Looking for experienced comedy/crime beta reader

[Hilda]

I am looking for feedback on the first act of my novel - a hopefully funny-sad (with emphasis on the funny) crime fiction.

I am mostly interested in whether the story hooks and then holds the reader, and if you find it funny / interesting.

Blurb: Margo wants to forget about her disastrous personal life, such as her failed marriage and now errant, Californicating husband. She would rather draft patents on colon-gripping bristles reminiscent of the propellors on the bloody Titanic. In fact, that is exactly what she is going to do.

So, when during a seemingly random carjacking, her assailant blurts out the name of her husband's lover, Margo says nothing, burying this and any worrying implications.
Nothing to see here people!

It is not that she will never deal with this issue
- she will, but later (much later i.e. at some unspecified time in the distant future, preferably when someone has invented time travel and possibly invisible cloaking devices so that she can go backwards in time and discreetly fix everything so she never needs to deal with those issues in the first place. She has dropped enough hints with her clients.

But then a body is discovered and linked to the carjacking and soon the police and an army of amateur sleuths descend, unearthing and sharing clues - threatening to expose Margo what has so carefully locked away.
Margo must join the race and destroy the evidence.
Unfortunately so must the murderer leading to fireworks...
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[Blessing]

Hello!

You have a wicked blurb going on and I love love the mixture of comedy and crime as I am an avid reader of both genres. There's just this rush that comes along with reading crime!

I would really love to read about Margo, she sounds like such an interesting FMC! I would also love to work with you.

Please check out my website if you are interested (https://bibliobeastreads.wordpress.com/). You can also reach me at booktailor31@gmail.com. I look forward to hearing from you. Thank you.

[Fiza]

Hello!

Comedy/Crime fiction? Right up my alley, and Margo sounds like an interesting character to follow. I would love to offer my beta reading services for Margo's journey.

I'm an experienced beta reader/developmental editor with more than 3 years of experience and a 5-star rating. If you'd like to know more about my services and clients' testimonials please feel free to drop into my inbox at fizaabbas.562@gmail.com

I'll be looking forward to hearing from you. Hope you have a great day!

Fiza

[Cielo]

Hi!

This concept is very intriguing, I'd love to work with you. I have three years of experience as a beta reader. My rate is $1 per 1000 words and we can discuss a turnaround time that works for both of us, I have availability to deliver feedback in May.

You can check more info on what my service includes + testimonials from past clients on my service page: https://bellerosereads.wordpress.com/...

If you're interested in working with me, you can contact me at cielobellerose@gmail.com

Have a great day!

Cielo.

[Liz]

Hey S! Would love to chat more about this with you. I tried messaging you here on Goodreads but I think you may have that feature turned off. If you'd like to get in touch with me on this, my email is: bookwormlisa@gmail.com

Thanks and have a good one,

Lisa

[Mamta]

Hi,

I’d love to work with you. My email id is menonmamta02@gmail.com


Here is my link with testimonials:


https://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/...


Looking forward to hearing from you.

Regards,
Mamta

[Helen]

Hi SX,
I would like to beta read your manuscript. If you are interested in my services. Please contact me here https://www.fiverr.com/s/D4R9ea
Thanks,
Helen

[Emily]

Hi S,

If you are still looking for beta readers, I would be interested in working with you. Please feel free to check out my website for more information about me, my services, and testimonials. Proofreading And Editing | E. Gray Editing (egrayediting.com)

You can also contact me by email egrayediting@gmail.com.

I hope to hear from you soon,
Emily

[Dana]

Hello TK! I love working with and reading from authors who have a good sense of humor =) Your work sounds interesting and has a nice air of mystery.

I would like to present myself as an available beta reader. You can find all my info and some testimonials here!
http://prestoverse.blogspot.com/p/bet...

Reply/DM/email me if you're interested!

[Lana]

Hey,

I’m an experienced beta reader in exactly that genre and it is always my favorite genre to read!

If you’re interested in the services I have to offer, please email me at stillwritingforever@gmail.com.

I would love to read your work and give my feedback!

[Lana]

Hello, I'd be very interested in reading your manuscript. I am an experienced and affordable beta reader.

My feedback includes the following:
- Overall feedback on character/character dynamics, setting, plot, pacing etc.
- Detailed in-line comments on your text
- A "review" and a "rating" of your novel
- I will fix grammar and spelling mistakes as I come across them
- I will answer any questions you have about my feedback or any specific questions about your work
- I also have a quick turnaround rate

Please email me at stillwritingforever@gmail.com if you're interested!

[Oksana]

Hello TK,

I’d be totally interested in reading your manuscript and offering my feedback! You can check out my instagram here for details, or message me at neon48738@gmail.com.

I have very quick turnarounds, am flexible with the price, and I have many years experience in beta reading!

Oksana

[Haley]

Hi Tk,

I'd love to give your book a read! I have 9 years of experience as a beta and proof reader. My turn around is 5-10 days depending on the length of the piece.

I provide in-line feedback as well as an end report.

my webpage is-
haleysproofreadingandbetaservice.wordpress.com

please email haleybo@hotmail.co.uk if interested.

[David]

Hey, as a beta readeer I can provide you my honest feedback in characters, pace of the story, plot development and an overall impression. Keep in mind I would give you my honest opinion. Also my packages are pretty affordable for what they provide you with. I have a cheaper package that I'll read up to 25k words and It's just 20 dollars. My premium one, I'll read up to 100k words and it's just 65 dollars, what a bargain. We can always negotiate prices. I have a profile on Fiverr, where you can get to know me better and also see my reviews. I can also send you 2 of my works. In case you still have any doubt, you can email me: davidthompsonwriter@gmail.com or just add me on discord: davidthompson98 for more info.