Beta Reader Group discussion
Critique Partners and Swaps
>
In need of CP for two ongoing progression fantasy web novels. Isekai/litRPG
date
newest »
newest »
Hi! I'm interested. I'd be interested in reading both or either, and I'd be okay with a long term thing. My story is a regular novel, though. It's genres are sci fi, fantasy, and YA.
Here's the blurb for mine. Eighteen-year-old Liana Diaz’s high school graduation ceremony is less than a day away. If she skips it, she’ll never get to speak to her best friend again. If she attends, she’ll be drafted into the military.
She hates the military. And her fragile, sickly body can’t handle the rigors of combat. The government doesn’t care. If she attends the ceremony, there’s only one thing they would care about: her history.
She’s spent her life painting. For that, they’d rather kill her.
Meanwhile, twenty-three-year-old Merek Shian’s father, the general, has fallen into a coma that no one can explain. As second-in-line, Merek has to step up.
But there are urges inside him that aren’t his own. They try to control him. And they’ve succeeded in the past.
He can preside over the upcoming graduation ceremony. He can determine who will be drafted into the military. After that, he needs to find a cure for his father.
And if one fragile, sickly girl has the magic he needs to do that? So be it.
You can email me at ariannaarguetty@gmail.com if you're interested
The Wandering Souls:
She believed her life held no true meaning. Living in the bodies of different beings from the Five Races every week was the only purpose she served. And she was ready to accept fate, however horrible it may approach.
That was until she died... And woke up yet again in another body.
Now thrown in jeopardy, the soul who called herself Vi questioned the whole purpose of her existence, and she was led to believe that this wasn't her life. That she might have had a past, an origin... A name. And she was going to find out who trapped her in this curse.
But the Five Realms was no easy world. Dangers and evil that threaten to destroy the world were always rising from each corner and hole out there, and only the person with immense knowledge of the whole Five Realms can try to save life from utter peril.
Follow a lost soul as she wanders from body to body, living different lives each week and meeting different people from all over the Five Realms, both friends, foes and those in-between and as she grows into becoming an all powerful being in order to find and destroy the evil Wandering Soul who trapped her in this never ending madness.
The journey of self-discovery has never been wilder.
And here is the second one
Gourmet Ascension:
[And, no matter how divine, man shall ever be succumbed to the whims of food]
The art of cooking requires the mind and soul of the cook. That's what Alcar Silver believed. And that was what made him the No. 1 chef in the whole world.
But not anymore.
With his sudden loss to a competitor, and his fall from his hard earned glory, Alcar resigned himself to his abyss of misery... Which didn't last a day, really.
Secluded in his hotel room, Alcar received a call from an unknown number, the caller claiming to be able to give him another chance in life. In another world, where he could be whoever he wanted to be and reclaim his lost glory. A [Knight], a [Templar], whatever class he wanted.
But Alcar didn't want any of that.
Seizing this chance, he decided he was going to be the greatest highest ranking [Cook].
But even that wasn't going to prove easy in this new world he found himself transmigrated to.
If you are interested in any of the two, please let me know and we will discuss how to go about things. These are ongoing books that I don't know how long they'll take (could be 300k+ words) so I am hoping for a long term relationship. Thank you!