Looking for feedback on my first published book

[Kevin]

Hello all,

As a first time author I'm thrilled to have my first book out there for others to enjoy and would welcome any feedback. This has been quite the journey for me to take my writing, which I usually do just to relax and tap into a little creativity, and determine if my stories that I have are just therapeutic for me or if they can be enjoyed by a large audience. I have more complex stories to tell and feedback on this small sample (under 100 pages) will help determine if I should share my others with readers around the world.
Experience the range of human emotions on the journey of this fictional couple and share your honest opinion.