Feel free to have a read and give me back on prologue of sci fi novel I am working on.

[jaii ♡ (selwyn's version ♡ )]

commenting here so i can come back and read this in 2 hrs!

[Michael]

jaii ♡ (selwyn's version ♡ ) wrote: "commenting here so i can come back and read this in 2 hrs!"

Hi, I hope I am commenting in the right place because I am not an expert.
I read your prologue and I like it.
I like the rhythm.
I like the strong words you use.
I like the believability of the atmosphere.
I like the feeling of the scene.
I like the style.
Since it is only a prologue, it is not clear what is going to happen, but it is fitting.
It is not very original, but I liked it a lot and would like to read more.

[Ginger]

I really enjoyed your prologue. I could feel his sense of urgency and fear. it is intriguing and makes me want to read more.