Question Q

[Jonetta]

Are there any other observations you'd like to discuss? Your overall opinion of the story?

[Lauren]

The writing is good and well-paced although the conflicts are resolved very quickly with no real confrontation.

[Jonetta]

I was really enjoying the story a lot until the end when the plot collapsed for me. If it hadn't started with Lucy's investigation, I'd have been more understanding.

[Charlene]

For some reason, this book left me lukewarm at best. I hope future stories (if there are any) return to previous levels of writing, character or plot appeal.

[Jonetta]

There are seven more books in the series.

[Anita]

I liked it and look forward to reading the rest. The plot hole of Lucy not catching the breach at takemetonite.com was major. She should have caught that for sure. I liked the plot, even if the kidnapping thing got old, it was innovative and using beautiful dancers as egg donors was a great twist.