Alpha/beta swap for 1st chpt sci fi/fantasy romance

[S.M.]

I'm looking for an alpha reader for one chapter only, about 3500 words. Just reworked my chapter one and would like new eyes on it for perspective.

It's intended to be the first chapter in the first book of a 6 book series. I consider it new adult sci-fi/fantasy with romance.

Themes include coming of age, found family, superpowers, aliens, witches, magic, etc.

I don't have a blurb because they are hard to write but I have a couple of one-liners.

As his family's secrets unravel on his 18th birthday, David is swept up into a covert world of people on Earth fighting to keep hostile, alien-human invaders at bay.

David must reconcile the ghosts of his past to reunite his family and save his home world from alien takeover.

Would love to swap for similar length piece in Google docs. Comment or message if interested, please. Thanks.

[Louise]

Hi, I can help you read your chapter if you are interested. just send it to damgaard_112@hotmail.com

[S.M.]

thank you. I prefer to use Google docs as opposed to sending people my work directly. are you comfortable being added to a Google doc as a commenter?

[Louise]

sure, lets give it a try :)

[S.M.]

thanks. ill add you. I can read something of similar length for you if you like

[Louise]

that would be nice :) i have it in a word doc, so do you have an email i can send it to?

[S.M.]

yes you can send it to mimsse@yahoo.com