Apple by R.A. Black - Starting April 17th 2015

[Sarah Elizabeth]

siobhan wrote: "11% i was excited skye was getting better but im annoyed he took his little sister with him when he left"

such a bad idea! he has no way to support her!

[Siobhan]

29% (view spoiler)[ that fight was a bit gross. glad they got away (hide spoiler)]

[Siobhan]

59% (view spoiler)[ i feel like slapping that doctor around the place he is so horrible to Apple. That nightmare was horrible poor Apple (hide spoiler)]

[Lia]

43% (plan to get this finished up today)(view spoiler)[some errors I have noticed in the writing, such as missing words like "the" and "a", etc. Apple is annoying, she screams too much and is a scared little girl. She's in the way and Skye would have made it without her. Also noticed in the previous chapters that Skye should not be hitting her so much - brother or not, he is 18 right, a man and she a 12 yr old girl. Still trying ti figure out the time period..maybe Victorian? Had to look up what a Trap was exactly, never heard that term for a carriage before. Find it odd that we are just getting a discription of Skye now, almost halfway in. We knew he was tall and dark haired, but just learning of his cornflower blue eyes and angular face halfway in. Edit to add - The doctor is right, Apple is a rude girl. Why go wandering through the house causing more trouble. Also, eww meat just sitting out in the open... and ohh locked box?? Does it contain his heart? LOL What kind of doctor is this....? (hide spoiler)]

[Sarah Elizabeth]

Lia wrote: "43% (plan to get this finished up today)[spoilers removed]"

(view spoiler)[ I kinda figured she was just so scared because she was so young. (hide spoiler)]

[Siobhan]

86% (view spoiler)[ i have a bad feeling about poor George :(. I really dont like how Apple is treated by anyone. (hide spoiler)]

[Siobhan]

100% (view spoiler)[ im crying. what a sad ending and i was not expecting it (hide spoiler)]

[Lia]

100% I have to digest and put some thought into my review. I'll leave that to tomorrow! Goodnight. :D

[Lia]

Writing my review this morning. There is something I am confused about..(view spoiler)[who's soul was trapped in the ring that George stepped on..and who's life was the doctor trying to save when he murdered his own children, or was he just experimenting on them and it went wrong? (hide spoiler)]

[Lia]

review done!
https://www.goodreads.com/review/show...

[Sarah Elizabeth]

Thanks Lia ☺

[Sarah Elizabeth]

Thanks Alex ☺

[Siobhan]

Lia wrote: "Writing my review this morning. There is something I am confused about..[spoilers removed]"
(view spoiler)[ i think it was georges soul in the ring which is why when it broke he started becoming himself. I have a feeling he was either just experimenting or trying to save his wife (hide spoiler)]

[Lia]

siobhan wrote: "Lia wrote: "Writing my review this morning. There is something I am confused about..[spoilers removed]"
[spoilers removed]"

Ok that makes sense. Thanks!

[Jamie]

Apple- Chapter 1:(view spoiler)[That is rotten luck on Skye's part. Get better and avoid death just to have to leave home...poor guy! (hide spoiler)]

[Sarah Elizabeth]

Jamie wrote: "Apple- Chapter 1:[spoilers removed]"

(view spoiler)[ It really was bad! (hide spoiler)]

[Jamie]

Chapter 2- (view spoiler)[What an imagination on the owls! (hide spoiler)]

[Jamie]

Lia wrote: "17% [spoilers removed]"

(view spoiler)[Not very responsible of him at all! (hide spoiler)]

[Jamie]

Chapter 3- (view spoiler)[Reminds me of Hansel and Gretel here. (hide spoiler)]

[Lia]

I thought that too!

Jamie wrote: "Chapter 3- [spoilers removed]"

[Jamie]

Sarah wrote: "43% [spoilers removed]"

(view spoiler)[Yes because telling a kid not to open something always works, doesn't. At least she believes not to for now. Even protecting it from others. (hide spoiler)]

[Sarah Elizabeth]

Jamie wrote: "Sarah wrote: "43% [spoilers removed]"

[spoilers removed]"

(view spoiler)[ telling anybody not to open something isn't going to go well! (hide spoiler)]

[Jamie]

Done (view spoiler)[The ending has me sad right now. I wanted them both to make it back home or even make it to the circus they talked about! (hide spoiler)]

Review: https://www.goodreads.com/review/show...

[Sarah Elizabeth]

Hi guys, we've reached the ultimate 12-week cut-off date for this book, so if Mpur, Rachel G., and Gigi could please let me know when they are likely to be able to read and review that would be much appreciated. You'll be unable to request another book from us until this one is completed. Thanks!