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One thing I liked was Hammad's use of dialogue in play form to get through some of the talkier chapters. I imagine not everyone enjoyed this, but I found it a creative solution to filling in background and information that the reader likely doesn't have, and just getting through a lot of material a bit faster.
I also found Sonia an effective narrator as she is insider enough to realistically move through all these areas, but outsider enough to ask questions on things the reader wants to know. A lot of reviews on here seem to have found her quite annoying, however, whereas I found her quite a neutral character.
I enjoyed this enough that I'm interested to read the Parisian now, despite running a mile when it came out (long-page-count historical fiction isn't usually my thing).




I know you say in your review that in both this and The Parisian you felt kept at a distance to the prose in some way. I also felt that distance. It wasn't an issue for me because I've learned writing reviews here that "chilly prose" is actually a compliment from me, but I could see it bothering people that she doesn't really sweep you up in the characters.

I know you say in your review that in both this and The Parisian you felt kept at a distance ..."
I felt like the 'chilly prose' really worked because, like Sonia, I am a bit politically ambivalent at the beginning of the story. She wasn't a champion or villain but a less interesting character who gets drawn into interesting situations political and philosophical.
I loved her conversations with Miriam who is the champion. Particularly their discussion about art as a tool of resistance vs art as anesthetizing catharsis.
Here is the quote from Chapter 9: '“risk that art might deaden resistance, by softening suffering’s blows through representing it…when you read a novel about the occupation and feel understood or watch a film and feel seen, your anger, which is like a wound, is dressed for a brief time and you can go on enduring, a bit more easily, and so time goes on… all of this means that in the end you… are less likely to fight the fight because despair has been relived, momentarily.”
I also just loved Hamlet and the feeling of getting a glimpse behind the scenes. I really enjoyed this one although, it doesn't compare to the sheer prose-magic that the three Irish authors put out.





I think this is a timely novel from a political perspective and I was interested in exploring the lives of 'Palestinians' who live 'inside'. Hammad apeared to be trying to explore several themes throughout the novel - but overall I found it a bit tedious to read.
If this one wins, I feel it would be more of a political statement from the judges than necessarily a vote for good novel writing.


That's a prize I was only vaguely aware of but I think it's a great prize to have, given how many authors have difficulties with second novel syndrome.
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I would have preferred to see Ordinary Human Feelings win / it’s now been listed for 4-5 prizes without winning any and I think m very suitable for the prize as it’s so different to the author’s debut.

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I would have preferred to see Ordinary Human Feelings win / it’s now been listed for 4-5 prizes without winning any and I think m very suitable for the pr..."
Well, I agree, I preferred Ordinary Human Failings.
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