pair of eyes you require for your intellectual child. With plenty of experience under my belt from sleepless nights devouring my favorite novels and fictional works, I look out for details that can make all the difference and fall in tune with your characters, feeling their emotions along with them.

I work mostly with romance, erotica, mystery, crime, paranormal, fantasy, historical fiction, suspense and thriller genres.
I look out for;

 •Plot structure and pacing
 •Character arcs and development
 •Factual errors and descriptions
 •Setting and worldbuilding
 •Tone, voice and point of view

I deliver in-line comments and suggestions with the use of Google docs/MS word software. I also deliver a fully comprehensive reader report detailing my honest and reliable feedback.

My rates are $1.1/1000 words. Contact me via jegedetemitope78@gmail.com to receive competent delivery on your manuscript


message 19: by Virginia (new)

Virginia Burns | 2 comments Racheal read my work in progress and made notes along the way. She also provided general impressions and how it could be improved. I've already made revisions per her comments and suggestions. I appreciated her attention to detail and kind approach to critiquing my work.


message 20: by Racheal (last edited Apr 24, 2025 01:46AM) (new)

Racheal Joy | 49 comments Hii everyone,

I'm Racheal and I'm here to be that fresh pair of eyes you require for your intellectual child. With plenty of experience under my belt from sleepless nights devouring my favorite novels and fictional works, I look out for details that can make all the difference and fall in tune with your characters, feeling their emotions along with them.

I work mostly with romance, erotica, mystery, crime, paranormal, fantasy, historical fiction, suspense and thriller genres.
I look out for;

 •Plot structure and pacing
 •Character arcs and development
 •Factual errors and descriptions
 •Setting and worldbuilding
 •Tone, voice and point of view

I deliver in-line comments and suggestions with the use of Google docs/MS word software. I also deliver a fully comprehensive reader report detailing my honest and reliable feedback.

My rates are $1.1/1000 words. Contact me via jegedetemitope78@gmail.com to receive competent delivery on your manuscript


message 21: by Racheal (new)

Racheal Joy | 49 comments Wishing you a happy new month and fresh ideas for your book baby!

Still looking for a detailed beta reader and developmental editor? I'm Racheal and definitely happy to help.

If you want your manuscript to be handled with the best care, message me via jegedetemitope78@gmail.com. I would love to hear from you!


message 22: by Jasmine (new)

Jasmine Sandoval | 1 comments I was skeptical at first, but Racheal is the real deal. She beta read my manuscript, provided in-line comments and feedback and a summary of the chapters and feedback. She looked for character development and story gaps which helped me greatly. In addition, she is familiar with medical lingo and processes which makes her incredibly valuable to my medical suspense fiction MS. She provided feedback from a laymen perspective as well as provided additional thoughts how medical scenes can be elaborated to help the average person remain engaged (I am an RN by trade, so my fear was getting too technical in some of the action scenes). I am very happy with the outcome and have since added more to my scenes and will be utilizing Racheal to beta read again.

I hope that Racheal continues to do this for years to come, as I look forward to her insight for the future novels in my medical fiction series.


message 23: by Racheal (new)

Racheal Joy | 49 comments Hii everyone,

I'm Racheal and I'm here to be that fresh pair of eyes you require for your intellectual child. With plenty of experience under my belt from sleepless nights devouring my favorite novels and fictional works, I look out for details that can make all the difference and fall in tune with your characters, feeling their emotions along with them.

I work mostly with romance, erotica, mystery, crime, paranormal, fantasy, historical fiction, suspense and thriller genres.
I look out for;

 •Plot structure and pacing
 •Character arcs and development
 •Factual errors and descriptions
 •Setting and worldbuilding
 •Tone, voice and point of view

I deliver in-line comments and suggestions with the use of Google docs/MS word software. I also deliver a fully comprehensive reader report detailing my honest and reliable feedback.

Contact me via jegedetemitope78@gmail.com or click on the Fiverr link below to receive competent delivery on your manuscript

https://www.fiverr.com/s/Ldk4NNa


message 24: by Etim (new)

Etim Mary | 14 comments I'd love to beta read your book and give honest feedback.

Here is my email. etimmary8967@gmail.com


message 25: by Liz (new)

Liz (joycecarolnopes) | 529 comments Mod
Etim,

I believe you have this in the wrong folder. If you'd like to advertise your own services, please do so in a folder you have created, not somebody else's. If you'll notice, this is Racheal's folder where she advertises her services and clients who have worked with her have left reviews. Thanks,

Lisa


message 26: by Racheal (new)

Racheal Joy | 49 comments Thank you so much, Lisa! Etim, kindly delete your ad from my page.

Thank you


message 27: by Anna (new)

Anna Levenson | 24 comments Hi Racheal - I'm currently in the planning stages for a YA novel. Would you be interested in beta reading as I finish my chapters?


message 28: by Liz (new)

Liz (joycecarolnopes) | 529 comments Mod
Daniel and Evelyn,

This is a thread for Racheal to offer her services as well as client feedback. Please make sure to follow the rules, READ THE THREAD THAT YOU ARE IN, or leave.

Delete your comments, thank you.


message 29: by Racheal (last edited Jul 21, 2025 03:08AM) (new)

Racheal Joy | 49 comments Anna wrote: "Hi Racheal - I'm currently in the planning stages for a YA novel. Would you be interested in beta reading as I finish my chapters?"

Hello Anna, so sorry for the late reply. I spotted your message really late. I would love to work with you on your book. If you would still like to have a discussion, please send me a message via jegedetemitope78@gmail.com. I really hope to hear from you.


message 30: by Racheal (new)

Racheal Joy | 49 comments Liz wrote: "Daniel and Evelyn,

This is a thread for Racheal to offer her services as well as client feedback. Please make sure to follow the rules, READ THE THREAD THAT YOU ARE IN, or leave.

Delete your comm..."


Thank you so much for the lookout, Liz. Can't see why my page is a good place to do this.


message 31: by Racheal (last edited Jul 24, 2025 03:35AM) (new)

Racheal Joy | 49 comments As past clients have said, I "kindly but directly point out inconsistencies" and have a keen "attention to detail" - skills I've honed to help authors like you refine their manuscripts. Looking out for;

 •Plot structure and pacing
 •Character arcs and development
 •Factual errors and descriptions
 •Setting and worldbuilding
 •Tone, voice and point of view

I deliver in-line comments and suggestions with the use of Google docs/MS word software. I also deliver a fully comprehensive reader report detailing my honest and reliable feedback.

I'd love to discuss how I can help you strengthen your narrative and improve your writing.

Message me via jegedetemitope78@gmail.com or explore my Fiverr page using the link below:

https://www.fiverr.com/s/yv6Vv6Z


message 32: by Racheal (new)

Racheal Joy | 49 comments As past clients have said, I "kindly but directly point out inconsistencies" and have a keen "attention to detail" - skills I've honed to help authors like you refine their manuscripts. Looking out for;

 •Plot structure and pacing
 •Character arcs and development
 •Factual errors and descriptions
 •Setting and worldbuilding
 •Tone, voice and point of view

I deliver in-line comments and suggestions with the use of Google docs/MS word software. I also deliver a fully comprehensive reader report detailing my honest and reliable feedback.

I'd love to discuss how I can help you strengthen your narrative and improve your writing.

Message me via jegedetemitope78@gmail.com or explore my Fiverr page using the link below:

https://www.fiverr.com/s/1qpGl70


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