Extracts from a book in making (for comments)

[Bheesham]

In the era of 3020, you will not find a single invention that skips the fundamentals or damages nature by even a single percentile. A worldwide effective law governs our progress in science, states that any development not in line with nature will be stopped and banned forever.”
Daichi’s words were coming out of his strong beliefs, they were looking for a window through her mind to penetrate into her being.

Saki was in a different kind of silence, without any reaction. This could indicate the beginning of an understanding of meaning parceled by Daichi’s words or a complete loss.

“No doubt, science in your world has progressed at a pace never seen before by previous generations. The innovations in your world are so rapid that every single day brings something new in the space of technology.
However, you must not ignore the other side of the coin. Has anyone ever realized the negative impact these superficial inventions have on our health, minds, planet, animals, plants, ecosystem, society, and ultimately on our future?
How long can we survive on this earth with these progressing technologies, which are simultaneously destroying us?
You know the answer well, I believe.”
Daichi paused for few moments before he continue,

“I am not saying that people in your time don’t care at all, in fact they cannot see what is building up behind the curtains of superficial technologies.
Unfortunately, damage has already begun, and it appears to be unstoppable, we can find many examples, such as health problems, natural disasters, global warming, extinction of species, and even selfishness of people, which also is not less than a disaster.

Innovations in your era have no eyesight, as science without spirituality is blind.

Sometimes, I wish, if someone from the galaxy shouts to the entire world, “Stop this Stupidity!” to wake this whole world in a single moment.”
Daichi knows the art of communication very well, he was using his mastering abilities at optimum level to explain something that had never been told before.

Words flow like darts, hitting at the core of her being at the deepest level, suddenly awakening her from a deep sleep.
With this new pair of eyes, she can now see the whole of her world filled with only blinds.

[Dana]

I can visualize the premise - a world fixated on preserving the environment or living more harmoniously with nature, even to radical levels.

But I can't understand the characters at all here.
- Is Daichi a he or she? You switch pronouns within the character's first sentence, and then on the last paragraph when only Daichi was the last character mentioned.
- How is Saki related to the story?
- You use first person POV in 2nd to last paragraph, when all extracts suggest third.
-Opening and closing quotations seem to be missing throughout.

[Bheesham]

Thanks Dana for comments. Daichi is a boy.

I switch pronounces because it was about Saki who is a girl.

Quotation is missing in first paragraph but in others is given, but within quotations paragraphs are broken into small chunks for simplicity.

This book is about a new science i.e. cosmic science, which is integral part of world in 3020, where Daichi is also living.

And Saki is from year 2020, she time travelled to 3020 to get understanding of this new science, which is both natural loving and advance at the same time.

If you can read more I would love to share complete chapter.

Please if you can also comment on the concept, also would love to hear about my writing!

Thanks again for your very important attention. :)