unFocused (The Roving #1) by Roselyn Jewell - Starting April 10th 2015

[Sarah Elizabeth]

chapter 3 (view spoiler)[ so someone is randomly videoing people? (hide spoiler)]

[Sarah Elizabeth]

chapter 4 (view spoiler)[ well that would explain the pairings, if they're both gay. (hide spoiler)]

chapter 5 (view spoiler)[ her mentor seems a bit over-confident. arrogant maybe. (hide spoiler)]

chapter 6 (view spoiler)[ so the camera is there to perve on people. (hide spoiler)]

chapter 8 (view spoiler)[ well if he loves curtis he loves him, its not like she can change that! maybe she should meet curtis' partner! (hide spoiler)]

[Abi]

Sarah wrote: "chapter 4 [spoilers removed]

chapter 5 [spoilers removed]

chapter 6 [spoilers removed]

chapter 8 [spoilers removed]"

(view spoiler)[I didnt like her mentor either. (hide spoiler)]

[Sarah Elizabeth]

Abbie wrote: "Chapter 8 - [spoilers removed]"

(view spoiler)[ Ah! So liana is Curtis' coupling partner. (hide spoiler)]

[Sarah Elizabeth]

Abbie wrote: "Chapter 9 - [spoilers removed]"

It does work out well!

[Sarah Elizabeth]

The end (view spoiler)[ wow, a lot going on.

I'm surprised that Hilary and Liana ended up being a couple!

and her mentor was behind the who camera/lets bring down the government business? huh. (hide spoiler)]

[Ella]

I just started reading the book. I thought that the beginning was a little jumpy like Abbie said and needed to flow more and maybe a couple more transitions between ideas would make it great. Other than that i am very intrigued.

[Siobhan]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hmvHA... Theres my youtube review
goodreads review https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hmvHA...

I loved this :)
(view spoiler)[ i cant believe her mentor was behind it all and how can it end on a cliff hanger!!!! (hide spoiler)]

[Roselyn]

Thanks to everyone for their comments and reviews! :)

[netareads]

Sarah, I didn't get any book. Was I supposed to get an Email? If so could you or the author resend it? There wasn't anything in my spam folder either. Thanks!

[Sarah Elizabeth]

Okay, bear with me and I'll forward you the copy that I got ☺

[Sarah Elizabeth]

Sent ☺

[Faye]

Here's my review

https://www.goodreads.com/review/show...

[Ella]

Im almost finished.

and i am very intrigued i love the plot.

[netareads]

Just started reading and am currently at chapter 5. (view spoiler)[ This dystopian world with its system of chosing jobs and Partners for every citizen is interesting. I wonder what exactly happened that their world was destroyed. I pity Hilary - first not getting her dream job and then the worst choice of a Partner and then hoping for a fresh start and she immediately gets bullied. It must be so hard to be a lesbian in that society. I vote for her that she somehow will be able to find some happiness. I am curious to find out what will happen after she ran away from her job... (hide spoiler)]

[Sarah Elizabeth]

Runningkvinna wrote: "Just started reading and am currently at chapter 5. [spoilers removed]"

(view spoiler)[ the poor girl really does seem to be having a rough time. (hide spoiler)]

[netareads]

Chapter 8 - (view spoiler)[ I don't really get why she is so upset?! That is the ideal Situation - two gay couples. If Liana really is also gay and attracted to her they could also have a secret relationship and do the family thing as an alibi... (hide spoiler)]

[Sarah Elizabeth]

Runningkvinna wrote: "Chapter 8 - [spoilers removed]"

(view spoiler)[ that is a good plan! (hide spoiler)]

[netareads]

Chapter 12 - (view spoiler)[ Wow, didnt see that coming! What revelations! I wonder if everybody automatically got those compromising Videos on their tablets? Too bad for Hilary for not being able to continue with solving the case as planned now but I cant wait to find out what happens next...:-) (view spoiler)[ (hide spoiler)] (hide spoiler)]

[Jamie]

Abbie wrote: "Chapter 2 - [spoilers removed]"

(view spoiler)[I agree. Especially after the effort she put in. (hide spoiler)]

(view spoiler)[For the coupling, while I understand she ins't into guys, I would have at least tried to make friends with a couple just to be on the safe side since she doesn't have a choice in gender preference. AT least they could have been companiable this way. (hide spoiler)]

[Jamie]

Sarah wrote: "12%

(view spoiler)[Yea Mary was lucky. There should at least be an appeal for the jobs. (hide spoiler)]

[netareads]

The end - (view spoiler)[ What an ending! A Cliffhanger oh no! Too bad that it will take some time to find out how the story continues, what the policemen does with Hilary, if the propaganda works, if there will be an overthrow of power... It will be interesting to find out in book 2! (hide spoiler)]

[Hila]

didn't like the book. its kind of mix of the divergent series with the giver series. too much from the same style. and the part where homosexuality taking a part I didn't like. but its only me.

[Sarah Elizabeth]

That's fair enough, do you want to just copy your thoughts into a review on goodreads and then I can cross you off the list ☺

[Hila]

whatever you want.

[Hila]

thank you for the honor to read the book

[Sarah Elizabeth]

Not a problem Hila ☺ If you let me know when you've copied it into a review that would be great ☺

[Jamie]

Sarah wrote: "chapter 3 [spoilers removed]"

I agree!

[Hila]

copy it. you can earse it

[Jamie]

60% done (view spoiler)[Starting to feel like the homosexuality is the bigger focus and is taking away from the world building. Gotta give her coupling assignment credit form coming clean with her though. I wonder which career path she will have in the end.... (hide spoiler)]

[Jamie]

Done (view spoiler)[evil cliffy! had a funny feeling about him from early on. Guess I was right. (hide spoiler)]

review: https://www.goodreads.com/review/show...

[Sarah Elizabeth]

Hi guys, we've reached the ultimate 12-week cut-off point for this book, so if Rachel G., Hila, Jailen, Amanda, Charliy, and Ella could let me know when you'll be able to read and review that would be much appreciated. You'll be unable to request further review copies from us until this one is completed. Thanks ☺