Feedback on first chapter needed

[Abdul]

I need feedback on the first chapter (2K) words of a middle grade kids book about a pair of twins who win a scholarship to the most luxurious school in the world and solve mysteries.
Txs

[Jan]

will take a look with pleasure. Used to teach middle grade.

[Abdul]

Paige wrote: "Hello Abdul!

I would be interested in giving you some feedback on your first chapter.

Send it in .PDF format if possible to bookreviewsbyP@gmail.com"
Sent! Thank you so much!